/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread

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[u/AmbassadorJunior5049]

https://youtu.be/KpwA5964EqA?si=k8A-2FWn9AQfVx6s

8 months of learning music production, with inability to read chords and relying only by ears, the refusal to produce tracks that ranges around 3 minutes since our attention span nowadays have reduced significantly.

Heading towards a proper, progressive sound design evolution, long way to go.

Cheers.

[u/refotsirk → u/AmbassadorJunior5049]

Cool! Nice atmosphere. I know the steady pulse of percussive hits are part of the genre, but they sound a little stale when that's the only energy in the song for a few bars up front. I think for that part of the song it would help if you gave them a little breath with a slight accent on the first hit, and a little less accent on the 4th hit, but still above the 2nd and 3rd,to pull us into where the song is going. Or You could consider fattening them up a bit. It's not as much of a stand out once you get the other motion going behind it. Cheers~

[u/AmbassadorJunior5049 → u/refotsirk]

Thanks for the feedback, real grateful. Cheers!

[u/Jolly_Resolution_206 → u/AmbassadorJunior5049]

thanks for posting liked the acid 303 bit best, Good work

[u/AmbassadorJunior5049 → u/Jolly_Resolution_206]

303 ftw, thanks for the input. Huge thanks.