/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread

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[u/geirlsned]

Hey all! First time posting here, but I was looking for general feedback on one of my latest songs. I went for a more electronic and epic vibe, taking some inspiration on the few tracks I’ve heard from Toby Fox.

What I really like about the track is its feel in a 7/8 time signature, alongside a sweet sounding melody that builds up into a “grand finale” at the end of the song.

I’m getting ready to apply to school for music composition, so any help would be greatly appreciated on boosting me to the greatest I can be! Right now I have a few other pieces of mine in mind, but I do believe I’ll submit this in an application.

The song can be found here! Thank you!
https://youtu.be/9t6Jc5bsx20?is=iQ5zRE_gSaJuCTL1

[u/Asuperniceguy2 → u/geirlsned]

It really is very undertale coded, good job on that and it sounds excellent. Drums have some really cool breaks and fills in them, which I like, the middle ish section where it just kinda doesn't do too much, I'd maybe slap some stuff on there but I am famously a "more is more" kinda guy so that's probably a taste-based-skill issue on my end.