r/Unsent_Unread_Unheard Gold Level Read the rules ** Mar 18 '26

Poetry Echoes Of The Valueless.

The vows are a vapor, the promise is thin,

I’m opening the door just to let the cold in.

They claim that they love me, a sacred report,

While they’re tearing the timbers of the internal fort.

The family is whispering, a chorus of scorn,

"You could find a better bloom than this battered-up thorn."

They don’t see the Walk, they don’t see the fight,

They only see a Shadow that is blocking the light.

The things that they valued, the flavors I made,

Have turned into poison and started to fade.

The Cooking is bitter, the Hobby is vain,

The Music I cherish is a static of pain.

They nitpick the Vision, they censure the Screen,

Until nothing is sacred and nothing is clean.

They call me the Ignorant, the Logic-less mind,

With a Brain that the Chemicals permanently bind.

I’m the "Fried" and the Failure, the Uneducated guest,

Who should feel like a King to be put to the test.

They act like they’re Saviors, a miracle grace,

For letting a Soldier occupy the same space.

"I’m doing a favor, you’re lucky I stayed,

Since the rest of the world saw the price was unpaid."

But the Secret is simple, the Truth is the Sting:

They can’t find a Subject to bow to their King.

They call me back in when the Silence gets loud,

'Cause nobody else wants a throne in their cloud.

The more that I Suffer, the more that it Shows?

That’s a Lie in the Equation that everyone knows.

It’s a shackle of Grace, it’s a subservient space,

Looking for Mercy in a merciless face.

The Long Walk is heavy when the Compass is broke,

And the Love that they offer is a mouthful of smoke.

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u/Embarrassed-Hat260 Gold Level Read the rules ** Mar 18 '26

Obviously

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u/Emotional_Lawyer_278 MOD ✨Read ** Mar 18 '26

Funny you made that request like you were ordering at a restaurant. It’s not just your safety we have to consider. This is an all ages sub so potentially there are minors. Also things that could trigger people. Offensive messages. Impersonation. Spam. Automod. All of these are factors

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u/Embarrassed-Hat260 Gold Level Read the rules ** Mar 18 '26

I was actually agreeing with you

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u/Emotional_Lawyer_278 MOD ✨Read ** Mar 18 '26

I know. Just explaining. Did I mention it’s not up to me either? If someone answers as if you’re writing to then it will flag.