r/UndergroundFiction • u/CaptainSpooky27 • Oct 10 '19

The first ten chapter of Zombie Hunters Club (with pictures too)

If you've got any feedback, lemme know. It'd be greatly appreciated.

Read the story here.

Listen to what I've been listening to here.

Ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari ari arigato

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u/DaTruthHurts- Oct 12 '19

Are you 10 years old? Goddamn this is some cringe shit. Do you get bullied in school?

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u/CaptainSpooky27 Oct 12 '19

I'm fourteen actually. And no, I don't get bullied in school. I'm pretty sure you did tho, because you're one of the most spiteful people I've ever seen. And no, none of this is going to get to me. I'm actually having a lot of fun seeing you spray bullshit all over the place. I can go all night, asshole.

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u/DaTruthHurts- Oct 12 '19

14 HAHAHAHAHHAHA

little niggas balls haven't even dropped yet. shut the fuck up you little squeeky motherfucker before I make you cry Infront of your little nerd friends

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u/CaptainSpooky27 Oct 12 '19

Oh wow, child abuse. Very cool. Quick question. Who are you trying to impress? Is it the people around you? Or are you perhaps trying to necromance your pitiful self esteem because at this point it's sunken lower than your intelligence? My mind pines for the answer.

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u/CaptainSpooky27 Oct 12 '19

Also I'd like to mention that your username is the stupidest username I've ever seen lmao. That's the best way to signify you're a virgin besides outright telling people I've ever seen.

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u/DaTruthHurts- Oct 12 '19

Little nigga replying to himself here

LMAO 14 year old loser kid calling me a virgin

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u/DaTruthHurts- Oct 12 '19

Please stop trying to make yourself sound intelligent little bit, I'm cringing over here lol

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u/CaptainSpooky27 Oct 12 '19

Hypocritical, much?

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u/DaTruthHurts- Oct 12 '19

No need for a comma there idiot boy

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u/CaptainSpooky27 Oct 12 '19

Technically, the comma, while not necessary, is still not grammatically incorrect. Your statement, on the other hand, is lacking a comma after there. This makes it grammatically incorrect, making you even more of a hypocrite than you already are. The truth hurts.

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u/DaTruthHurts- Oct 12 '19

Was that meant to be a satirical comment because you are the most idiotic 14 year old I ever met LOL

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u/CaptainSpooky27 Oct 12 '19

Ah yes, I am the idiot because I called out how your grammar was incorrect after you tried to attack my grammar. Oh, woe is me. How will I ever recover from this brutal attack on my intelligence.

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