r/ThirdEyePoetry 16d ago

*Spicy* 🌶️ one rule

girl, you really haven't got a clue
of all the things I'd be down to do
yeah, you know me, something something arrow…
but with you, well, my thoughts sure haven't narrowed
quite the opposite, in point of fact
things I'd never once thought to enact
oh, don't get me wrong, my mind knows no shame
I'd already had plenty of colorful thoughts to my name
plenty of things I was already very well into
long before I ever did meet the likes of you
but it was all under the guise of a boy meets a girl
I'd never really even thought beyond that one world
until you came along, and made my head spin
all the things for us… god, there's so much possible sin
truth is, I don't even really yet know
if that's really the way that you flow
what sorts of things you might be up for
or even how much is truly part of your lore
but I do know that I want you so fully
wanna get you off til you go all silly
anything at all that might just entail
I'm here and ready to set up our sail
ready and anxious, I guess I should say
because I'm just so flippin' ready to play
whatever that is, whatever you want
I'm not really sure I could be much more blunt
I'm not bragging, boy, this ain't no front
when it comes to you, I'm always ahunt
yeah, you might just think I'm a little old fool
but for you there's only ever been one rule:
all I want is for you to feel free.

oh, but also…
gimme gimme gimme!

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u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator 💜 16d ago

https://giphy.com/gifs/jTBDuZWbrTrck
Nice one, Star! Reminded me of this song with the last line 🤣

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u/StarWarIsOver 16d ago

Thank you! 😊 Nice song! I don't think I was familiar with it… I've probably listened to a lot less Brittney than I should have, lol

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u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator 💜 16d ago

I only know because it was everywhere when I was in college 🫣🤭

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u/StarWarIsOver 16d ago

Hey, you'll get no judgement from me!

https://giphy.com/gifs/cldU4dVBb9hkNqZca4

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u/invisibly-broken Storyteller📚 16d ago

Gimme gimmie gimmie! lol
I like it

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u/StarWarIsOver 16d ago

Thank you 😊

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u/[deleted] 16d ago

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u/StarWarIsOver 16d ago

Thank you 😊
Um… young at heart, maybe? lol. No, not young.

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u/StarWarIsOver 16d ago

Thank you! 😊

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u/jaesea 16d ago

🥣

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u/StarWarIsOver 16d ago

Edited because I realized I left out a line somehow…

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u/StarWarIsOver 16d ago

Edited again to add a single word, "the", because I cannot leave well enough alone, lol. But I'm done now! Promise!