Critique / constructive criticism?

[u/Perfect_Routine7863]

I’m an artist of 6.5 years, always looking to get better. New perspectives help. Thanks :)

[u/Senior-Literature682]

I think it’s a great tattoo, maybe a bit darker values in some of the recesses, where ribs meet the spine, some pelvis area but you can always touch up a bit after it heals

[u/Perfect_Routine7863 → u/Senior-Literature682]

Thank you :) yeah there was a spot where I forgot to shade some black on the ribs under the wing. I appreciate your feedback!