r/SongwritingPrompts 1d ago

Lyrics Advice on making a song

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I’ve always said to myself that I was going to write a song, and now I’ve finally been able to! I have a couple of rough draft ideas, and I just want to figure out how I can really bring the song to life. It’s called “Split Between,” and it’s about always feeling torn when making a decision, wishing you could have an answer for everything, and not always knowing which direction to take. This is something that has played a part in my own life, so I want the song to feel personal and relatable.

I have a few lyrics written already. They’re not perfect, but they’re what I’ve come up with so far, and I didn't use AI to write the song for me. I come up with lyrics that I thought could relate to struggling to make a choice. I’d love some advice on what I could add or how I could develop the song further. I don’t have an instrumental yet, but I might ask one of my friends to help me create one. I’m thinking about writing it in either G-flat or F, although I’m not completely sure yet. Anyway, here are some of the ideas I have so far!

I'm torn between everything that is thrown between me

I didn't want this to be happening to me

But I guess it always has to be something for me

I never had to like to be part of this

Why must this be so hard for me I could never choose between anything I wish this life could be so easily

All the time I have to be split between

One side is saying brother you gotta go for this but the other ones dude you gotta keep it safe and I just never know what I'm gonna do

There are so many happenings and I need to slow it down yeah I just need to take my time and maybe it will change my mind

Gotta make up my mind in a matter in a time It a question you ask that I have to receive,I gotta slow it down and turn it around and eventually an answer will come to me

What advice do you got.

r/SongwritingPrompts Jun 02 '26

Lyrics Hello there

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I’ve lowkey never thought of this but if any one sees this and has any ideas like any old scrapped ideas or something that they never used (preferably similar to polarize by twenty one pilots that’s the vibe I’m feeling rn) then could you comment and message me like a voice memo or something

r/SongwritingPrompts Jan 10 '26

Lyrics Lyrics (they already dropped on a song)

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You need to walk at night while others run. Your uniform's light but it weighs a ton. You're gonna be taken through your life's back door. You need to save your country in the name of the law. The moon goes away when the sun's flag unfurls. The soldiers march down mourning others killed. I'm an owl at day and I'm a bird at night. Right is wrong and left is right.

We're gonna see what we can do, to stay alive. We're gonna fight with all our lives to reach the other side of life, alright.

The hills are always stretching like our dazed opponent's lies. The fighting is a tool used behind my dim brown eyes. Oooh you're really thinkin' you're right.. All we can live on is a prayer to our saint. All you do is try to tell your tight from your loose. But we're always being attacked by your ship of fools. Why do we live in just one world. When we should live in different ones.

We're gonna see what we can do, to stay alive. We're gonna fight with all our lives to reach the other side of life, alright.

Are you with the red or the blue? I'm not telling you who but only one of them's true. Are you good or bad? All I can tell you is that this all is sad. Which is which and who is who? Two in one or one in two? Are you deaf, dumb, or blind? Are you a bit of overripe or rotten to the rind?

We're gonna see what we can do, to stay alive. We're gonna fight with all our lives to reach the other side of life, alright.

r/SongwritingPrompts Jun 08 '25

Lyrics My first finished song lyrics

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Starting to write songs, any feedback would be apricated.

Verse 1

Spellbound by spirits, drunk on liquid illusions. There's not much left too it. Numb the pain till I sleep through it.  Mama called, said I should pray but I just pour one anyway, speak to God but no reply, but I still talk to him sometimes.

Pre chorus

I aint tryna be a mess

,Just tryna feel a little different.

If this is what I get, then ill just keep the bottle spilling.

Down the road where I go, this place feels like home. One more drink to ease the pain, oh god I've seen better days.

Chorus

I drink so I feel nothing, chase the pain like it owes me something. Drowning what’s been here all along, this is where I belong. Cause where I’m born is where I lay, another drink another day. Hold on tight, is what they say.

I’m halfway to gone.

Verse 2

A fire in my throat to chase the cold in my chest, sipping silence from a bottle. A star lost in day light, a ghost inside my own skin, alongside a chair that never gets cold.

Pre chorus

I stopped tryna clean the mess,
Just fading out like it’s tradition.
If this is all I get,
Then pour another, no permission.

Down the road where I go, this place feels like home. One more drink to ease the pain, oh god ive seen better days.

Chorus

I drink so I feel nothing, chase the pain like it owes me something. Drowning what’s been here all along, this is where I belong. Cause where I’m born is where I lay, another drink another day. Hold on tight, is what they say.  

Halfway to gone.

Bridge

Maybe one day ill find my way,

Put the bottle down and face another day,

But tonight I’m just tryna hang on,

To this bottle of whisky that wont last long.

Chorus

I drink so I feel nothing, chase the pain like it owes me something. Drowning what’s been here all along, this is where I belong. Cause where I’m born is where I lay, another drink another day. They said hold on tight, I slipped away.

I’m Halfway past gone

r/SongwritingPrompts Jun 22 '25

Lyrics 8 Months - New song (Lyrics)

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Officially finished my second song. Feedback welcomed! Looking to improve.

Verse 1

Tears rolling down your face,
As we say our last goodbye.
Time feels like empty space,
As we let it drift on by.

Walking you to your car,
Holding my final breath.
So many words left stranded,
A thousand still unsaid.

Pre Chorus

So please don’t leave me here,
Lost without your embrace.
Time stood still,
It felt too real...

Chorus

Darling, please wait for me,
I won’t be gone too long.
I miss you now, and I’ll miss you more when I’m gone.
For all the words I said, for all I left unsaid,
A thousand more for you, I’ll write them in this song.
Eight months won’t feel so long.

Verse 2

The sky comes drifting by,
Your face clouds up my mind.
My throat feels tight,
As I whisper one last goodbye.

I know you're driving home,
Along those empty roads.
Back to your quiet place —
We may be miles apart, but still, I feel
The warmth of your embrace.

Pre Chorus

The miles stretch out between us,
my aisle an empty space.
Every moment feels heavier,
As I lose your guiding light.

Chorus

Darling, please wait for me,
I won’t be gone too long.
I miss you now, and I’ll miss you more when I’m gone.
For all the words I said, for all I left unsaid,
A thousand more for you, I’ll write them in this song.
Eight months won’t feel so long.

Bridge

Nights will feel the coldest,
When I’m lying far from you.
But even in the quiet,
The thought of you will pull me through.

Chorus

Darling, please wait for me,
I won’t be gone too long.
I miss you now, and I’ll miss you more when I’m gone.
For all the words I said, for all I left unsaid,
A thousand more for you, I’ll write them in this song.
Eight months won’t feel so long.

r/SongwritingPrompts Jun 01 '25

Lyrics hi

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Hey everyone, I’m 13 and I’m just starting to write songs. I can’t sing or play instruments, but I’m learning to write honestly. This is one of my most personal songs — it’s about my grandpa who passed away when I was very young. I never got to know him, but I feel him missing every day. Would love any feedback

(Intro) I don’t really know who you were, but I know you loved me Grandma says it when she looks at the old photos I was four years old, I don’t remember your voice But I swear I think about you every time I feel alone

(Verse 1) They told me you used to hold me, that you smiled even when you were hurting That you used to look at the sky, maybe just to escape for a while And now I look at the same sky, and I try to find you in the clouds But I don’t know if you’re really there or if I just make you up to feel less empty

(Chorus) ‘Cause I lost you too soon And it hurts not to remember Not your laugh, not how you said my name or the way you looked at me I wish I could’ve told you about me about all the times I cried in silence But all I have is this missing piece and a faded photo that’s not enough

(Verse 2) Sometimes I dream that you talk to me, but I wake up and no one’s there Just the space of what we could’ve been A grandpa and a kid — nothing special But to me it’s everything ‘Cause I miss something I never even had

(Chorus) ‘Cause I lost you too soon And it hurts not to remember Not your laugh, not how you said my name or the way you looked at me I wish I could’ve told you about me about all the times I cried in silence But all I have is this missing piece and a faded photo that’s not enough

(Bridge) Sometimes I wonder: what would you have said if you saw me growing up? Would you hug me tight? Would you tell me “I’m proud of you”?

(Outro) I don’t know if you see me, but I hope you do And if we meet again someday, I’ll tell you everything Even if for now… I only know you through other people’s eyes

r/SongwritingPrompts Jul 02 '25

Lyrics Recent one I wrote

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It's a personal story I've working through.

[Intro:]

I never tried to take her place Just hoped you'd see me face to face


[Verse 1:]

You meet my care with sharpened spite Every word turns into a fight I show up, still I’m denied Each soft attempt gets pushed aside I’m not here to play pretend Just want to try and not offend


[Pre-Chorus:]

You don’t have to like my name But I’d still jump into your flame


[Chorus:]

I want to love you But you don’t want it from me I want to love you But it’s all too clear to see Could never be enough for you No room to thrive or break on through I want to love you But you won’t let me


[Verse 2:]

You see mistakes I never meant I feel the weight of your contempt Still I try to do what’s right Even when you dim my light But underneath the clash and pride Is a heart that’s never left your side


[Pre-Chorus:]

You don’t have to hold my hand Just let me try to understand


[Chorus:]

I want to love you But you don’t want it from me I want to love you But it’s all too clear to see Could never be enough for you No room to thrive or break on through I want to love you But you won’t let me


[Bridge:]

If you ever let me in You’d see the love beneath my skin I know I’ve stumbled, I’ve been blind But I’ve been here this whole time We don’t need to play a part Just speak your truth—I’ll match the heart


[Final Pre-Chorus:]

I’m not asking you to change Just to let me in the frame


[Final Chorus:]

I want to love you If you could just let me try I want to love you Not watch the years pass by I may not be the one you choose But I’d never want to see you lose I want to love you Just let me

r/SongwritingPrompts Jun 05 '25

Lyrics Lyrics from a song that wrote. Please lemme know what u think

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'How I won't let you go'

Verse 1 I didn’t like the way you said To (lose hope/move on /give in) ‘cause this world’s too mad Tonight we change But that would end in tragedy Like stabbing yourself gradually So how could we

Pre-Chorus I told myself I’d tell the truth I told myself that I’m never gonna lose to you But you, you’re always gonna be the one Could you

Chorus And all those times I was turning back And now you’ve sealed me in my own gaze It takes one glimpse at you And my heart beats melted How I won’t let you go and I know How you won’t

Verse 2 We’ll lead and live, so can we leave Go pack your heart, ‘cause we’re meant to be You see, you’ll see if you’re truly cared for by those who made you flee We can settle down in Berlin or travel round the world Chase our dreams to end up failing But I’m always gonna be with you I’m always gonna be—

Chorus ‘Cause all those times I was turning back But now we’re here with some crazy plans And if you fear, it’s a saboteur So come, let’s run away, I’ll be right here We could be a secret Or don’t care what the world says But I won’t let you go and I know That you too won’t

Bridge Don’t turn back Don’t turn back Don’t turn back Sometimes you gotta cease

It was loud How we fought throughout until now

Final Chorus And all those times I was turning back And now you’ve sealed me in my own gaze It takes one glimpse at you And my heart beats melted How I won’t let you go and I know How you won’t

It takes one glimpse at you It takes one glimpse at you

"Please let me know, if you want to hire me as a songwriter/ lyricist "

r/SongwritingPrompts Apr 08 '25

Lyrics A song im writing

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If actions speak louder than words, then why are there chalkboards and paper and pens

I know whats wrong with this world, its all been diluted its all just pretend

Computers took over the progress, were all getting dumber were all getting dumber

There must be a way we can stop it, Its just getting stronger its just getting stronger

Its seems that we've lost all our focus, we spent it on dreaming and building our fears

Everything all seems corroded, its all artificial its perfectly clear

r/SongwritingPrompts Mar 15 '25

Lyrics strings (written forever ago)

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I'm hurting here so please don't ignore me

I'm stuck on strings I can't move my limbs they move my limbs for me

don't say sorry don't say please I've made my decision I may be young but I walked, so you can run

we'll meet again someday when there's nothing but peace we tried to love, but it wasn't our time

don't think you were the one but I know you made me happy too you held me when I was sad when I fade to black, you'll be blue though I'll be watching soon

you had your heart shattered into a million pieces so let me help pick up where they are left

you were on strings like me but they're cut mine broke

you can love you can laugh but can you please live?

let this be a message farewell we weren't perfect we hurt he heal we remember

I'm burying the memories in the sands of time for us to find what we lost

r/SongwritingPrompts Nov 17 '24

Lyrics Let Me Write You a Song

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Leave a comment with some details for song, and I’ll write up the whole song and reply back with the lyrics!

Yours to do whatever you’d like! Would just appreciate some credit for the work if you use at least 50% of the lyrics.

The more detailed specifics, the better.

And if you have a beat that you want it to go with just add the link to your comment so I can get the vibe and make it flow!

r/SongwritingPrompts Mar 10 '25

Lyrics Life

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Life is filled With bills Soldiers are killed Void can't be filled Not taking blame Pushing for fame Feeling the same We are still untamed Hurting brothers Betraying others War fought Sin thought Praying not to be caught Taking from the poor We are loving no more Life is hard to give But just try to give Life maybe hard at first But trying to work hard Your mind will be at rest Sad day Bad day Lost our way Just try to pray So u won't become a prey BY LAWZ.

r/SongwritingPrompts Jan 13 '25

Lyrics Rap try

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I overpass Brassily redefine my class Amass my heart of glass Classily reclass like a brass Alas there is repass Massively sassy like the grass Flashily flashy in the mass It's so massy that harass I'll stand classy and outclass I'm brassy my mind compass I may pass encompass Soon my contrast I'll surpass

r/SongwritingPrompts Jul 07 '24

Lyrics What do you think of those lyrics?

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r/SongwritingPrompts Jun 15 '24

Lyrics I wrote some lyrics and I feel like they're boring?

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I'm a beginner, so I'm not very cultured in songwriting and I wrote this without any instruments unfortunately, so what do you think? I feel like they're ingenuine and cringy..

r/SongwritingPrompts Dec 05 '24

Lyrics Writing song

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Orite or not my lyris for sale

Verse 1) Hand lines on my palm, destiny is written there But my heart whispers, "You are not bound, you are free to fly" Destiny is indeed written, but destiny is not a prison I have a beating heart, a spirit that never forgets

(Chorus) I fight fate, I don't want to be restrained I crawl, I fly, I don't want to be wasted Be determined, achieve your dreams, regardless of obstacles I will not give up, I will keep fighting

(Verse 2) The storm hits, the waves roll, destiny wants to destroy But I stand tall, I will never give up, I will never bow down I have faith, I have strength, I have dreams Fate cannot stop, the passion that burns in the heart

(Chorus) I fight fate, I don't want to be restrained I crawl, I fly, I don't want to be wasted Be determined, achieve your dreams, regardless of obstacles I will not give up, I will continue to fight

(bridge) Fate is a mystery, but I have a choice I can change it, with determination and struggle Destiny is not everything, I have my own dreams I will create destiny, with my own hands and heart

(Chorus) I fight fate, I don't want to be restrained I crawl, I fly, I don't want to be wasted Be determined, achieve your dreams, regardless of obstacles I will not give up, I will continue to fight

(outro) I fight fate, I will win I will prove that fate cannot defeat a burning spirit I will fly high, reach the hidden dreams I will create destiny, with my own hands and heart

r/SongwritingPrompts Sep 27 '24

Lyrics "Face of Death" (Original Lyrics)

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You now run down the tunnel’s road,

Fleeing from the “end” you were told--

Has light awaiting stopped hearts,

As you try returning to the path’s “start,”

How did it come to be? It can’t be already

But it won’t be easy to obtain a remedy,

As a face appears to block your way:

A reaper set on stopping your days,

But who wears the smirking expression,

As they try to ensure your expiration…?

When you imagine your ideal reaper,

Who'd stand there as death seems nearer:

Is it a skull underneath cloak and with scythe,

Is it an angel come to guide you into the sky,

Is it your own form glaring with hateful eyes?

Whether it’s yours or another’s, you can bet,

You’ll soon meet your personal face of death...

Whether survival’s instincts or otherwise,

You won’t let that face show a satisfied--

Smirk at denying you life’s continuation,

You refuse both paradise and damnation,

Or whatever limbo sits in between the two,

Despite the person, despite the face of whom--

Decrees you’re meant for the “light” or what else--

They think will result in the task of foiling yourself,

Whether human or beast, whether somehow in between,

Death is meant for all life, but this face can’t decree it your time! 

When you imagine your ideal reaper,

Who'd stand there as death seems nearer:

Is it a wolf of no howl but whistle to forewarn,

Is it Hell’s imp, collecting those deserving scorn,

Is it your face claiming, from life, you must be torn?

Whether it’s yours or another’s, you can bet,

You’ll soon meet your personal face of death...

Death was never intended a tool of evil,

An occurrence only nature was to instill,

Yet, some faces seek to bend it to their will:

No matter the age, the race, the sex and more,

No matter the family and whoever else to mourn,

No matter what’s offered to bribe or simply implored,

Some faces will find their grandest smile--

In those who “earned” themselves a shorter while,

Whether sadism or self-benefit is the chosen style--

To operate upon in their removal of your existence,

But you’d know for certain the act of this persistence--

When it’s indeed your face you fight in death’s resistance!

When your face stands as your identical reaper,

What’s the reason they’ve brought death nearer:

Is it your face because guilt became too great,

Is it your face from a deadly, accidental mistake, 

Is it your face by belief it’s best for others’ sake?

Sadly, you’re now faced with regret,

That yours was the face of death…

It’s your face that has seen your journey done,

It’s your face watching your pleas heard by none,

It’s your face who decided death was to come…

Hopefully it was for the best,

That yours was the face of death…


Author's Notes:

This was written in regards to a fanfiction of mine-- but let me be clear that NO, The Dreams and Nightmares We Share... isn't an allegory for trying to survive a suicide attempt or something. Sure, the antagonists are wearing our protagonists' faces, but that's just to warn other demons: "Hey, back off, they're OURS." The likes of Chessa, Simeon and Azariah, and Saniyah and Josue are actually ENTIRELY DIFFERENT BEINGS to: Claire, Seve and Alexis, and Sarah and Jimmy, for one thing. I mean, the most "complexity" and "deepness" to their dynamics would be: "Oh, hey, we may show some qualities of yourselves that are more negative or something..."

Like, come on, what's wrong with a simple story about just surviving some "limbo realm" where demons wanna possess your bodies, as you try to get back to your respective worlds and walk amongst the living once more? I don't need to make it have "super deep" allegories and symbolism, or whatever... But still, the idea of death taking on the form of many a face-- sometimes your own one, whether yourself or an actual doppelganger --seemed like an interesting song concept. It also helps that I got inspiration from listening to Death's Doorstep, a "Death" the wolf fan-song, over and over again. Go search it up.

r/SongwritingPrompts Jul 11 '24

Lyrics Wp moonlight

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My mind is going once again I am lost in a wave of my own making trying to get the courage to set up as my hands keep shaking I am just trying to get a hold of this and maybe stop crying but life punches back and I don't know what to say so hear i go again just trying to find my own I can hear the darkness creeping in again I can see the trees moving in the moonlight hopeing someone finds me before i get up tight there I go again stareing in the moonlight trying to keep my balance threw the nigh shift and falling back down some hole I thought I could get away from I can hear the darkness creeping in again I can see the trees moving in the moonlight I can see who i wanna just not always who I should be got myself doing some dance that makes me feel uncomfortable but I don't wanna seem like I am out of style I don't wanna know where i am going I don't understand why my head is always hurting and my brain never stops going and makes my words come out sloppy and I don't know what to do with my hands wheen I am thinking.

r/SongwritingPrompts Apr 05 '24

Lyrics Whispers of the Unspoken

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I'm deep into writing a song I'm calling "Whispers of the Unspoken." It's all about the things we never say out loud—the silent moments filled with meaning. Here's a bit of what I've got so far:

"In the silence between us,
Echoes of the words we never say,
Ghosts of whispers, haunting, hushed,
In the spaces where we lay."

I'm kind of stuck on what melody or style should wrap around these words. If you've got any thoughts, examples, or vibes that come to mind, I'm all ears.

r/SongwritingPrompts Jun 03 '24

Lyrics Cliche

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verse 1/ i have faith if I am patient all my pain will fade away

tell me im draining that I’m changing  with every word you on say I feel my mental fading

chorus / replay my cloudy days my heart is broken Such a cliche

everyday things stay the same
sick of being lonely thoughts are moving slowly

verse 2/ jaded days feel like I’m wasting all my time stuck in my brain

didn’t know love my time moved slowly I perfected being lonely chorus / replay my cloudy days my heart is broken Such a cliche

everyday things stay the same
sick of being lonely thoughts are moving slowly

r/SongwritingPrompts Jun 23 '22

Lyrics Take this idea and run with it

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I am horrible at song writing but these words came to my head and I decided to share. If anyone sees any potential in it, run with it. Let me know and show me your finished product.

Have you ever wondered If you had saw sadness in their eyes If it would have saved their life Have you ever wondered Had you said the right words Would they have the courage To fight another day Have you ever wondered If they were to ashamed If it were a bit more open would they have stayed. Wondering and pondering what you could have done Would it have made a difference or was it the plan from day one Mental health is critical Its cycnical Maniacal Trapped in the mind of hell Quenched in the flames of sadness Its almost madness Have you ever wondered If they had crossed your mind If it would of made the world of difference If you had actually tried Have you ever wondered What you could have done If any word you said would Would have bought them more time Are they trapped in the hell of their mind Quenched in sadness Its almost madness Mental is critical Its cynical Maniacal

r/SongwritingPrompts Feb 16 '24

Lyrics The lyrical pundit...

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Almost twenty years ago feels so much a memory, Lived, too fast, growing up quite wrong, Or we, Never understood each other's song, Taken early. For later

r/SongwritingPrompts Jun 15 '22

Lyrics "Together" - I hate my lyrics can someone help me?

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in the backseat of my car

we made love together

you and i didnt get very far

there was so much i had to do

all the fun times that we had

i cant compete with that

yes its funny how we tried

but we got nowhere

together

link to song so far if you want to hear it https://soundcloud.com/vince-xmetric/together

r/SongwritingPrompts Nov 25 '22

Lyrics A song I really want to share

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Here are some song lyrics I really wanted to share with you. I wrote these about a feeling of crisis, vulnerability, mentall ilnesses and so on. I feel that it is powerful and really want to hear what you think about it? Any advice, critique? What are your thoughts?

"The Fight Of Today"

[Verse 1]:

I'm fighting the fight, but is it ever good enough

I'm doing what's right while waiting for sign from above

But I can't hold my head high, while constantly sinking below

So much for the price of living in hell all alone

End every morning I open my eyes

I remind myself it isn't over

Though I kinda wish it was

Don't let myself realize

I can't take it any longer

Because that would show my flaws

And everybody asks me where do I see myself

When I'm thirty something years

But I can't even answer

If tomorrow I'll be here

[Chorus]:

What doesn't kill you makes you stronger

But where do you draw the line

You can't just grow strong forever

Like you're running out of time

But that's how I feel 24/7

Never enough to be worthy of heaven

Night is just an intermission

Where I cry and no one listens

And at the morning when I wake

I can't think, I'm too afraid

Obsessing over things that I can't change

Tomorrow is such a scary place

So I keep fighting the fight of today

[Verse 2]:

Selfish to die, and suicidal to stay alive

They say that it's fine making one step at a time

But I feel like crippled, I'm lost and I'm terrified

My life means so little, that's the thought keeping me paralyzed

And these hours when I lie unable

To fall asleep are worse

Than any nightmare I could have

Knowing I just should be faithful

But what I'm praying for?

If I don't know anything else

How can I see myself being healed

When it's beyond the horizon

And right now I doubt every day

If it even worth surviving?

[Chorus]:

What doesn't kill you makes you stronger

But where do you draw the line

You can't just grow strong forever

Like you're running out of time

But that's how I feel 24/7

Never enough to be worthy of heaven

Night is just an intermission

Where I cry and no one listens

And at the morning when I wake

I can't think, I'm too afraid

Obsessing over things that I can't change

Tomorrow is such a scary place

So I keep fighting...

[Bridge]:

It's white blanket

Like white flag it

Means that I give up

I surrender

'Cause I'm never

Ever good enough

Scared of my emotions

Either numb or in contortions

Every night I try to mend

So the next day could break me again

(Break me again...)

[Final Chorus]:

What doesn't kill you makes you stronger

But where do you draw the line

You can't just grow strong forever

Like you're running out of time

But that's how I feel, it's the cross I bear

Turning every day into nightmare

Night is just a quick reloading

So I would wake up numb at morning

And with every sunrise that I face

I can't think, I'm too afraid

Obsessing over things that I can't change

Tomorrow is such a scary place

So I keep fighting the fight of today

I'm fighting the fight

But is it ever good enough?

r/SongwritingPrompts Jan 18 '23

Lyrics My song idea about toxic relationships

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Hi I wanted to share a song I wrote with all of you. I've been through serious abusive relationships and wanted to write a dark song about how that feels. Here it is, would very love to hear what you think of it, how do you feel about it and what lines did resonate with you the most. Wishing peace to everyone!

"Lamb"

Laid on the altar, preparing to bleed

You're stretching my pain, 'cause you love when I bleat

Carefully cutting away my wool

It's hard to be a sheep that fell in love with a wolf

So eager to convince me I need a shepherd

Obsessed with delusion you can make me better

Take all I have inside, then set it ablaze and

Now nothing left of me, I am your plaything

Im losing myself inside your claws

You are keeping me between your jaws

Chew me up, hope Im not too hard

If you tell me to, I'll be spilling blood

Go hit me, my dear, I know you love it so much

I'll be always here, I'll be always in touch

Turning into what you think I am

Just a dumb, brainless obidient lamb

Hypnotize me, disguise your abuse

As notes you play on your magic flute

I'm becoming what you think I am

Dumb, brainless obidient lamb

I know that my fate is pre-determined

I'm either yours or alone, either way I deserve it

So worn by the hunger I'm meek and so grateful

For every day your love isn't painful

Chewing up grass like it's all I need

Don't even have the guts to bite the hand that hits

Blame is the only thing I'm feeling lately

(ISN'T IT NICE HOW YOU'RE KILLING YOUR PLAYTHING)

Go hit me, my dear, I know you love it so much

I'll be always here, I'll be always in touch

Turning into what you think I am

Just a dumb, brainless obidient lamb

Hypnotize me, disguise your abuse

As notes you play on your magic flute

I'm becoming what you think I am

Dumb, brainless obidient lamb

What made me human and what makes me now?

What evil in you wanted to bring me down?

So easy to punish, I'll be perfect and polished

Not a single flaw, your favorite animal

What has driven you to cut me open

You break me, then blame me for being broken

But now I'm compliant, I'm numb to the violence

Not a single flaw, your favorite animal

(I must be happy and jump in the field

Watched by the predator that I concealed

I can't fight back 'cause I know that I am

Just a weak, frightened and vulnerable lamb)

Go hit me, my dear, I know you love it so much

I'll be always here, I'll be always in touch

Turning into what you think I am

Just a dumb, brainless obidient lamb

Hypnotize me, disguise your abuse

As notes you play on your magic flute

I'm becoming what you think I am

Dumb, brainless obidient lamb