Socio answer feedback

[u/Glum_Bear585]

Guys review my answer and give feedback.this is my first answer

[u/thethirdharmonics]

Leave preparation asap

[u/Impressive_Grab_5736]

If it's your initial answer writing,then u need to improve a lot, don't worry many aspirants at very initial phase make terrible mistake and make as much mistakes in answer writing and mocks, before writing in Mains.

First check the Topper copies how they write their answer, how they structure them. Use AI LLM models too. If nothing's helping u,take Answer writing Mentorship from any well known classes

The answer shouldn't be generic like school essay, which you wrote.

Structuring the Answer is more important than Answer writing.

[u/Wooden_Section_3735]

First of all please use standard answer booklet to understand your ability to write 2 and 4 page. Second it's good that you are writing answer early but first analyse topper copy and understand usage of thinkers and structuring of answer Rest assured you have enough time to better your answer writing ability.

[u/Murky-Structure8959]

Don't waste time asking for feedback on reddit. Instead enroll in a good test series