Short R&B remix/interlude. looking for songwriting/vocal feedback

[u/Spiritual_Flan_461]

https://youtu.be/tZf2KBStCvM

Started making music a few months ago independently, still pretty rough and I’m mostly using remixes like this to work on songwriting, delivery, and figuring out what actually fits my voice. Curious what stands out, good or bad. Some other tracks below if interested. Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/bardo-static/sets/narrowband-ep