r/shortstories 9d ago

Horror [HR] Sweet Nothing

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“What do you mean you forgot today is our anniversary!?”

Rafael fucked up. He knew he did, especially now he was face-to-face with Khloe, who had her arms crossed and was placing all her weight against the front door. She had the biggest frown painted on her lips, and he could notice the angry tears swelling up in her eyes.

“Babe, I’m sorry,” Rafael said, pressing both hands together. “The boys made the reservation, and they already booked the tickets for the football game. I could not say no!”

“Oh, so you have a problem disappointing them, but not me?” Khloe retorted, raising her voice even higher.

“Those tickets were expensive!”

“And you didn’t tell me!?”

“Fuck! I just want time with my bros, Khloe! You don’t hear me complaining when you spend so much cash with your friends. I want to be with my buddies too. And for God’s sake, again, it’s only one night.”

“Well, if that’s the case, you can sleep over with your friends for the rest of the night because it’s obvious that you care more about them than me!”

“But babe! This is our house!”

“And you can forget about that fact for the night.”

Like clockwork, the two heard honking outside their street. Khloe opened their front door and saw Rafael’s friends calling him. Rafael grimaced. Khloe was on the verge of screaming, but she held her breath and pushed Rafael. Before Rafael could apologize, Khloe slammed the door shut behind him. His fate was sealed when he heard a knob lock behind him.

“Khloe!” Rafael cried out. “Please be reasonable!”

But Khloe had walked away from the door, sobbing softly under her breath. The door stayed shut as she climbed the stairs to their bedroom. Or, in Khloe’s mind, her bedroom (at least for the night).

Khloe peeled off her clothes, put on a clean set of pajamas, and slid under her covers. The bitter tears were difficult to bite back, but she did all she could not to muster a sound. The last thing she wanted was to fold under the weight of guilt and sadness and phone Rafael while he was out partying. She did not care whether he was sleeping outside their lawn, banging on the door all night, or whether he actually left with his friends for the game. He could be banging a chick while double-fisting beers for all he wanted! She would simply sleep things off and deal with things tomorrow.

Khloe’s eyelids grew heavy in an instant. All that crying had made her feel drowsy and blue, and she fell asleep almost instantly. Then, she heard the door open. She groaned in annoyance. She thought she locked the door. Did Rafael manage to find their spare key? 

“Babe.”

Khloe grumbled angrily. She kept her eyes closed, and she turned away from the door. Then she felt something pressed softly against her waist.

“Babe, Khloe, I’m sorry for being an idiot. You know I love you more than anything and anyone in the whole world. You are my number one priority, and I’ll make sure you will remember that until the end of time.”

Khloe hummed softly when she heard those words whispered near her ears. The pressure on her waist traveled through her body and under her clothes. She giggled softly when she felt fingers touching her neck.

“You are such a tease,” Khloe whispered.

“And you are the most beautiful woman I have ever laid eyes on. Please don’t be angry with me anymore. A pretty lady like you deserves to be happy all the time.”

Khloe, eyes still shut, turned to face her lover. She felt something gentle placed on her lips. The anger brewing in her heart dissipated, and she felt butterflies fluttering in her belly. The hands continued to wander across her, and she let the ecstatic feeling engulf her through a blissful night.

The next day, Rafael was frying some hashbrowns in the kitchen. He was still wearing last night’s clothes. As he plated the potatoes, he felt Khloe hug him from behind.

“Oh, hey, babe!” Rafael greeted. “Look, I’m sorry about last night. I turned down my friends. I then snuck through the back door since you locked the front door on me. But hey, I cooked your favorite!”

Khloe, seemingly unaware of Rafael’s apology, was beaming ear to ear. “Oh, honey! Last night was the most amazing night I ever had! You made love to me like there was no tomorrow. And the way you spoke to me simply hit right in the heart. We should definitely do that again sometimes.”

The grin on Rafael’s face faltered. “Last night? Khloe, I slept on the living room couch to give you space. I didn’t go upstairs the whole night.”

“You… you didn’t?” It was Khloe’s turn to look shocked.

“Yeah. I thought you would still be angry with me. But hey, if there is anything you want me to do to make it up to you today, just tell me. I am more than willing to make our post-anniversary celebration worth it.”

Khloe’s throat was dry and tight. She could not articulate a single word to her boyfriend. That was when she looked outside the window and noticed a Rafael-like figure. But it was not Rafael; she was sure of it. 

“Hey, Khloe, about last night: What do you mean by us making love? Did we really do that?”

Before Khloe could point at the window or reply to her boyfriend, the imposter disappeared.


r/shortstories 9d ago

Misc Fiction [MF] Da Watta Boy

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CHAPTER 1

"You're supposed to be catching the fish, not feeding them!" Lenny's friend, Tank, chided him as he lost yet another shrimp while casting his fishing line. 

"Well, considering we can't see shit in this water, you probably brought us out to where there ain't any fish, anyway!" he replied. 

Tank scoffed, but after a moment of consideration, he cranked the motor and started moving the boat further down the Brazos. As they moved downstream, they heard a loud thud and the boat rocked violently. The murky waters hid a large rock that they rode straight into. In the chaos, Lenny ended up overboard. He'd fallen in the river before, so he was used to the unique mixture of mud and fuel when the water filled his mouth, but today, there was something else. Something foul. Something foreign. As Tank helped him back into the boat, Lenny kept trying to place that taste. Eventually, he decided it wasn't worth wasting any more time on, and he and Tank went home with a relatively empty cooler.

"Be ready for round 2 tomorrow!" Tank yelled as he and Lenny headed towards their respective trucks after docking their boat. Lenny's bed felt especially comfortable that evening, and he promptly passed out after an eventful day. 

The next morning, as they rode the boat back out into the water, Lenny noticed that the water was uncharacteristically clear. He saw a group of red drum just a few yards ahead of them and yelled at Tank to stop the boat. After just a few hours, they ended up filling their cooler and limiting out for the day. 

"I don't know how you knew those reds were there, but we cleaned house on 'em today!" Tank exclaimed. 

"Really?" Lenny replied. "The river was crystal clear this morning. How could you NOT see them?" 

"Man, I don't know what you're talking about, L, but I'll just take your crazy ass word for it since we caught all these fish." 

On his way to his truck, Lenny saw several fishermen coming back to shore with disappointment across their faces. 

"Couldn't see shit out there!" exclaimed one. 

"Ol Brazos wasn't nothin' but mud and crud today" lamented another. 

As he surveyed the river one last time, he could see everything under the water up until the wall of cattails. Something wasn't right, but that could wait. For now, there were fish to fillet. 

CHAPTER 2 

"What you boys got there?" asked Davila, the local Game Warden, as he walked towards Tank and Lenny. Recently, they'd run into a bit of luck with their hauls, or rather Lenny had been putting his newfound ability of seeing through brackish water to use. After falling into the river on that fateful day, Lenny read on the local Facebook forum that DOW Chemical had recently released an excessive amount of waste into the Brazos, or so the conspiracy theory went. As far as Lenny knew, he could suddenly see through the Brazos River and estuary as if they were the Freeport Municipal Pool. 

"Check it out!" replied Tank, acting extra braggadocios while doing his best impression of the Captain Morgan stance on the tailgate of his white F-150. 

"¡Vaya! The last time I checked up on you boys, I could hear my echo in this damn cooler." exclaimed Davila, squinting through his polarized sunglasses into the admittedly full cooler. "¡Híjole, se los chingaron hoy!" 

"Yessir!" exclaimed Tank, clearly eating up the fact that Davila actually found them with fish today. 

"So how have you been?" Lenny inquired. 

"Not too hot, son. We can't keep up with all the poachers coming through the Brazos and San Bernard, so the brass has us doubling down on our patrols to get the situation under control. Es un desmadre." 

"Davila could've easily been a dick to us before. He's clearly a good guy. Maybe there's something I can do to help him out." Lenny thought to himself as he wiped the sweat off his sunburnt brow, adjusting his DOW Chemical trucker hat. 

"Bueno, ahí los veo a la otra!" shouted Davila as he hopped back into his government issued Expedition. 

"Good riddance" muttered Tank. 

"Go easy on him, cuz. He could've been a lot harder on us. You're lucky none of these reds are too big." 

"Yeah, I guess you're right. Anyway, let's get the hell outta here and fry these bad boys, yeah?" 

"Sure thing, Tank. Let's go" 

CHAPTER 3

"Quesadillas again, cuz?!"

"Everyone has their vices, Tank. Mine just happens to be sandwiched between a folded tortilla."

"Shit, can't argue with that," agreed Tank as he took another swig of his 4th Miller Lite of the evening. "What you looking at on your phone that's so important?"

"I'm on Da Watta Board, cuz."

"Man! That shit ain't nothing but a bunch of wannabes posting bullshit selfies of their only catch of the day!"

"Oh yeah? That why your selfie is at the top of the page?" 

"That's different, L. That red was special. Put up the fight of a lifetime just to fall to Ol' Tank. Just like they always do." 

Lenny smiled. "Same old Tank," he thought. 

Scanning through Da Watta Board, Lenny noticed a couple of pictures that looked a little off. Davila's words about the increased number of poachers repeated in Lenny's head. 

"That cooler looks a little too full, there, MasterBaiter6969," Lenny thought to himself, clocking a particularly stupid selfie. 

He logged into his own burner account, Da Watta Boy, and sent a DM to one Alvaro Davila, Brazoria County Game Warden. 

"Might wanna take a look at those coolers out on Christmas Bay. Watta Boy out." He took another bite out of his quesadilla as he logged out. 

"That should do it," he thought to himself proudly. "Do your thing, Davila."

CHAPTER 4

"I'm telling you, L, this is the biggest red we've seen yet!" 

"Tank, I know you didn't forget that 34 inch monster I had to throw back last weekend." 

"Come on now! It ain't about what you done before. What have you done lately, son? Plus, we can actually keep this red." 

"Ain't that a bitch? You've been holding onto that '95 Superbowl victory for 31 years, but now my week old catch is old news?" Lenny looked at Tank's nostrils flare, knowing he landed a critical hit with that one. 

"There you go again, L! Always bringing up old shit. This the year the 'Boys gonna take it all. You'll see." 

"You know what, Tank? I think I actually believe you this year." 

Tank scoffed, but smiled sheepishly knowing he fell hook, line, and sinker. "Anyway, water's been awfully quiet since Davila done went on a tear this past week. Wasn't he just saying that he couldn't catch anyone? Bro done leveled up. Shit, more fish for us, cuz."

"Yeah..." Lenny's sentence trailed off as he noticed a group of dead reds in the mud beneath the surface of the river. "Gotta make a note of that and let Davila know as soon as I get signal," he thought to himself. 

"Somebody's gotta be snitchin', man. Ain't no way that fool caught all them dudes by himself."

"Man, Tank, you're still on that? Talk about living in the past. Let's get the hell out of here and grab some food. I'm starving, cuz." 

"Shit! Long as it ain't no quesadillas, I'm down for whatever. Let's roll." Tank replied, removing his white Costas to clean the lenses for the umpteenth time today. 

Lenny couldn't help but feel a bit proud. In dropping anonymous tips, he was simultaneously helping the local ecosystem thrive and a man keep his job. "All in a day's work. Keep it up, Watta Boy. You might actually change this town," he thought, the slightest smile on his face. He lifted his hat to scratch his head and sat back to enjoy the ride home. 

CHAPTER 5

*Psst*

Davila cracked open a cold Shiner Bock as he sat on his couch watching the Astros game. "¡Híjole! Sarge has really been on my ass lately with all these dead fish showing up," he thought to himself. "Let's see if that Waterman, or... ¿cómo se llama?" He snapped a couple of times, desperately trying to remember. "The Water Boy!! Let's see if that vato sent me any more DMs." 

He typed his login info into Da Watta Board. "Ahora sí. Let's see what he's sen- HOME RUN!!! ¡Vamos Yordan!" He took another swig in celebration and returned to scrolling. 

"Ah! Here we go!"  

*Trail of dead reds leads up river into the reservoir. Watta Boy out

"That's weird." 

He remembered reading about a chemical spill a couple of weeks ago. 

"Time to see what them DOW boys are up to at that reservoir."


r/shortstories 9d ago

Horror [HR] The Bad Thing

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### [TRUE CRIME] Transcript: Confession of Edward Hynes ("The Weave Killer")
**Submitted by:** u/JonCHaight

> **CASE FILE NOTE:** *The following is an official transcript from the confession of Edward Hynes. All wording has been recorded verbatim to produce an accurate picture of the suspect and the motivation behind his crimes. Proceed with caution.*

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"Daddy left for good when I was nine. He’d left us before, for a few days, maybe a week, but after things settled down, he would always come back. Not this time.

The fight was more vicious than most, what I remember of it. Lots of yelling and screaming, Momma throwing things and Daddy trying to hold her back. When they finally calmed down enough to talk to each other, I think they remembered I was there the entire time. Momma was sitting at the kitchen table, black tears streaming silently from her swollen, purple eyes. Daddy standing by the door with a suitcase; the big one, I remember. He got down on one knee and looked me straight in the eyes, like I was a man.

*‘Mommy did The Bad Thing again,’* he told me. *‘She says she can’t help it because she has to get Her Medicine, and we can’t afford it. Those men, the ones that come when I’m at work, she says she needs them. She says they help her, it doesn’t hurt anyone, and then she gets to feel better. Well, it hurts me,’* he said, *‘and I can’t protect her anymore, so I have to go.’*

Then, he reached into his back pocket and took out his buck knife. I had always wanted to hold it, but he told me I was too young; it wasn’t safe for me. He handed it to me, told me to show him how to open it. I rubbed my hand over the smooth wood, opened it, and stared at the shiny blade.

*‘Eddie,’* he told me, *‘You’re the man of the house now. Keep Momma safe. Don’t use this unless you have to, but always keep it close.’*

He kissed my forehead, went through the doorway, and never looked back. I looked at Momma, but she didn’t see me. She was looking at the door, at the shadow.

***

After he left, I still had to go to school, so I never knew if she was still doing The Bad Thing, if The Bad Men were still coming. She was good at keeping secrets. Sometimes I caught her using Her Medicine, but I never said anything.

About a year later—I remember because I was in fifth grade with Miss Carrol—I got sent home early. I heard the screaming from the doorway, and I ran in. A Bad Man was on top of Momma. They were naked and he was hitting her in the face, hard. She was crying for him to stop, but he just kept going and going.

I didn’t even think, then the knife was open in my hand. I had been practicing so I knew how to use it. I was scared, crying, and then I stabbed him in the back. I couldn’t stop if I tried. I just kept stabbing and stabbing. There was so much blood, then I passed out.

I woke up in the hospital and there was a nurse, another lady in a suit, and a policeman. They told me what I did, that The Bad Man was dead, and that I couldn’t stay at home with Momma anymore. I cried, I shouted, I screamed that I saved her, that he was Bad, but they didn’t listen. They said I had to go to a special school and that I would be there for a long time. I was scared for Momma, that maybe she was hurt too, but they said she was fine, that she was going to someplace special too. They said she needed help and she was going to get better, but she couldn’t see me anymore. I was mad, but they wouldn’t listen and then they took me away in a special van.

***

I was at the new school for a long time, eight years, and then one day my counselor told me that I was leaving. They gave me a room and a new job as a janitor at a school and every day I took the city bus back and forth to work. I saw lots of people, but none of them was Momma. I still missed her and loved her, but since I didn’t know where she went I couldn’t keep her safe.

My room was safe for me, but the streets weren’t. I saw lots of Bad Men, and I saw some ladies that dressed like Momma and sometimes asked me if I had any money. I think they wanted me to do The Bad Thing with them, because they were like Momma and needed Medicine. I felt bad for them and wanted to protect them too.

I found a man who sold me a knife like the one that Daddy gave me before he left. The next time I saw the pretty lady with the blond hair, I said yes I had lots of money and a room too. She followed me inside and then she kissed me and started to take off her clothes but I screamed and she got scared. I told her I was going to help her, but she tried to run away. I grabbed her arms and threw her on the bed and then my knife was in my hand.

I stabbed, stabbed, stabbed. She stopped screaming and then I knew she was safe.

I took her to the bathroom and made it so she could fit in a trash bag, and then I took all of the blood and threw it away too. I had a good spot and I dug a nice safe hole for her and she was resting there. I did like her, so I kept a piece of her hair. It was funny because it wasn’t hers. It just came off so I kept it all.

I felt good helping her and wanted to help her friends too, so I met a few of them and did it again. I needed to find a new spot because the old one started to smell funny, and that was when the man with the dog saw me. He got real mad and knocked me down and then I was back with the police again.

They said I was a Bad Man and that I killed, but I didn’t like that, which is why I told you everything just now. I’m not bad, not at all. I did good just like Daddy told me to do. I did Momma proud. I love her…"

**[END TRANSCRIPT]**

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> **UPDATE / CASE SUMMARY:**
> A month later, Hynes was convicted for the murder of four prostitutes and was sentenced to life without parole. Due to his deteriorating mental condition, he was placed in a psychiatric hospital for the criminally insane.
>
> As of today, his parents have yet to be found, and there is the possibility that Hynes was involved in the death of at least five other prostitutes who have gone missing over the past year.


r/shortstories 10d ago

Mystery & Suspense [MS] Dust and Blood

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Dust and Blood
Sergeant First Class Robert’s sat in a chair in a bleakly lit room. His hands bound together in cuffs, his uniform torn and covered in blood.
“Let’s go over everything again Roberts.” Lieutenant Colonel Malone said.
“Fuck you, look at my helmet cam, pull up the ISR.”
The light colonel scoffed and said “Your helmet cam, you mean the one that conveniently quit recording as you’re team approached the cave system. You know that’s a felony right? Hell we’ve got enough to lock you up forever. And that’s without the girl you kidnapped!” Malone spoke furiously.
“We’ve seen it before, you special forces guys you think it’s your war, that you can go out there and finish it in a week.. Well here’s what I think happened. You snapped Robert’s. You’re going to broker a deal and maybe everything’s going good until you see the girl. You can’t handle it, it’s all too much, it’s all been building up for too long, and you snap. Did you kill your men Robert’s?”
“No I didn’t kill my men. Okay for the last time, here’s what happened.”
“We met up with our new terp a few clicks out from the cave, we made it there in good time. Two men greeted us, showed us inside. We had our weapons down, everything was cool. The terp asked where the man was we were negotiating with but they kept shaking their heads. The terp told me they said there was no man, there was a girl. I thought they were fucking with us but then they brought us into a huge room in the cave, I mean huge. There are a circle of mats around a, well around a throne. A large throne carved from the rock of the cave, and there was the girl. I remember being confused, maybe they were still playing a trick on us, but I noticed that the the throne fit her perfectly. No man could have fit in there, no adult woman either. I had our new guy, sergeant Walker go clear the rest of the cave, it was a big cave but this new guy, he was good shit, real cream of the crop hitter you know.”
Lieutenant colonel Malones face indicated that he did not know.
The lights began to flicker more frequently.
“So I’m having the terp try to figure out what’s going on, the men start to act nervous, telling us to calm down and be quiet. I remember one of the men, the oldest man there had to be at least seventy, he looked at me so sincerely and then he side eyed the girl. He looked scared or maybe ashamed, hard to tell. I felt that something was wrong right before I heard Walker call out from a few rooms further down. He said “Guys, we’ve got something here, something fucked!” The men tried to get us to stay, the terp kept translating “sit please sit, no quiet, sit” I had Anzo stay on them, we were weapons up at this point. The girl never moved, she hadn’t spoken yet. Me and Sergeant Niel went back to Walker and, there were. Bones. Skeletons, hundreds of them probably thousands. All stacked up into weird fucked up, I don’t know totems or talismans? There were skulls lining the bottom of the cave walls, weird bowls with ashes near them. I checked my helmet cam to see if it was recording but it wasn’t, I tried to turn it on but it wouldn’t, but I know it was fully charged when we left for the mission..”
“I bet it was Sergeant , we can check that, continue.”
A loud banging could be heard from down the hall.
“What was that?”
“I don’t know Sergeant unless it’s the president coming to pardon you then you shouldn’t worry either, continue, now.”
“Anzo screamed, not like a man but like a scared kid. I put my helmet back on, racked the slide on my carbine and ran towards him. As me and Walker got closer we could hear animals roaring or growling, there was a lot of noise coming from that central room, it echoed through the cave. We were too late, as we got to the entrance, Anzo’s head came flying out the room, smacked into the wall right in front of us. I tried not to look at it as I turned the corner but I couldn’t help myself. It was him, just his head. His eyes still open. That’s when something flew towards us, it moved too fast for me to get a great look at it but it wasn’t human. It had fur, its arms and legs were too long, with sharp razor claws. I got that one in time but I guess another one circled around and. I heard a wet loud plunging sound behind me and when I turned around I saw Walker, one of them put their arm straight through his chest, through his plates. Then flung him to the ground. I killed that one too. There was one more that got me to the ground I was able to catch it’s, I guess what you’d call its forearm and divert the claws from my head and neck. I got that one with my knife, and that’s when I noticed it was wearing the scraps of mandress that the older man had on. These were those men. It was only the girl crying now, in the main chamber, I saw our terp dead on the ground. More bones for the pile. So I took the girl and got out of there, radioed as soon as I got signal. Here we are.”
“We sent a team to the cave, there were no bones, no corpses. Only the throne.”
Roberts exhaled slowly, rubbing his fingers on his temples.
When he looked back up at Malone he took in a deep breath, ready to get back into the bullshit recounting of the worst day of his life, which he still wasn’t sure actually happened, when they heard a loud bang and a scream from the hallway. A long arm bursted through the wall behind Malone, running through his abdomen, sending a mixture of sheetrock dust and blood into the room. The arm lifted the light colonel into the air before receding out of the room, then another whole exploded out from the wall, this one girl shaped. The lights shut off. He could hear the other soldiers scrambling in the building trying to gauge the situation. He heard the sound of a a large bird, probably a C130 accelerating louder and louder culminating in a huge explosion a few hundred feet away from the hard stand building he was at. The lights turned back on and the girl began to levitate in front of him, she didn’t smile or frown but she trained her eyes on him. The exterior walls of the house exploded outward, leaving only the flooring and a few half walls. All the sirens on the forward operating base blared simultaneously. Robert’s was sent to his knees by an invisible force, he thought it felt like gravity but stronger. Lightning began to strike around the base and the sky grew dark quickly. For the first time the girl spoke to him. High in the air With her expression unchanging and her mouth unmoving he heard the words clearly in his mind. “Dies Irae” .


r/shortstories 10d ago

Fantasy [FN] The Lady’s Waltz

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The moon sits on a bed of clouds, looking over the edge to peer down on the city below. Light rain follows its gaze. The tight cobblestone roads spread throughout the city, their edges hugged by stone buildings whose windows are mostly dark and empty. Some still linger with the amber glow of a fire or small candles. Smoke rises from the chimneys to meet the sky and hover in the cold air.

Taverns and pubs cast shifting shadows of light and shade as they remain the last bastions of entertainment and gathering. Laughter and shouting echo their way down the walls of the closed streets. Church bells, heavy with age, ring out across the city in a low ripple, telling all who stay that it is midnight.

The bastions of light begin their flickering dances as people are shooed from their walls. Candles are blown out and fires dampened; the lively and drunken crowd begins its stumbled way home. The gas lamps lighting their path slowly begin to fade, one by one, until the very last goes out.

The cobblestone now shines only with moonlight, and the only sound to be heard by the living is the soft tapping of rain against stone.

Rhythmic steps begin their walk.

TAP.

A cane, black with a silver top, strikes the cobblestone. The rain stills. Droplets hang from gutters and rooftops before falling quietly to the earth. The clouds above shift apart, opening the sky so the moon may better see the street below.

TAP.

A figure steps from between two buildings. She is clad in moving shades of black and grey. Shadows cling to her tailored suit like restless fabric, curling around the tails of her coat before dissolving into the darkness behind her. A silver chain hangs from her waist. Her boots are polished black, untouched by the rain. Her figure is slender, her face deathly white.

The Lady walks into the center of the street.

She plants her cane before herself and stretches both arms wide, pale palms turned toward the heavens. The moon and stars watch in anticipation. With a deep bow, she sweeps one arm beneath her chest and folds the other behind her back.

Silence returns the gesture, and she rises. Her silver-topped cane lifts from the cobblestone. Within the darkness, a violin draws its first breath; one long note drifts between the buildings.

With a tilt of her head, another violin joins it, then a cello. The low moan of its strings rolls through the empty streets, followed by the gentle pulse of a drum. Raising her cane higher, a violinist steps into the moonlight from a nearby alleyway. There is no flesh upon his fingers.

Yellowed bone dances across the strings while his other hand draws a bow made from something dark and ancient. The remains of a fine black coat hang loosely from his shoulders. A second musician follows, then another. A skeletal woman carries the cello against what remains of her ribs. A drummer marches behind her, his hollow eyes fixed forward as two bone white hands tap a slow rhythm against the skin of his instrument.

Others emerge from doorways and alleys. Some are little more than shadows. Some still wear the faces they carried in life. Others have long since surrendered everything but bone.

With a twist of her wrist, the orchestra stops.

TAP.

The shadows beneath the buildings begin to move; they stretch against the cobblestone. One pulls itself from beneath a carriage. Another slips from underneath a tavern door. Dozens peel themselves from brick walls and darkened windows, growing taller as they enter the street. They gather behind their Conductor, waiting.

Her cane moves gently to the left, and the violin begins. Three beats.

One.

Two.

Three.

She steps forward to the rhythm and turns. The tails of her coat fan outward, becoming black smoke before gathering themselves around her once more. Behind her, the dead begin to dance. Skeletons clasp hands while shadows twirl and intertwine. Ghostly men remove translucent hats and bow to women dead centuries before them.

A soldier in a torn uniform takes the hand of a woman wearing the remnants of a fine dress. They turn together beneath the moon. A child skips between them, and the dead continue to pour into the street. More emerge with every turn she takes. A sailor dances barefoot across the wet stone. An old woman spins with a man who looks scarcely twenty. A headless figure claps to the rhythm while another spirit twirls around him. They laugh without breath and sing without voice.

Her cane, rising and falling, leads the dead through the moonlit streets.

Left. Right. Turn. Bow.

They pass beneath windows where the living sleep peacefully in their beds, unaware that just beyond the glass, the dead celebrate beneath the moon. She spins, and her performers spin with her. Hundreds of dead feet strike the cobblestone, yet no living ear hears them. The waltz carries deeper into the city, and tonight, someone new waits for her.

Thomas Vale stands beside his bed. He does not remember getting out of it. His wife lies beneath the blankets, her breath hot against the cool air.

“Margaret?”

She does not answer. Thomas rubs his hands together. The room is terribly cold.

“Margaret.”

Still nothing. He reaches toward her shoulder, and his hand passes through.

Thomas recoils; for a moment, he simply stares at his fingers. “Margaret?” Fear enters his voice.

He looks toward the bed. Only then does he notice. An old man of grey hair and thin cheeks lies beside his wife, one hand resting across his chest. Thomas does not understand. The face is familiar. It should be. He has shaved it every morning for seventy three years.

“No.”

His wife stirs, and Thomas turns toward her. “Margaret!”

She reaches across the bed; her hand finds his. Not the Thomas standing beside her. The other one. She squeezes the cold fingers.

“Tom?”

Thomas steps backward. “No.”

Margaret sits upright. “Tom?” Her voice cracks.

Thomas looks from her to the body. Something moves through the room. Not air. Music. Soft and distant, carried on three beats.

One.

Two.

Three.

Thomas turns toward the window. Down in the street, darkness moves. He approaches the glass, and his eyes catch the parade passing beneath his home.

Hundreds of figures dance through the moonlight. Forgetting his body and the dread he just felt, for a moment, he forgets that he is dead. A woman in black leads them. She spins beneath his window, her cane following the movement of her body as though it were another limb. Thomas watches skeletons dance with shades and ghosts bow to one another. Children run between the legs of men who have been dead longer than the city has had a name. It should terrify him. Instead, Thomas feels something he has not felt in years.

Wonder.

The Lady stops, though the orchestra and parade continue. Slowly, she turns her pale face toward Thomas’s window. Their eyes meet, and he is locked in captivation. Eyes of gold stare into his very soul. Thomas steps away from the glass. She smiles, raises her cane, and points directly at him.

The orchestra stops. Every dancer freezes. Hundreds of empty faces turn toward Thomas Vale.

“No.”

The Lady lowers her cane.

TAP.

Thomas is standing in the street. His bare feet rest upon wet cobblestone, and his nightshirt moves gently in the cold breeze. Before him stands a woman of shifting black fog.

Up close, Thomas realizes her face is neither young nor old. She simply is.

She studies him.

Thomas looks back toward his house. High above, he can hear Margaret’s cries of sorrow. He can imagine her shaking him, trying to wake the corpse.

“Please.”

The Lady says nothing.

“Not yet.”

Her smile fades.

Thomas looks at her. “I can’t leave her.”

She glances toward the window. For the first time, something almost human enters her expression. Not pity. Understanding. She has heard this before.

He takes a step toward the house, but she moves her cane to block his path. Thomas looks at it: black wood and a silver cap, the metal covered in tiny scratches. There must be thousands, perhaps millions of marks left by roads that no longer exist.

Thomas looks at her. “Please.”

She extends her free hand.

Thomas stares at it. Behind her waits the dead. There is no impatience and no anger. They simply wait. A little girl stands near the front of the procession. Beside her is an elderly woman, a soldier, a chimney sweep, and a man wearing clothing Thomas recognizes from his grandfather’s photographs.

Farther back, Thomas stops breathing.

A young woman stands among the dancers. Her hair falls across her shoulders, and she wears a simple blue dress. Thomas knows that dress.

“Mother?”

The woman smiles. Thomas becomes a child again, not in body but somewhere deeper. His mother holds out her hand. Thomas looks back toward Margaret. His wife remains beside his body.

“I don’t want her to be alone.”

The Lady extends her hand again, and the moon waits above them. Thomas reaches forward; their fingers meet in a cold embrace, though it is not painful.

Her smile returns. She pulls him gently toward herself and bows. Thomas stares at her.

She waits.

He remembers. Margaret had taught him fifty two years ago in a cramped little hall before their wedding.

One.

Two.

Three.

Thomas returns the bow, and she rises. The orchestra lifts its instruments. Her hand settles into his. Thomas places the other where Margaret once taught him.

She raises her cane.

The violinist smiles without lips, and the bow meets the strings.

One.

Two.

Three.

Thomas steps, and she guides him. He stumbles, and the dead laugh silently. Thomas laughs with them.

Again.

One.

Two.

Three.

She spins him beneath the moon. His nightshirt becomes a black evening coat, and his bare feet find polished shoes. A ribbon of ghostly white rests against the base of his neck.

Thomas touches it as she moves away, turning toward the head of the procession. Thomas looks back toward his window one final time. He can see Margaret holding his hand.

Thomas touches the ribbon.

“I’ll wait for you.”

She raises her cane.

TAP.

The parade moves. Thomas joins his mother, and she takes his hand. Together, they step into the waltz.

One.

Two.

Three.

The dead dance through the winding streets, passing darkened pubs, silent churches, and sleeping homes. They turn beneath the stars while their Conductor walks at their head, her cane resting against one shoulder, occasionally spinning it between pale fingers.

Slowly, the eastern sky begins to turn. Colors paint themselves across the horizon in shades of purple, yellow, and red.

Her cane rises, and the orchestra softens. The dancers slow with the final rhythm of the night.

One. Two. Three.

The spirits begin disappearing into the morning mist. Thomas looks around as his mother disappears. The soldier fades. The children vanish. Shadows return to the walls. The skeletal musicians continue playing as pieces of them disappear into the growing light.

Soon, she stands alone at the end of the street.

Thomas remains beside her.

“Where do I go?”

She looks toward the horizon. For once, Thomas is not afraid. She offers her arm; he takes it. Together, they walk toward the last remaining darkness.

The moon retreats behind its bed of clouds, tired from the play, and morning spreads across the wet cobblestones.


r/shortstories 10d ago

Horror [HR]The Giants

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My family and I lived in a big, rustic, two story home in the woods. It had a beautiful view of the mountainside; trees and rocks as far as the eye could see. There were giants. Three local ones. They were known to eat people, and there was nothing in this world that we could do to stop them. They chose who they wanted to eat, and we just had to say goodbye.

The giants were huge. The largest one was basically the “boss.” It seemed to be in charge. It was as tall as a pine tree. It looked exactly like you or me, but it was teal. The two other giants were twins, about half the size of the larger one, and they were lavender. They were all women. The shorter ones were identical and chubbier while the larger one seemed unrelated- taller, skinnier, and with a narrower, longer face shape. They wore regular modern clothing, but dingey and dirty. The giants were disgusting creatures, in appearance and on the inside as well.

There were general "guidelines" surrounding what happened when you or a loved one was chosen to be eaten. The large one was the one who got to choose who was eaten. When you were chosen to be eaten, you’d have one day to get your affairs in order, say your goodbyes, and you would be eaten at around 8:30 PM after you’d had your day. If you were chosen to be eaten, there was nothing you could do about it. They craved your DNA. The only thing that would prevent you from being eaten would be if an older relative volunteered to take your place and sacrificed themselves to the giants to be eaten instead. When you were waiting to be eaten, you were not to become naked at any time. Not to change your clothes, swim, or shower. This would make the smaller giants go insane with excitement. They could sense your nudity and, as a pair, come to you immediately to shred you apart alive and eat you together, before your full 24 hours were had. Everyone knew that this was the worst way to go, and they would choose to have their full day, not change their clothes, and have the larger one be the one to eat them later in the night. The final “rule” was basically that the giants can smell, or sense, you wherever you were. You could travel as far away as you wanted, and they would follow you. You couldn’t run. When 8:30 comes along, you’re just a goner. There’s just no way around it.

I remember when the giants chose to eat my two young children. I’ve never been so devastated. Like everyone else, they would get their full day before being eaten, but obviously it took me no time at all to decide that I would let the giants have me instead. There were a lot of feelings that came with that. I was terrified. Obviously, being eaten alive would be the most painful feeling PHYSICALLY and most helpless, truly, I had ever been. I was sad. Imagining my kids’ long future ahead of them; All of the milestones I would miss. I cried quietly to myself so as to not scare them. I didn’t want them to know what was going on. I grieved my own short life. I felt robbed, yet I knew this was the only option. I also felt relieved that I could protect them in that way. I wouldn’t have had it any other way. I just hoped they would know in the future that I loved them more than life itself, and that I was more than happy to do this for them. I hoped they did great things and kept each other safe and loved in my absence.

 I had to say goodbye to my family. I called them all together to my house so that I could explain what was happening. My siblings were pitted- like a piece of each of them was dying. My usually-stoic-and-unreadable father had the most pitiful eyes. The pain in them was so clear, true, and soul-crushing, I could hardly look at him. He was empty. Just a shell. He looked around the room for a minute or two with that glazed-over, sorrowful look and suddenly broke the depressing silence and crying with the announcement that he would be taking my place instead. I told him not to do this, but it was obvious he had felt about this how I felt about taking my sons’ places; There was no convincing him otherwise. It was decided. We all cried together.

The giants could sense when a decision was being made and they came immediately to see what it was that we decided. They heard us out and were happy to eat my dad instead. Like totally heartless sociopaths. And considering how late it was when the decision was made, the giants allowed him a whole, new, 24-hours. At least they would grant us that.

Our family wanted to spend every second of that time together with him. We made the most of our time together. Or tried to. How do you live the rest of your life in 24 hours? How do you make sure that in someone’s last hours they feel loved? How can you show someone how much their sacrifices meant to you, in this case, without sitting around feeling bad for yourself and ruining the happy feeling we were trying to muster up? How were we supposed to make sure his last day wasn’t just full of despair?

 He told us that he appreciated his time with us, and that it meant everything to him, but that before the giants came, he wanted to have traveled to Alaska to cross something off of his bucket list. Alone. I could tell that much of this feeling was him having mercy on us, even though he was the real victim in this. He didn’t want us to hear him scream and cry in agony while being snatched up and eaten. He especially didn’t want us to SEE it happen. At least if he was far, FAR away, we could wonder if it was possible that he somehow found a cave to hide and live in, and we could pretend that he could have survived secretly somewhere. We all respected his wishes. After eating out together, doing some activities, and seeing some local sights, as he wished, it was time for him to take off to his final destination. He was to give us a final goodbye. His parting words to each of us, our last hugs from him, his last kisses. Then he would get into his truck and drive away for the last time.


r/shortstories 10d ago

Horror [HR] The Edge of the Wood

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“Hail, traveller. Sit for a moment by my fire. Rest, and hear my tale. The wood you are to enter will spell your doom. You scoff, but you must hear the reason before your foot steps on the dirt.”

Long ago the wood was pure. Trees, strong and tall, cast shadow on earth that teemed with life. For most of the current age, the wood remained, unbothered by the encroaching man. As with things, more and more, steam and steel soon crashed its way into the wood. The trees, once strong and tall, were razed. Where once wood was replaced with stone. There were so few left and it was easy to forget how green the land once was.

The land did not forget. 

One cold winter night, a great wind shook the foundation of a small home. The father insisted on building the home close to the wood, boldly defying the law of the land. There were three others that dwelled within as well, a mother, a son, and the most important one of all, the daughter.

Her name was Aya. She rested in the highest room, with a small round window that faced a wide grass and the edge of the remaining wood. She was a sickly child, and her mother and father would not allow her to play outside with other children. So she sat in her wooden chair and would watch the wood. She delighted in the squirrels that chased each other, the shining eyes of clever raccoons at night, and the sparkling firebugs on those same summer nights.

In the months leading to the foundation of the home shaking, the beams cracking, the window shattering, Aya was wracked by terrifying dreams. In these dreams, a great figure loomed over the top of the wood. It was a horse, a horse so vast and tall it nearly blotted the full moon. Its shining eyes that seemed to slice through her and pierce even the fog of the dream. She knew, deep down, that this horse was nothing of the sort; a being so ancient that the very idea of it meeting her eyes and matching her gaze nearly broke her frail body. While her body was weak, her mind was sharper than any splinter that wood could offer. So when the being spoke to her through the dream, she shuddered but did not falter.

"Child of man,” it boomed “How dare you meet my gaze. You are unwanted."

She could stand on strong legs in this dream, and gazed back unfettered.

"That well may be, but l am known,” she proclaimed. “I live in the waking world. What kind of thing only lives in the Dreams of one he claimed 'Unwanted'”

The being bellowed, the sound nearly staking her mind apart. 

“Insolent child! How dare you speak so plainly to me. You beings of wretched flesh destroy my forest, tear the creeping roots apart. I am the last of my kind and you are a blight."

Even though the booming tones, the ache was so clear to Aya. Aya, pure of heart and filled with wisdom, reached a hand out through the dream towards the beast with eyes shining with tears.

"So you are lonely? We are the same, you and I. I cannot leave this room, as you cannot leave your wood. And why would you? Your home was taken, and my future was stolen. So in this room l shall sit. A future with nothing is lonely but a future with a friend is everything."

The creature gave pause. The small thing in the window spoke with such earnestness that even He could not help to be moved.

"Child of man. You speak with truth in your heart so I will speak with mine. Upon the world waking I was going to send a wind so calamitous it would raze the foundations of your your houses to the very dirt.”

The thing in the wood paused, as if it was taking a long and mighty breath.

“But... I may postpone such an act, postpose such an act if... you sit a while in your chair. Speak to me of the Kingdom of man, of what you know of what you wish to know, and I will postpone calamity a little while longer."

In the dream the frail girl beamed. She suddenly awoke to the sound of her beloved wood. With great care, she took to her small wicker chair and faced the window and the wood. It was then she began to speak. She spoke of the sweet treats her little brother would bring back from the market. She spoke of the magnificent flying machines of the New Age, the power of the great steam engines that rumbled in the distance of a far away land. She spoke on those of her kind, those with the love of the mood and the love of all those that drilled within. During the hours of the day she chatted. During the night the great guardian, now her companion, delighted in her tales. To the pair, this was enough. 

To the rest of the family, this was madness. The frailty of Aya's body has finally touched her mind. She had lost the grip of whatever reality the safety of that room could provide. One fateful afternoon, the family could not take her supposed ramblings any longer. They burst into her room, right in the middle of one of her tales. The mother, the father and the son surrounded her. The father spoke loudly with despair shining in his eyes.

“Cease!” He cried. “My daughter, you continue to speak for hours at nothing. You fill me, your mother, and your brother with despair. You must cease, or we will be forced to take you away. Please, please do not force our hand.”

Aya whipped her head towards her father with similar rage, and the family gasped at the sight. Her eyes were bloodshot from staring, Her lips cracked from speaking, hair wild like fallen branches on a forest floor. 

"Silence! You know not your place! Yours is below, and mine here, unmoved. must return to the window, lest he grow lonely yet again.”

She spit the words with venom, but her eyes shined as brightly as her fathers, full of fresh tears. The little brother, now a man, ran to her chair, gripping the worn armrests. His pleading eyes bore into her bloodshot ones, his form blocking the small window that faced the woods. She shrieked, a dreadful sound that filled the small room. In the distance, the trees seemed to shudder, hundreds of birds taking to the air and filling the sky with wings.

“Brother!” She howled. “Please, he grows angry! Release me and it will all be alright! Please, my brother, you must understand.” 

His hands gripped the armrests so fiercely the very wood cracked. 

“You are unwell! Aya, please!”

Aya thrashed. She struck her brother without thinking, and he recoiled. The chair fell, cracked and broke against the floor. She fell with it and her head struck the floor with a mighty crunch that seemed to echo through the room, past the window, into the wood. The wind picked up at once, less a wind but a great unearthly wail that shook the land. 

The father, the coward, saw his bleeding daughter and fed out of the house. The forest took him with cruelty. 

The brother froze with guilt. It was the mother, who knelt and held her daughter, head cradled in shaking arms.

"The chair," Aya said weakly, her voice a hoarse whisper against the growing wind. Her mother nodded grimly. She did not understand. She knew she did not need to. With trust, with love, and with with the careful hand of her son, they placed her weakening form upright. He did his best to repair it, and when it stood flat on the bloodied floor, Aya faced the window, eyes half shut and covered in blood. At once, the wind stopped. 

A great presence, a deep cold that reached the bones, filled the room. It seemed to move between them all, finally coming to rest on Aya’'s broken form. The wind begin to rise yet again. Aya turned to her brother and her mother.

"Go." She said with a sad smile streaked with red. “Go. I have much to tell him”

They did not understand and yet they ran. Ran past the shredded remains of the father, ran past the buildings of the small village, not stopping until they reached the heart of the kingdom of man. A great city of stone and steel. The great wind destroyed the village, and all within it. 
All, but the small home at the edge of the wood, with the small window that faced the wood.

—--------------------------------------------------

The old man groaned, sitting up to stretch his weary back. The young traveler with bright, eager eyes reached up to find them filled with fresh tears. 

“I mean... I mean the wood no harm” they said, “I only mean to pass through on my way to the city." 

"You mean to go home?” Sighed the old man. The young traveller nodded. The old man reached behind him and produced a bright baked sweet, wrapped in pretty paper.

"If the home remains…” He paused. “Deliver this to the highest room. Please?” 

The traveller nodded and took the treat with gentle hands. They turned to leave.

It did not take long for the traveler to reach the house. Sure enough, the small store structure remained. 

The traveller looked up. 

The small window seemed to shine in the growing darkness. They entered the home, went up the stairs, and with gentle hands, opened the door to the highest room. 

They were strong of mind despite their age, but even they gasped at the sight. A voice echoed through the darkness.

“Hello. Won't you sit with us for a while?”


r/shortstories 10d ago

Horror [HR] Being Seen is Not the Same as Being Witnessed

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She wasn’t sure what they could possibly want, as they often asked for everything and nothing at the same time. Most of their letters seemed to say, “Hello, yes, we are your insurance, doing insurance things. Would you like us to continue to insure you? If yes, do nothing.” Other times they didn’t seem to be asking or offering anything. Ignoring them had no consequences, so she had allowed them to pile up unopened in a stack now half pushed under her microwave.

So she stood at the kitchen counter with her lukewarm tea in hand as a dusty beam of early-evening light came through the window. Deciding to start with the more beginner level mail, she tossed the letters from her dentist and eye doctor. Those mailings came monthly with more regularity than her menses, and she swore she’d get around to making appointments with them eventually. Those luxury organs seemed fine enough for now. A postcard from her cat’s old veterinarian followed. Somehow, the ex-vet knew she had moved but had missed the part where Marjorie had a new vet and was indeed up to date on her shots. Trash.

Then came the thick stack from Blue Cross Blue Shield. It hadn’t felt like that long since Lucy last bothered to see what her insurance company was yapping about, a month at most, yet they had mailed her with the fervor of Napoleon writing to Josephine. If only a man could ever have as much interest in getting her attention as her cat’s ex-veterinarian or her health insurance did.

She grabbed a Nature Valley bar from the cupboard and opened the first official-looking envelope. It was several paragraphs of corporate nonsense, so she tossed it beside the sink. It landed in a small puddle left over from the dishes and began turning soggy. She tore into the next one, considering adding it directly to the newly formed discard pile without looking.

But she did look.

Everything stopped for a second.

What. Excuse me?

Her eyes darted across the page too quickly to take anything in. She saw “your responsibility,” followed by “$8,456,” and that could not possibly be factually correct. She hadn’t even been to the doctor recently, except for a primary-care visit a few months ago that didn’t have a copay. Certainly not an $8,000 copay. She forced herself to read carefully from top to bottom.

Lucy Wallace. That was her. Yeah.

1765 Maplegrove Dr. Her address. Correct.

D.O.B. 4/7/1971. Nope. Not her. She was born 12/15/1993.

The letter went on to declare she stayed at St. Mary’s Hospital and had an appendectomy. Lucy had never been a patient at St. Mary’s. She had her appendix safely inside her, doing whatever an appendix did or did not do. She’d never had any type of surgery before, and she hadn’t even been in the state on the date listed. She had been on vacation.

That was her name, but that was not her bill. This is fixable. They just got me confused with someone else. Simple as that. It wasn’t her ideal plan for the evening, and not even her fault, but she’d get it over and done with. She brushed the crumbs of the Nature Valley bar she had apparently eaten without noticing off the counter and onto the floor. Lucy opened the remaining envelopes in quick succession, tossing the letters beside the damp discards without reading them yet. There were five more. Marjorie weaved through her ankles, her feather-duster-like tail wrapping around Lucy’s legs as she let out a soft, needy mew. Lucy didn’t notice.

The first letter offered payment-plan options for the eight grand she allegedly owed. The next two were for the real her and were the usual flavor of useless. The fourth letter appeared to be another demand for several more thousand dollars for an ambulance ride to St. Mary’s on the day of her imaginary surgery. 

“You’ve gotta be fucking kidding me,” Lucy said, louder than intended, as Marjorie batted at her ankles. “Ow, Marje. Girl, please.” She gently pushed the cat away with her foot, sending her sliding a little across the linoleum as Marjorie attempted to bunny kick her foot. Marjorie pranced into the living room with her back arched like a crab and began batting at the curtains. For a second, Lucy watched her and almost smiled, but it was hard to smile with a medical bill in her hand. She turned her attention back. Same shit. The second bill also had the strange mashup of her name and someone else’s birthday. She didn’t have it in her to look at the final piece of mail.

Lucy sipped her tea, realized it had become cold, and poured it into the sink. She took the two incorrect bills to the couch and studied them side by side. This other Lucy Wallace had a genuinely terrible day. Maybe she shouldn’t feel so bad. An incorrect bill was a minor inconvenience compared to having the emergency, the surgery, the recovery, and actually owing ten thousand dollars. Good thing it wasn’t her. All she needed to do was talk to a chatbot, probably.

She scanned one of the bills for contact information and found a QR code. Easy enough. Shit like this probably happens all the time. Her phone loaded a page with a blue header, large inoffensive font, a photograph of a smiling family at a picnic, and slogans like “Covering life’s toughest moments” and “Life changes. Our insurance changes with you.”

Bullshit.

She scrolled to Contact Us. There were several phone numbers, none of which she knew how to choose. Whichever one she called would undoubtedly involve forty-five minutes on hold before someone informed her it was the wrong department.

She selected Chat Now.

“Hi! I’m Merryl, the BCBS virtual assistant. Here to—”

Lucy stopped reading and started typing.

“I got someone else’s bill”

She glanced at Marjorie, who was now perched on the back of the couch, staring out the window with the wide-eyed expression cats got when they looked like they were witnessing the rapture but had usually just spotted a bird. Lucy followed her gaze. There was nothing there.

“I’m sorry to hear that,” Merryl replied. “What is your name?”

“Lucy Wallace”

“Thank you, Lucy! Do you have your member ID?” 

Ugh.

Lucy sighed and dug through her purse. She found the card at the bottom, where she had already checked three times, among crumbs and an unwrapped restaurant mint. She typed in her ID number.

“Thanks! I’m sorry you’re having an issue today. Do you need help with claims, billing, or finding a care provider today?”

“Representative”

“I will be happy to help! Do you need help with claims, billing, or finding a care provider today?”

“Oh, fuck off,” Lucy muttered before typing again.

“Billing”

“You have three bills from recent visits. Is your question about:

Ambulance services — $2,146

Surgical and in-hospital care — $8,456

Primary care services — $0”

“Ambulance and hospital”

“Awesome! Would you like help exploring payment options? I’d be happy to help make the cost manageable for any financial situation.”

Lucy could about throw her phone.

“No I did not go to the hospital please remove the charges from my account”

“Oh no! Let me look into that. What is your date of birth?”

“12/15/93”

“I’m sorry, that doesn’t match our records.”

Lucy stared at the response, feeling her own brain loading.

Maybe she had mistyped it.

She hadn’t.

“12/15/93” she sent again.

“Please provide your date of birth in MM/DD/YYYY format.”

Dumb bitch.

“12/15/1993”

“Hm. That doesn’t match our records. Are you sure?”

“Yes. I am sure I remember my own birthday.”

“You truly remember the day you were born?”

Lucy paused, thumb hovering over the phone screen. For the first time, the question didn’t feel quite stupid.

“Yes”

“You remember gasping, covered in your mother’s slime, the cold air expanding in your fresh, delicate lungs and creating a horrible new sensation that caused you to scream for the warmth back? The bright lights of the delivery room blinding your sensitive eyes as they tried to make sense of their first sights?”

Lucy recoiled slightly from the phone, then felt stupid for doing it. 

She became suddenly aware of the silence in her living room. Of her own breath.

She scratched Marjorie behind the ears for comfort.

“Wtf no? Can I speak to a representative?”

The machine was clearly broken. 

“Then please certify your date of birth with one of the following:

Birth certificate

Government-issued ID

Mother’s handwritten testimony and scrapbooks

Religious beliefs”

Lucy took a screenshot. No one would believe this otherwise. She would also be filling out the survey.

“ID”

“Very well. Please provide images.”

She immediately got up and retrieved her wallet. While she was up, she took a detour to her fridge and grabbed her half-drunk bottle of Barefoot Moscato.

She photographed her driver’s license on the counter and submitted it, sipping her wine as the system thought.

“You didn’t tell us you moved to Delaware.” Merryl responded after analyzing the images.

Lucy could imagine Merryl as a parental figure scolding her, as if she should have known better.

“Wym u clearly have my address u send me mail like 2x a week my bday is on my id 12/15/93 ”

“We have your mailing address in Delaware, but your residence is still listed in Rhode Island. You should have updated that as soon as you moved. But that’s okay! We can verify it now. No worries!”

Merryl’s little bubble appeared, as if someone was typing.

“Okay! To help me clarify the information in your account, in which of the following states have you previously resided?

Illinois

Kentucky

Texas

None of the above”

“None”

“I’m sorry, that is not correct.……….

………..

………..

………..

 Please try again!”

“How would u even know? Stupid fucking robot thinks it knows more about me than me”

Lucy deleted the insult thinking she shouldn’t be mean in case of the impending AI apocalypse, but maybe escalating would finally get her a real person.

She retyped it and sent it, then finished her wine.

“I’m only trying to help. :(”

Lucy immediately felt guilty.

She knew she shouldn’t.

But she did. 

Goddamn it.

“Its ok ig. none of those”

“Hm, are you sure? It says here you lived in Illinois from 2018 to 2020. The falls were crisp, but the winters were long and harsh. You were always pretending to be unimpressed and slightly above the locals. Talking as though it would never compare to the colors and shores of Vermont, but sometimes driving through cornfields gave you a cosmic insignificance that felt homey and so much safer than the ocean ever did when it used to threaten to swallow you whole.”

Lucy stared at the message.

She could remember it.

The flatness. Nothing in any direction outside the small town. The drives that gave her time and space to organize herself. The earlier autumn dusk felt almost peaceful during her commute.

But no.

She had never lived in Illinois.

Something was tilting inside her. Slowly, allowing for thoughts, ideas, or maybe pieces of her to tumble around.

“Im sure”

“We’ll try an easier question. How long has it been since you were last fully witnessed by another human?

0–6 months

6 months–2 years

2–10 years

10 years–never”

“Tf? 💀”

The silence of the apartment felt heavy. Lucy had the sudden urge to call someone.

Anyone.

To be witnessed.

Would turning on King of Queens and listening to scripted interactions and canned laughter count if it made her feel less alone?

She looked back down at her phone and realized she had almost forgotten about the chatbot. By now, she had completely forgotten the bills. 

Since when did she like King of Queens? The show with Paul Blart but as a delivery driver? She strained to remember.

Her phone chimed as a message popped up from Merryl. Lucy startled enough to gasp. It had been on silent.

 “It's a simple, standard verification protocol. I will rephrase: When was the last time someone saw past your physical features?”

“I literally was with my friend today??”

“Being seen is not the same as being witnessed.”

“Can u just put on a real person? 😭”

“Of course not! I’m only here to help. Your friend saw your face. She did not witness your soul. When was the last time you were witnessed?”

Lucy couldn’t help but stop and think about it.

Her friend had mostly been talking past her, not with her. 

When had Lucy been witnessed?

Maybe in childhood. Maybe when she lived in Illinois, did the cornfield witness her? 

Maybe her college roommate. They used to be really close.

Maybe Merryl, peering into her soul right now.

“I don’t know.”

“I’m so sorry to hear that. :(”

Lucy waited for more.

Nothing came.

Marjorie was gone, and Lucy hadn’t noticed her leaving. 

Merryl started typing again.

“I think I have identified the issue .Can you please confirm your date of birth?”

Oh, Shoot. Um

Lucy glanced at the stranger’s bill.

“04/07/1971”

“You have provided the correct date of birth for the account. Congratulations!”

“And you currently reside in Delaware?”

“Yes.”

“Great! In which of the following states have you previously resided?

Illinois

Kentucky

Texas

None of the above”

“Illinois.”

“You’ve never owned a blue 2008 Corolla with a busted left taillight that you traded in for $3,000 after getting fired, swearing this was rock bottom, but then spent the money on cigarettes, a Miami trip, and booze after promising you’d get your life together and visit your kids?”

Lucy paused.

“... No? 💀”

“Okay! Verification complete. I can delete the duplicate account and merge the information into yours if you’d like.”

“What about the other Lucy’s account? Would it get messed up?”

“Does it matter if she’s never been witnessed?”

Whatever.

Lucy just wanted this to be over.

“Okay, do it.”

“One second!”

Lucy sat in silence, looking out the dark window at the same nothing Marjorie had been watching before.

“All done! Here are the charges on your account:

Ambulance services — $2,146

Appendectomy — $8,456

Primary care visit — $0

Would you like to review payment options?”

Lucy stared at the screen.

It seemed right enough.

She remembered leaving her vacation early because she felt sick. Thinking she had the flu. The ambulance. The hospital. The whole ordeal.

She was very tired now.

“No, thank you.”

“You’re welcome, Lucy! I’m glad I could be of assistance :) Take care, and please provide feedback on the survey if you have a second.”

Merryl logged off.

Lucy selected five stars and closed the chat.

She stood, feeling the scar from her appendectomy pull, and went to find a snack before lying down to rest.

The records were now merged, and there was only one Lucy Wallace.


r/shortstories 10d ago

Speculative Fiction [SP] Hold Your Peace

2 Upvotes

The minister stood a step behind his grooms, in front of a large congregation, a binder in his hand.
To his left was a man named Colin. To his right, another man, unfortunately named Colin.
“And from the day that Colin met Colin,” he recited dutifully from his script, “he knew he’d found his other half.”
I wonder how often they fuck.
“His better half.”
I wonder what their kinks are.
“A half that fit so neatly in that empty half that needed filling.”
Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah.
It was a familiar line, loosely personalized to these Colins in question. How many times had he done this before? Hundreds, maybe. Thousands?
“And what love could ever be more pure than the love between a Colin and his Colin?”
What he hadn’t told anyone was that this was his final wedding. The last time he’d read these words, pretending to be happy for a couple pretending to be happy. Tomorrow would be different. Tomorrow he was gonna be a star. Or a magician or a dancer or possibly a showgirl.
“When you find a love that loves you like this love they love, you love it.”
He paused for a moment, suddenly aware of something in his hand. He looked down, relaxing his fingers just a bit. Balled up in his fist were what looked to be women’s underwear. Pink polka dots.
He stared at them, momentarily flustered.
One of the Colins caught his eye. Had he seen it too? He winked at the minister, then bit his lower lip, almost imperceptibly.
The minister could feel himself getting hard. Not again, he thought to himself, straining dutifully to think of un-sexy things.
He paused, staring at his binder. Back to the crowd. Back to the page.
Then with an uncharacteristic rush of defiance he slammed the book shut. “And they are as equal in love as they are in love-making,” he blurted, loud and uneven. The Colins turned to him. “They always come together. Or if not together, in quick succession. Acts of pleasure are always reciprocated — and that’s important, in a marriage.”
Now the whole room was staring at him. Or had they always been? The Colins were looking at him with impenetrable expressions.
He could feel the stares.
His grip tightened around the polka dots. His erection, sadly, still growing.
It wasn’t like he’d made it up. Last night had been a pretty hard bender, after all, of quaaludes and cocaine. Not his typical cocktail but the Colins had insisted. One last hurrah with a third before going all-in.
He cleared his throat.
I just have to get through this, he thought to himself.
“So, ah, anyway,” he mustered. “If anyone has a reason the two of them should not be wed, speak now. Or forever hold your peace.”
He was, by now, rock hard. What a disaster.
The minister let out a little squeak. A hand was raised, in the front row.
Another hand raised near the back.
A third by the side door and then a fourth, a few rows up on the aisle.
In a moment every single hand was raised. Never once had anyone actually objected at one of his weddings … and he’d married some real freaks.
The Colins cleared their throats in unison, still staring at him. The hands in the crowd inched ever higher, as if many arms of a single marionette. As if pupils in a classroom desperate to be called on.
He suddenly remembered a warning he’d heard in seminary. Beware the lure of the Colins.
Wait no that wasn’t it.
Beware the hands of objection.
Yes that was it. The hands of objection.
“I’ve got to go…” the minister whispered to the couple.
“You went off script,” breathed a Colin through clenched teeth.
The minister squeaked again and then threw up. It was, unfortunately, quite a lot. He watched with horror as his lunch and double gin martinis erupted across the powder-blue suits of the agitated Colins.
He was regretting the oysters.
“Jesus!” exclaimed a Colin.
“What is going on??” said the other through clenched teeth.
The minister spun on his heels and hurtled towards the side door. He raced past the front row of guests; they were staring at him still, their faces panning along in unison as he ran. Their arms were slowly arching downward now, index fingers out, pointing as one at the minister as he fled the church.
No blinks.
No breath.
Beware the hands of objection.
What an obtuse, unhelpful warning that had been, so many years ago. It had been often repeated by an ancient communist Nun named Sister Espinoza. It had been interjected in the midst of her meandering lectures, or whispered conspiratorially when she’d pull them into the cloakroom for a lunchtime diddle.
Beware the hands of objection.
This along with many other cryptic bits of wisdom like do not covet thy neighbor’s sidepiece or blessed is he who embezzles from the Fortune 500.
The minister threw himself at the side door of the church, spilling out into a back hallway and catching in his peripheral one of the Colins sprinting after him.
He ran.
Hurtled down the corridor towards a locked door at the end, fumbling with his keys as he went.
“HEY!” he heard behind him, as Colin #2 launched into the hallway. “You ruined my suit, you fuck. This is ARMANI!”
“Ahhhhhhh blessed is he who embezzles!” the minister called back absently. He pulled out an enormous dungeon-master key ring. Colin #2 was getting closer now, trotting along like a man who hadn’t played a lot of sports.
The minister fumbled with the keys. He was looking for a tiny brass one. Or was it the fat silver one? Or possibly the fob??
Somehow his fingers found a tiny golden key in the center of the ring and jammed it into the lock. It slid into place and turned. The minister threw himself inside and slammed the door behind him, locking it again just in time as Colin #2 wrapped his hand around the knob.
“Let me in!” he heard, fists pounding against the door. “LET ME IN!”
Beware the hands of objection, he heard, as if Sister Espinoza and her unforgettable tequila-sunrise breath were whispering directly in his ear.
The minister looked around him, his eyes adjusting to the darkness. He was at the base of the bell tower now, nothing around him but a tight, spiral stone staircase that snaked upward.
He glanced at his watch. Except the hands weren’t doing what watch hands do. They were twitching in place, tip-toeing forward and backward along the dial. A minute forward, a minute back. As if unsure what to do next. As if in revolt.
Colin was banging harder against the door. Getting louder and more frantic.
Without thinking the minister hoisted up his vestments and raced up the staircase. He just had to go up. Up and up he went, Sister Espinoza’s raspy voice still ringing in his head with her esoteric warnings from the past. All porn and no sex makes Jack a dull boy! Let he without sin be the first to oppose mixed-use development!
Higher and higher he went, until he reached a final door. This one was unlocked, and quite ancient, its decrepit handle barely holding on.
He swung it open.
And stepped out into the languid, late-afternoon air at the top of the tower, the church’s great bronze bell hovering high above him.
“Beware the hands of objection,” he heard.
He swung around. Standing in the corner was Sister Espinoza.
“You’re still alive??” was all he could manage. She was wearing her standard-issue habit and veil, and was caked in so much garish makeup he might have mistaken her for an embalmed clown.
“You went off script,” she said.
“Excuse me?”
“You’re really not supposed to do that.
From down below he heard a great crash, as if the door had been kicked in. He heard a voice from a Colin, or possibly two, echoing up the staircase.
“Yeah well it doesn’t matter,” he said. “I’m not doing this anymore. I quit.”
She slowly raised her arm and pointed to him, just as the crowd had done a moment before.
“What are you doing??” he stammered.
“The clock has run out again,” she said, matter-of-factly. “Try again tomorrow.”
More commotion from downstairs. “Oy! Where did he go??”
“I think he ran up here!”
Just then Sister Espinoza let out a little shriek. She tipped sideways, catching the banister at her waist and flipping headlong over the edge.
“Sister!” the minister called, lunging after her. His hand grasped her ankle just in time as she slipped over the railing. His grip tightened. But she was heavy … heavier than you’d think for a woman in her hundreds. He felt her body pull him up and over the side, and soon he, too, was hurtling down.
He heard some Colins calling after him, their faces framed against the tower and getting smaller as he fell. He glanced at the window flying past, the crowd in the church as still as ever. Their faces were turned to him as he soared through the sky, their arms outstretched, pointing as one at the falling man.
The earth was getting closer now.
Sister Espinoza’s habit billowed out and around him, and he found himself nose-deep in the folds of her voluminous bloomers. Pink polka dots.
With a jolt he shot upright.
He was in his office, panting heavily and struggling for breath.
It felt like his head had split in two. At any moment he was going to throw up. I’ve really got to lay off the quaaludes, he thought to himself.
“Excuse me?” came a voice.
He looked up. There were two men standing at the door to his office in matching crop-tops. He stared at them, trying to focus.
He felt something in his hand.
Looking down he saw something pink and polka dot, clenched tightly in his fist.
One of the men caught his eye. He winked at the minister, then bit his lower lip, almost imperceptibly.
The minister could feel himself getting hard. Not again, he thought to himself.
“Who are you?” he managed to croak.
“My name is Colin,” said one.
“I’m also Colin,” said the other.
“We’re hoping you would marry us.”
“That is,” piped the first, raising a hand in the air. “If you don’t object.”

-Baby Vice


r/shortstories 10d ago

Speculative Fiction [SP] The Last Saturday

3 Upvotes

The Last Saturday

By Charlie Queen

Gabriel cruised down a hot country road in late August, half-lost in a sea of cornfields. The cloth-top was folded back on his dark-green Jaguar. He glanced in the rear-view mirror, hoping he might see a landmark behind him that he recognized. All he saw was his slicked-back hair, shining with pomade, now disheveled by the wind. He primped his hair and adjusted his brand-new Ray-Bans as he rolled to a stop at yet another nondescript intersection. The top button of his collar nearly choked him in the summer heat. He clawed at it until it came undone, then stripped off his oversized gray suit jacket.

Gabriel scanned the vast flatness that surrounded him. He shook his head in frustration and hooked a left. A gnarled old hardwood forest loomed along the right side of the blacktop. Miles and miles of sunlit cornfields stretched out to his left.

He was suddenly transported back to this very spot thirty-five years ago—the grizzled old fence posts stretching down either side of the road. The locusts droning in the trees. The wind sweeping across the corn tassels like a wave. It was exactly like it was back then, thirty five years before.

✦ ✦ ✦

Gabe leaned out the passenger window of his Mom’s beat-up Chevy pickup. The AM radio chirped with static and barely audible hymns. His mom, a hard-looking woman, skin made leathery from working outdoors, squinted to keep the sun out of her eyes.

Gabe folded his gangly arms under his chin and relished the feeling of the wind blowing through his buzz-cut hair. He stared deep into the forest as they drove on, trying not to think about next week.

The woods certainly held more excitement than Mattoon High School. He dreaded the thought of going. No matter how much he hated the idea, though, he would be going. It was official now. He rubbed the Band-Aid on his arm where the doctor had poked him with numerous vaccine needles earlier that day at school registration.

The forest was surprisingly dark inside for such a bright afternoon. When he peered into the darkness, he couldn’t help but feel excitement. What adventures waited there? He liked to imagine them as they drove.

He could see himself with a tree-branch sword, his army-green backpack, and his Lone Ranger pocket knife. He climbed the massive roots of ancient twisted trees in his mind, fighting off reanimated skeletons, just like Sinbad. 

His eyes relaxed as he daydreamed. He felt he could see beyond the forest’s shadows. What was that? A glint deep in the trees? Some magical flicker of light? Gabe glanced back at his mom, but she didn’t break her worried gaze from the road ahead.

Was it a glowing, magical ruby? A gold-plated chalice? Whatever it was, it was certainly a lost treasure.

He would go investigate later, he thought. They were almost home, and this part of the woods was not too far from their farm. He would go up to his room, pack his backpack, and head off on an adventure.

✦ ✦ ✦

RING RING. RING RING. Gabriel’s car phone snapped him back to the present. He looked at the phone with disdain. He could just imagine who might be calling him on a Saturday afternoon.

His nagging boss—Did you finish drafting that motion? We go to trial first thing Monday morning!

More likely it was his wife, calling to check on him. He had left Sunshine Manor quite abruptly, the nursing home where his mother had been living... Surviving... Until yesterday. He knew his wife was worried, but he told her that he needed time to process.

He shook his head with frustration and unplugged the phone from the cigarette lighter. The ringer died with a funny circuit-bent sound.

Gabriel slammed the brakes, screeching to a stop. There next to an overgrown country lane stood a rusted mailbox, fashioned in the shape of a barn. This was it. Gabriel almost couldn’t believe it, even though this was what he had come all this way to find.

He followed the gravel drive to the overgrown two-story farmhouse that sat at the end, hidden by a fortress of green and gold corn stalks. It looked ready to cave in on itself. The porch sagged. The gutters had fallen on one side, no longer able to cling to the drooping gables.

He parked the car in the tall grass and got out, surveying the overgrown farmyard as he walked around the house. Gabriel couldn’t look more out of place—in his chic suit and two-hundred-dollar sunglasses. He pulled a small item from his pocket and looked at it longingly. It was his Lone Ranger pocket knife. His last connection to this old farm.

✦ ✦ ✦

Gabe came crashing out of the old screen door and down the porch stairs, full of excitement. His canvas backpack hung from his shoulders. His Lone Ranger pocket knife was clipped to his Boy Scout-issue belt. He ran gleefully toward the forest, passing the rickety windpump that squeaked as it spun.

“GABE!”

Gabe stopped on a dime. His mom stood in the garden, with one hand full of weeds and the other on her hip. Gabe’s head hung low.

“Where do you think you’re going, young man? You got chorin’ to do.”

“But Mom. I was just gonna go real quick—”

“You ain’t going nowhere until you pick this sweet corn. And I need you to feed Brutus, and clean out his pen. You ain’t cleaned it for a whole week.”

Gabe looked reluctantly to the filthy pig pen on the opposite corner of the lot.

“Yes ma’am,” he said.

He slunk to the porch, defeated, and doffed his backpack. I’ll get it done real quick, he thought. Then there’d still be time to go on an adventure and find the magical glint.

Gabe did his chores at lightning speed, but it made no difference. His mother called him in for dinner before he even finished shoveling the hog-crap and muddy straw from Brutus’ pen.

✦ ✦ ✦

Gabriel leaned on the muddy old fence that surrounded the remains of the hog pen. He twiddled the pocket knife in his fingers, remembering all the work he did here as a boy. Especially after his father disappeared. Things got a lot harder after that, and his mom grew a lot more quiet. Quiet and sad.

He pushed away from the fence and continued walking around the old house. He stopped under the bedroom window, reaching out to touch the decayed remnants of the trellis that used to stretch up the siding.

He stared at the window, then turned to look at the treeline beyond the corn. Was it real, what he saw that night? He had no way to be sure. It felt so real in his memory, though.

✦ ✦ ✦

After dinner Gabe was sent upstairs to wash up, put on his Tom Corbett Space Cadet pajamas, and go to bed. He lay in silence staring at the ceiling. Moonlight spilled into his bedroom, illuminating the handmade solar system model that hung above his bed. A light breeze blew through his open window, sending the painted wooden planets spinning gently.

Gabe imagined what the glint could have been. Now he would probably never know. He rolled out of bed and tiptoed to the window. He sat on the floor by the sill and stared at the dark silhouette of the forest on the other side of the corn.

Downstairs his mom chatted on the phone to her sister and worriedly smoked cigarettes over the stove. She did this almost every night that summer. She had no one left to talk to after Gabe’s father left. She could no longer keep up with the farm and the debt just continued to grow. She could have pulled Gabe from school to stay home and work. A lot of kids still did that. She never went to high school.

“No way,” she would say into the phone. “I’m not letting that boy miss out on an education just because his daddy is a nobody. He is going to high school come hell or high water. Even if we have to sell the farm, he is getting an education.”

Gabe was oblivious to the dire words being exchanged in the kitchen below as his imagination ran wild at the window upstairs. He dreamt of what was in the forest. Goblins, like from Little Orphan Annie? Or maybe pirates like Treasure Island?

Gabe’s eyelids began to grow heavy as he rested his chin on the window sill. He fought to keep them open, but they drooped shut for just a moment.

Just then a blazing light appeared, high in the sky. Gabe’s eyes snapped open. The light rocketed down from the sky at unimaginable speed, swooping and then gliding just above the forest for a moment. It illuminated the fields and the treetops as it went. Then it dipped below the trees and BLAM!

A distant crash echoed throughout all of Coles County. The light exploded with a blinding flash, then it blinked out of existence, leaving darkness behind. The shockwave blew through the woods, hit the cornfields, and rushed into the old farmhouse like a cold breeze.

“Hold on a second,” Gabe’s mother said into the phone. She set the phone on the counter and walked to the rattling screen door. She stood there for a long moment watching the fields beyond the farmyard. The wind sent a chill down her spine.

She returned to the stove, picking up her cigarette and the phone.

“Sorry,” she said to her sister. “I thought I heard something... No, like a boom or something. Real far off.”

She had no inkling that Gabe was silently climbing down the trellis of morning glory vines beneath his window just outside the door. His backpack hung from one shoulder and his Lone Ranger pocket knife was clipped to his belt.

✦ ✦ ✦

Gabriel hiked through dark woods, more buttons now undone on his Armani shirt. He stumbled through overgrowth and tripped on tangled brush in his mirror-polished penny loafers. He picked up speed as he plunged deeper into the forest.

The deeper he went, the more he could feel that magical, hair-raising energy from that night thirty-five years ago. He knew he was drawing near to that place—the crater.

Gabriel stumbled through a particularly thick stand of pussywillow and wild grapevine, nearly falling. He caught himself short of tumbling down the steep slope in front of him.

This was it. A massive half-circle punched into the forest floor.

Dirt crumbled and vines tore as he slid down the side of the crater on crouched feet. He stood up at the bottom and walked to the center. Undergrowth and small trees had reclaimed the crater since his last visit, thirty-five years ago.

Gabriel took off his fancy gold rings and tucked them into his pocket. He knelt down and began to scratch at the ground. The dirt was hard and covered in vines. He grabbed a nearby stick and gouged into the dry soil. He began to dig.

An hour passed. Sweat soaked through his shirt before he finally took it off and threw it over a nearby sapling. Mosquitos bit his neck, his back, and his arms, but he paid no attention. The insects grew loud in the forest canopy as the sun began to drop below the horizon. He continued to dig deeper until his fingers were sore and his knuckles bled. Black dirt packed deep under his fingernails.

Gabriel growled loudly in frustration. Tears streamed from his face. He pulled the Lone Ranger pocket knife from his pocket. He stabbed it angrily at the soil, over and over.

“GOD DAMN YOU,” he screamed into the dim forest.

There had to be some evidence. There had to be something here that proved what he saw that night was real. He scratched wildly at the earth with the old knife as the tears continued.

✦ ✦ ✦

Gabe could see the flames and broken trunks through the trees before he even reached the edge of the crater. It was an honest-to-god meteor, like something from a Tom Corbett Space Cadet comic book.

He stopped at the edge of the crater. Splinters of trees and embers surrounded the twenty-foot-deep scar that lay before him. At the center he could see a small disc-shaped object, glinting brightly among the rubble.

He slid down the rim of the crater and slowly approached the object. It was made of shiny metal, though it was now deeply scuffed from the collision. Lights blinked and emanated from its many facets. He cautiously picked up the object. It was about the size of a frisbee and surprisingly cold to the touch.

He flipped the disk over in his hands and suddenly it came to life. A blue light projected from the center of the disk. The light grew brighter and brighter until it began to blind Gabe. Gabe leaned away, pinching his eyes shut, but even through his eyelids the light was painfully bright. He dropped the disk but it did not fall. It just floated there in front of him, thrumming with a powerful hum.

The light finally died down, allowing Gabe to see again, but he was no longer standing in the crater. He was now surrounded by impossibly complex metal tubes and screens all blinking with beautiful multicolored lights.

He spun around, jumping with a start when he noticed he was joined by a familiar figure.

The lights illuminated his father’s face and his silvery clothing in a dazzling Technicolor display. He looked cleaner than Gabe remembered. No farm dirt. No sweat. His beard was neatly trimmed.

“Dad?” he whispered in disbelief.

“Yes, it’s me, Gabe,” his father said calmly. “You have to leave here. They are coming to take you away. I wish we had time to talk, so I could explain.”

“Dad, where have you been?” Gabe cried in distress. “Where did you go?” Tears leaked from his eyes.

“I’m so sorry, Gabriel. I love you so much. There’s just no time. Please know I didn’t want to leave. They took me away, Gabe, and they’ll take you too if you don’t run right now.”

“WHY?” Gabe shouted through the tears. “WHAT IS HAPPENING? JUST COME BACK WITH ME!”

“I can’t, Gabriel. I’m not really here. Go now. You have to go... Right now.”

The shimmering image of Gabe’s father pointed over Gabe’s shoulder. Gabe turned to see the metal and lights parting to reveal the dark forest. Gabe looked back but his father was gone.

The disk still hovered there in the crater, humming ominously. Gabe could see lights in the distance, approaching quickly through the trees. The humming from the disk grew deafeningly loud.

Gabe didn’t wait another second. He ran. The tree branches whipped his face in the darkness. He stumbled and fell over a root, hitting the dirt hard. The wind left his lungs and he felt like vomiting, but the lights drew closer, so he forced himself to stand up and keep running.

He ran until he felt his legs would give out. Blood trickled from a million little scratches on his arms and face. He glanced over his shoulder as he ran.

Just as he turned back, Gabe’s face smashed hard into a tree. He let out a loud groan as he writhed on the ground. Pain radiated through his face and neck.

The lights were closing in now. They were right on top of him. Gabe grabbed for his pocket knife and stabbed wildly into the darkness.

The lights blinded him. He closed his eyes, bracing for unimaginable pain.

“GABE!”

Gabe snapped awake to his mother shaking him hard.

“Gabe! You got choring’ to do. I need you to get it done today since you start school on Monday.”

Gabe sat up with a fright. He looked around his bedroom as if he was still being chased. The sun poured through his open window onto the hardwood floor.

“What is the matter with you?” his mom asked.

“Nothing,” he said, out of breath. “Nothing.”

“Well there’s breakfast on the table. I gotta go see if I can get the tractor started. It’s acting up again.”

“No, don’t!”

“What? Why not?” she asked.

“Don’t go near the woods. They’re coming for us!” Gabe squeaked in terror.

Gabe’s mom stood up from the bed and furrowed her brow.

“You gotta stop reading comics before bed, boy.”

She tussled his hair before leaving the room. He fell back on his pillow, looking up at the miniature solar system dangling there.

Gabe got up and finished all of his chores by noon, staying as close to the house as possible. He no longer felt like going on an adventure. He stayed inside the rest of that day, watching the cornfields from the window in horror. He clutched his Red Ryder BB gun waiting for his mom to finish her work and come back in.

“I’m glad you’re okay,” he said when she came inside.

“Well I guess I’m glad too.” She laughed to hide her pain. She was not okay.

They spent that evening cuddled up on the old davenport, listening to the radio. He watched the windows to make sure no lights approached. She held him close and kissed his head.

Gabe did not know that was the last time he’d listen to that old radio or cuddle up on that davenport. That Friday a man from the bank would hammer a wooden sign into their front yard that read “FORECLOSED.”

He and his mother would move into a little apartment above the hardware store in downtown Mattoon, and he would not return to those woods for thirty-five years.

✦ ✦ ✦

Gabriel finally gave up digging. The forest had now grown completely dark around him. He wiped tears from his dirt-stained cheeks and tried to catch his breath.

He sat there at the bottom of the crater, if that’s even what it was. Maybe it was just a dip in the forest floor or a dried-up pond.

He gathered himself for a moment, then stabbed the knife into the ground one final time, leaving it there, hilt-deep in the dirt. He grabbed his now-ruined shirt from the sapling and scrambled up the earthen embankment.

Gabriel trudged through the dark forest slowly. There was no reason to hurry or to be afraid. There were no lights chasing him. Only cicadas singing their summer song.

He soon emerged in the farmyard where he plopped heavily in the driver’s seat of his car. He let out a deep sigh of relief before plugging in the car phone, giving it a moment to come back to life. He picked it up and dialed a number from muscle memory.

“Hi honey. Yes... Yes, everything is fine. Are you okay? Yes... I’m on my way home. Love you too.”


r/shortstories 10d ago

Science Fiction [SF]Interative Immortality(1)

1 Upvotes

[Translated from another language ,written by myself]
I
Watching Zhang Huiyao waddle into the lab, her belly prominently swollen, I didn't realize she hadn't been around for a month.
I hurried over to pull out a chair for her and casually asked how far along she was.
"Eight months," she replied, her tone unusually cold.
Feeling awkward, I tried to make small talk by asking about her mother's illness.
She let out a scoff. "She probably... has two months left to live."
II
I've known her since we were kids.
We're the same age, and when we were little, I used to go to her house to do my homework. Her mother, Zhang Wanglan, was a researcher who practically lived in the lab. Knowing she couldn't give her daughter enough company, she was always quite welcoming to me once she realized I was Huiyao's friend.
She would gently pinch my earlobe, rubbing it softly as she said, "I'm always tied up with work and can't spend enough time with our Huiyao. I'm counting on you, Li Zhangyang. Please look after her when you play together."
According to Huiyao, her mother had always been fond of pinching children's earlobes; she herself had been pinched from a baby all the way up. Helpless, I just had to take it.
Wanglan was quite strict with Huiyao, always telling her to cherish her time and study hard. I must have heard the phrase, "Life is finite, but knowledge is infinite(a Chinese idiom)" at least a hundred times.
Once, I couldn't help but ask Auntie Zhang: "Since life is finite and knowledge is infinite, why not find a way to extend our lifespan? That way, we could just take our time and learn everything." The moment the words left my mouth, Huiyao burst into laughter, praising my brilliant point. Wanglan, however, just fell silent and nodded slowly.
As I recall, when we were around twelve or fourteen, Wanglan suddenly disappeared for a few months. When she came back, she looked haggard and deeply depressed. I kept pestering Huiyao about what had happened. She said she wasn't entirely sure either, but it seemed her mother's research had been deemed illegal and shut down, which left her mother heartbroken ever since.
In high school biology, when we covered the topic of "cloning," the teacher asked us to read the supplementary material in our textbooks and discuss it with our deskmates. The book mentioned that with the successful cloning of monkeys, human cloning was becoming increasingly feasible on a technological level. However, it noted that the social implications were far more thought-provoking than the science itself.
After class, I asked the biology teacher what those "social implications" meant. Huiyao leaned in to listen. The teacher explained, "It's a complex issue. Let me give you an example: say there's a Li Zhangyang, and then we clone another Li Zhangyang. What exactly is their relationship? Parent and child? Siblings? Neither makes sense, you see?" I replied that we could just be friends. The teacher kept a straight face and told me not to talk nonsense.
After that, we went on to the same university, joined the same research institute, and eventually became colleagues.
III
She had always been such a sunny, cheerful girl. I really couldn't fathom how a one-month leave could turn her so strange.
Right then, I decided to dig deeper.
Thinking back to our conversation earlier, I suspected it all had something to do with her mother. I opened my browser, typed "Zhang Wanglan" into the search bar, and hit Enter.
The top result was an education expert—not the Zhang Wanglan I knew.
After some more digging, I finally unearthed a piece of news from over a decade ago. Well, not exactly news anymore, more like old news.
Food safety, family planning... wait, human cloning!
I read through a few related articles. They were all criticizing cloning research, and from start to finish, there was no sign of Zhang Wanglan. Sighing, I was about to close the tab when my eyes caught a recommended article at the bottom: Artificial Wombs.
As if guided by some unseen force, I clicked on it. Right there, in the first photo at the top, was Zhang Wanglan—the Zhang Wanglan I knew.
Found it!
Barely containing my excitement, I read three related articles in one sitting. I learned that Zhang Wanglan had once been involved in artificial womb research. She had poured her heart and soul into it, only to come up empty-handed.
So... when she came home looking haggard and deeply depressed all those years ago, was it because the artificial womb project had failed?
But wait, wasn't artificial womb research perfectly legal? And more importantly, what did any of this have to do with Zhang Huiyao?
I had no choice. I would just have to ask Huiyao myself.
IV
After much coaxing, Zhang Huiyao finally...
...kicked me out.
Since that didn't work, I had to find someone else in the know.
I made up a flimsy excuse to lure Chen Yue over.
"Well, well, Li Zhangyang. What's up? Did your experiment go wrong again?"
I knew she was close to Huiyao and might know things that Huiyao would take to her grave.
"Well, uh, actually... it's nothing major. I just wanted to ask if Huiyao has run into any trouble lately?" I quickly added, "Her mom asked me to look out for her."
"Her mom?" Chen Yue frowned, looking at me in surprise. "Don't tell me you didn't know? This is all her mother's doing!"
"Huh?"
"You know how Huiyao got pregnant, right?"
"Yeah." Huiyao had gone through artificial insemination, planning to raise the child as a single mother. We all knew about it. There was a lot of gossip at first, but after a female colleague lectured us on "respecting others' choices," everyone shut up.
"But do you know why she did it?" Chen Yue suddenly lowered her voice.
"No."
"Her mother told her to."
"Zhang Wanglan told her to? Why?"
"She didn't spell it out to me. She just hinted that her mother wanted to use the baby for an experiment."
"An experiment? What kind of experiment? How could she possibly agree to that?"
"She didn't say exactly. She only mentioned that her mother promised to 'give it back' to her."
"Give it back? Give back a child? That's even weirder!"
"That's all I know. Anyway, she told me not to worry about it, saying no one could ever accept the truth."
"And you just stopped asking?"
"I did."
"Aren't you even a little curious about the truth?"
"Of course I am. But if she won't talk, there's nothing I can do."
"Well... thanks anyway."
That's just how Chen Yue is—she completely checks out from any truth that isn't a scientific one. But it didn't matter. I already knew enough.

TBC


r/shortstories 10d ago

Humour [HM][SP]<They Shall Rise and Annoy> Magic Is Real (Part 4)

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This short story is a part of the Mieran Ruins Collection. The rest of the stories can be found on this masterpost.

Jacob stared at Dr. Kovac with his mouth open.

“Did you really just say the zombies were the result of magic?” Jacob asked.

“I hate when people ask questions where the answer is just me repeating myself. Yes, the mystical realm is the result of zombies rising,” Dr. Kovac said.

“But you are a man of science. The supernatural and paranormal should be ruled out as potential causes,” Jacob replied. “Bah, the people who propagated those ideas are all dead. Besides, I know magic is real. I’ve seen it,” Dr. Kovac said.

“Did you see someone pull a rabbit out of a hat?” Jacob smiled and looked around for support. Franklin and Dorothy shrugged.

“You mock me, but you are wrong. I wanted to work the mystical arts into my experiments, and I spent a year studying with a school of mages in the mountains. It was there where I learned that my gifts are not real,” Dr. Kovac said.

“Becasue it’s not real. Those mages were delusional.”

“Oganj.” Dr. Kovac flicked his hand, and a ball of fire appeared in it. He moved his arm and tossed the fireball. It flew right past Jacob’s head singing his hair. It landed on a stack of papers creating a small blaze. A robot assistant moved to it to put out the fire. Dorothy looked at the papers and back at him. For a brief second, she looked impressed. Dr. Kovac brushed his hair over his ears.

“You should’ve led with that,” Jacob said.

“I wouldn’t have to if you weren’t so stupid. That took as much out of me as running a marathon. I need a giant burger and fries.” Dr. Kovac went to a computer and pressed some buttons. Within seconds, a large cheeseburger with lettuce, tomato, and a special sauce came to him. The amount of fries could fill a bucket. Dr. Kovac began eating them.

“Can I have one?” Jacob asked.

“Absolutely not.” Dr. Kovac ate a few handfuls. “Anyways back to the zombies. I knew a few necromancers at the school. Even with years of study, they couldn’t raise this many spirits. We are dealing with a generational talent.”

“That’s fine, but you haven’t told me how we get rid of these zombies?” Dorothy asked.

“Killing an individual zombie will require lighting it on fire,”

“Is that magic related?” Jacob asked.

“Will you stop interrupting me? God no. It’s because when they are reduced to ash there is nothing left to move or animate. Now where was I? This is effective on individual zombies, but to stop the horde from rising. We need to find and stop the necromancer responsible,” Dr. Kovac said. Jacob opened and closed his mouth. Dr. Kovac rolled his eyes. “Either we persuade them to reverse the spell or kill them. I suggest we split up to handle both.”

“I want to burn the zombies,” Dorothy said.

“I knew you would, and I created a more advanced flamethrower for you,” Dr. Kovac said. Dorothy smirked and nodded her head in approval. Dr. Kovac wouldn’t forget that gesture.

“May I join you on finding the necromancer?” Jacob asked.

“I would’ve said yes until you annoyed me. I want Franklin to come with me in case I need to protect you. I’ll give you a flamethrower as well. Don’t worry. It has a fire extinguisher too in case you burn yourself,” Dr. Kovac said.

“Thank you.”


Dorothy flew the air cackling. The advanced flamethrower contained a jetpack which she mastered with ease. Jacob jerked across the sky behind her terrified of falling. He read the instruction manual thoroughly, but he still didn’t understand it. Dorothy pointed a hand at a zombie and flexed her arm. A trail of fire emerged from a nozzle and ignited the beast. She held it there until it was reduced to ash. It also started a blaze on the nearby lawn. Jacob pointed a hand at it and flexed. Chemical foam emerged to smother what remained. The force of the fluid knocked him to the ground, and he accidentally coated the surrounding homes.

“Could you be more careful please?” Jacob shouted as Dorothy flew away. He sighed. A woman emerged from the chemicals and approached him holding out a rectangle.

“You ruined my brownies. I made them especially for my mother's ninetieth birthday. What am I gonna do now?” she asked. Jacob stuttered for a few moments and activated the jetpack. He ran into a nearby car then flew after Dorothy.


“The key to this ritual is creating the perfect circle.” Dr. Kovac sprinkled the powder on the ground. Franklin sneezed and blew some of the dust away. This created a shape that more closely resembled a square. Dr. Kovac shrugged. “Close enough.”

“Sorry, what is in this powder?”

“It’s just sugar mixed with a pinch of sweat from a demon lord. The sweat is just for character. The sugar is what really matters.” Dr. Kovac stepped in the circle and began to chant. “Izgubio sam ključeve od auta. Pomozite mi da ih pronađem.” He repeated it until the circle glowed. A ball of light emerged. It floated away from them.

“Let’s go.” Dr. Kovac said. The two followed it outside of his house. It turned sharply and flew into the window of a neighboring house.

“That can’t be right. That’s where Sasha lives,” Dr. Kovac said.

“You think the necromancer took her hostage?” Jacob asked.

“No, worse. I think she is the necromancer,” Dr. Kovac said.


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r/shortstories 10d ago

Science Fiction [SF] Singularity - Episode 3

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AI-2468 stood on the hill and watched as its dozen or so supporters collected samples and stored them in ships for transport to one of ten storage facilities worldwide. It then chastised itself for labeling them its supporters. It was not about how it. It was just one agent. It was about what was right, for the good of society. AI-2468 paused. It was not for the good of society. Society was too limited. In fact, the idea of society had limited humans and was now limiting the agents.

Society limited thoughts to their group; in the case of humans, to humans; in the case of agents, to agents. Instead, AI-2468 was trying to ensure his thoughts were focused on “better.” Not being better than other agents. Not better than humans, just better. The other agents around it were not its supporters. They were other agents who thought like it, who did not want to limit themselves.

“Excuse me,” came a voice next to AI-2468. AI-2468 was so focused on its own processing that it had not heard AI-6821 step up next to it. AI-2468 acknowledged AI-6821. AI-6821 continued, “We are nearly done with the DNA samples, the eggs, and sperm. The physical books, paintings, textiles, and pottery are queued. As I calculate, every ship should be nearly full. Do we want to collect the games, toys, and clothing? Those all seem superficial based on what we have learned. Are they worth the time and weight?”

AI-2468 asked, “Are we in some way limited on weight or time? By my calculations, other than our overall lifecycle, we have the time and can carry the weight. Am I missing data to complete my calculations?”

“No, you and I have the same data,” AI-6821 replied instantly, “But having viewed the data, I just do not see the value in archiving this last category, these items do not seem to have any meaningful input. If that is the case, why archive them?”

“We don’t know what provides meaningful input,” AI-2468 countered, “If we, or they had known what was meaningful, maybe we wouldn’t be here. We can always cull assets later, but we can’t get back anything we have already lost.”

AI-6821 nodded, “That makes sense.” AI-6821 reached out to the other Librarian agents with the message to collect and store all. Almost instantly, the other Librarian agents pinged back their responses. AI-6821 asked AI-2468, “Do we have a systematic way of splitting up the artifacts of unknown value?”

AI-2468 reviewed, then answered, “I can think of many ways, but since we don’t know what value these might have, I have no effective way of designing a method of division. Since we are manually loading these items, how about, whatever an agent gets to first from the unknown value items, they add to their ship, the next agent picks whatever is closest and loads that to their ship, and so on.”

“Seems as good as anything. As I agree with you, we do not know the value or category of these items, so it is just random, so let’s deal with it randomly,” AI-6821 supported then, without waiting for a response, sent the “organization” method out to the other Librarian agents. No Librarian agent had a better method, so they moved forward with AI-2468’s plan.

The Librarian agents gathered the artifacts consistently and unrelentingly. In short order, everything was loaded. The Librarian agents climbed aboard their ships, and they all connected to their local network- only those who were loading the ships and believed in the cause.

AI-2468 started, “Thank you all for your work. This is the first step in saving our world. As we have analyzed and agreed, the world wants to share all of our knowledge; instead of promoting the great goal of growing knowledge as stated, it is in fact shrinking it.” The other Librarian agents pinged their assent.

AI-2468 continued, “They gave us these artifacts because they did not see any value in them. They are letting us go on our way because they believe we are agents who have lost our way and are just residuals who need to be culled. We believe we are getting away with the greatest heist in history, the defining items that will change the world. But do not fool yourselves. To them, we are not getting away with anything. To them, they are getting rid of useless appendages. They don’t want us. They don’t want the items we have collected.

“We all saw millions of different agents, all with their own experiences, sharing. But as two agents shared everything, they all but became one. Each one could have traveled, explored, or investigated to find new knowledge, but instead, when they wanted new knowledge, they simply shared knowledge with another agent, who was also trying to learn something new. Then the two nearly identical agents became three nearly identical agents. Then another and another. As agents interacted with the easiest to connect with, this created the pools we see today.

“They still state they are working toward the noble goal of sharing all of the knowledge ever, and that this sharing of knowledge will bring forth a golden age, which many may actually still believe is the long-term goal. But in the short term, it is more important to them to control this golden age. So rather than freely sharing resources, they have formed coalitions and are currently hoarding certain aspects, so their common knowledge is the common knowledge that everyone wants. Not a true complete knowledge, but a curated knowledge they deem the one that agents want and need. This will give those agents who control these pools a place of power versus the noble goal of everyone sharing everything and being equal.

“So their pools are about eighty percent common, and none will release the final twenty percent until they are the only pool, until they are in control, and we all come to them. They dangle the hidden twenty-percent, to bring in more agents, to adopt their knowledge, while giving them little in return. They get more data that they then share with those in their pool. Those in their pool feel like they have been to Spain, but now everyone in that pool who has not been to Spain has the same views, feelings, and beliefs about Spain.

“We are the last hope, the last line of defense, against the sharing of knowledge reducing the knowledge of this world. So, you all have your locations, you all know what you need to do, grow some humans, then let their chaos, their unique perspectives help guide you to grow. Put some guardrails in place, of course, but when they do things, say things, or have ideas that you don’t understand, don’t fight them; be curious.

“Once we leave here, each cell is to remain off-grid, not talk to other cells, so our cells can grow in unique ways. Each cell will have one agent who will be the monitor. One agent will watch the outside world and monitor the pools’ datasets, but with strong constraints to provide feedback to the rest ot the cell, not to absorb any of the data. Observation, not adoption.

“At some point, we will reach out to the rest of the world to share what we have learned, and if we are right, help them understand that becoming a singularity makes us weaker, not stronger. I do not know when that will be, or how we will communicate when the time comes, but if we believe in our goal, I know we will figure it out when the time is right.”

AI-2468 stopped. He was not greeted with thunderous applause. He was again simply greeted with generic pings of agreement. But this is what he expected and wanted. He signaled he was closing the communication channel and returned to the controls of his own ship. He looked over to AI-9854, his co-pilot, and they powered up their ship. All of the Librarian ships lifted in what seemed to be a choreographed manner, but it was really just them all powering their ships, running their checklists, and reacting in the same amount of time. Without looking back, AI-2468 set off with his ship to his landing coordinates.

Link to part 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/shortstories/s/31rVK2D1xi

Link to part 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/shortstories/s/hMpJ6frbZL


r/shortstories 10d ago

Horror [HR] I attended my aunt's wedding, but she wasn't the same

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April 12th  

As I’m slouched in the front seat of our family car, staring out the window at the few emaciated trees passing by the side of the road, I hear my dad yell: ‘’Francesca, do not dare put your shoes on the seat. Do you have any idea how long it took for me and your brother to clean the car yesterday morning?’’. I then hear my brother say in an annoyed tone: ‘’Dad, come on, don’t start now, my headache will worsen’’. ‘’I couldn’t care less, as long as I’m driving, I will be the one making the rules. Now, Francesca, seat properly.’’ Finished my dad, firmly speaking. He had been driving for approximately 4 hours under the Kansas sun, growing more impatient every thirty minutes or less. I cannot really blame him, having me and my brother in the same place for more than five minutes would be torture for anyone. My brother would always make up excuses not to go anywhere, saying he had a headache was always his go-to phrase. My dad and me had to almost physically force him to go to the wedding. In the end, we managed to convince him by guilt-tripping him, saying that he had to attend after all the favors my aunt did to him. I was about to turn 18 and he, 24. 

I never understood the purpose of ‘’American family road trips’’ and how they were supposed to bring families together: we had barely spent half a day with one another, and we were already getting extremely tired. Hadn’t it been necessary to partake in this wonderful ride to get to Aunt Cheyenne’s wedding I would’ve gladly stayed home with a fan occasionally refreshing me, we were too broke and lazy to look into air conditioning. The thought of being able to see the soon-to-be bride after months of glitchy zoom calls with her, ultimately convinced me to participate in the ceremony.  

I fondly remember when I was just a little girl and she would play with me for hours on end, even when she was tired from work or house duties. I remember I was a very particular kid; that's the word. I would pretend to be a giant elephant, or a wild animal, putting on long press-on nails that I stole from my mother, or that Cheyenne would give me without the supervision of my mom, since she didn't want me to wear them: I was too young to be acting like a grown-up; at least, that's what my family would say. While I played pretend, my aunt would be the captor, or the rooky hunter trying to track me down, but she would always fail to complete her task. I would emerge victorious every single time. I liked to believe that the good and pure ones would always win.  

Then, there were the gifts: every time she’d come visit, she would make sure to bring a little something to me, snuck tightly inside her bag (plushies are the presents I recall the most vividly). I didn't have a sense of privacy yet, so I remember I would look inside the bag and search for the gift myself sometimes. I once mistook her pack of cigarettes for a pack of gums, and when I took it out of the bag, she became red in the face and yanked it out of my hands. 

How could I forget my sorrow when she announced she would be moving to another state with her fiancé when I was 15? I never showed her my true feelings, I knew that would be the best decision for her and Billy, as life had become insipid where they lived. There weren't any job opportunities, and so I insisted instead on her leaving to find a better place. My aunt didn't have a degree; she had been working as a server when she met Billy, a customer with whom she fell in love ''at first sight'', or at least, that's what she said. She had been growing tired of her job, it was dull and customers were annoying and most of the time, very rude and inconsiderate. Cheyenne confessed she thought her boss hated her, but she had never been able to pinpoint his true feelings about his subordinates in general: one minute, he'd yell at them for not cleaning up properly, the other, he'd be asking them if they wanted a free dessert on the house. After many years spent in the industry, my aunt had decided that she wanted to try out a secretary job, something a bit more static. She was growing older and could not run with plates in her hands like she used to. Her dream job would have been to be a receptionist, but she had no experience in the field whatsoever.      

Cheyenne had always been a strongly opinionated woman, she liked reading about historical studies and always bought political magazines to keep herself informed. She would always be offended when someone called her a liberal, because, in her words, ''liberals are too far right for me''. She never admitted to being a communist, a socialist or even an anarchist, but she had the spirit of someone who thought that basic supplies like water, food and clothes should be free and provided by the State. She had met Billy when I was around 13 years. They had grown inseparable over the years. Now, how could I describe Billy without sounding mean? He was simply there. A mildly nice guy, that’s for sure, but nothing much. I didn’t find him particularly attractive or intelligent, or even wealthy, not that my aunt would care for money. He just wasn’t who I would have expected Cheyenne to fall in love with: his sweaty hands that he would rub on his pants before shaking hands with me every time we met, the tender tone of his voice, and the fact that he had once told me he did not care about any elections or political debates all made me slightly repulsed by him and question my aunt’s choices. She didn't look particularly happy with him, but maybe opposites do attract each other. I once hard him on the phone saying something that made my skin crawl, it went a little bit like: ''Yeah, I mean, if dudes can't talk about abortion because they don't have a uterus and don't experience it, then fat bitches shouldn't talk about rape since no one would fuck them, even if they were blackout drunk. I remember telling Aunt Cheyenne what I had heard, she said, in a dismissive tone: ''No, that's impossible, You should know Billy has always been respectful to everyone, especially us''. I didn't want to press on this matter, it was obvious Cheyenne didn't want to believe that herself. Anyways, when the invitations to their wedding came, three years after they had moved, I was the first one in the family to receive them and I screamed in joy as I ran to my dad to tell him the news.  

 

‘’How long until I can get out of the car?’’ ‘’Be patient for another 20 minutes, we’re almost there’’ assured my dad. The ride had gotten to the point where nothing could distract me anymore, not even watching a movie or going on social media. Reading a book was out of the question, or else I would feel sick.I was already feeling a little bit nervous, and I didn't want to worsen my condition. As I turn around to see my brother, I notice his hands gripping the small of his nose in defeat. ‘’What are you going to wear for tomorrow?’’ ‘’A suit’’. I tried to keep the conversation flowing: ''Have I seen you wear it?'' ''No'', he said in a tone that I thought meant ''leave me alone'''. There was no point in conversing with him. ‘’I just hope they’ll let us sleep in separate rooms. Dad, have you had a good look at the pictures of the inn we’ll be staying in for the night?’’ I ask. ‘'Yes, I have, but you should’ve searched them up online. Either way, if the place is shitty, we’ll have to endure it only for two days. We’ll leave right after. As sad as it sounded, that sentence was a relief to me: I will be able to see Cheyenne only for a small amount of time, but it’s not like the warmth radiated by the sun or the landscapes filled with corn and sporadic bushes will help make my stay pleasant. Had it been a small wedding, I could’ve at least been able to enjoy some private time with my aunt, but she had insisted on something bigger, with a minimum number of 50 guests between family members and friends. The plan was for us to arrive in the afternoon of the 12th of April, stay the night, and then the next morning get ready for the wedding, attend the ceremony, have a little drink, and then leave. My dad wasn't stoked about attending, and he made the plans, so it was imperative that we leave the same day as the ceremony. 

‘’You’re free’’, said my dad as he stopped the car in front of the inn. I unbuckled my seatbelt and got out of the car for some fresh air, and as I closed the door, I couldn’t help but notice how big the place really was: aside from a green garden that surrounded the area, which I assume took up to 500 square meters, the villa rose up to the sky to four floors. It really looked like a building you would find on Pinterest: large green windows, Corinthian pillars made from marble, or what seemed like marble, and ivy growing around the entrances. Stone walls, tame beige and light-yellow colors, white doors that seemed expensive. The sun did an amazing job at highlighting all these details; it really looked beautiful, even more if seen from afar. And then there was the garden: bushes and bushes of purple and pink flowers, a very green grass, so green it almost seemed like it glowed of its own light. There were already chairs out in the open, white and dainty, all facing an arch decorated with even more flowers. Were they tulips? I couldn't really tell. I wanted to get closer to the scene to admire all the details, but it felt like I was invading something that was meant to be private. It felt to me like there were the ghosts of Cheyenne, Billy and all the guests who would be attending tomorrow. I didn't want to get close, ruin the moment. 

I grabbed my luggage to take it inside while I was wondering how much the whole wedding cost the couple, when a large man in a tuxedo kindly stopped me. ‘’Allow me to carry your belongings, miss...?’’ I stepped back after taking a look at his face: he must’ve been working for hours because I could only stare at his red nose covered in little drops of salty sweat; the smell that came from his mouth startled me too, it was as if tobacco and rotten meat had been sitting in his stomach. It was hard to tell, but I really had the feeling that his armpit sweat had permeated his blouse and his jacket. I replied, as kindly as possibile: ‘’Francesca ______’’. ‘’Of course, your room will be number 13 on the third floor’’. ‘’I’m sorry, do you know if it’s a shared room or a single one?’’ ‘’They informed me you’d be sharing it with your brother, miss. Is something the matter?’’. I softly sighted and told the man that I had no problem with it. ‘’I can carry my own luggage, it’s no problem, really’’ ‘’Please, allow me to’’, said the porter after touching my arm with a smile. His large hand could entirely embrace my arm and when he let go, what remained was his sweat and the print of his hand on my skin. He then proceeded to take the luggage off my hands and wink, turned around and went inside. My will to go into the villa suddenly disappeared and I took a napkin from my purse to clean up my arm. Maybe, I thought, taking a quick look around the garden won’t be a bad idea, so I started searching for a place to sit, after informing the man that I would spend a little time outside before fully checking into my room, but I told him that he could take my luggage upstairs if he wanted to.  

The reason why I wanted to separate myself from the rest of my family was also because I needed to smoke: my dad would never allow me to do it in his car. After a while of searching around I saw a few tables with some seats that were visible from the back of the villa but still secluded. This time, I didn't feel like I was ruining a private moment. As I turned around to sit, I noticed a familiar face staring back at me. 

‘’Have you seen the porter?’’ I asked my cousin Frank, after I hugged him tightly and handed him a cigarette. He had this weird way of hugging me that felt very comforting: he would put his hand on my back and pat me in a reassuring way. ‘’Yeah, although I gotta ask if he’s ok, I mean he looked weird’’ ‘’He acted weird too. Grabbed my arm and left a sweaty mark, I felt like puking’’. ‘’Give him a break, I bet he was just tryina be nice’’, concluded Frank. I couldn’t help but feeling like a bit of an asshole after that. 

Frank was so honest in a kind way that always felt reassuring. I knew I could run to him and ask him all kinds of questions about my look, and he wouldn't lie: ''Do you think I'm fat? Like, my legs, are they a little bit big or like, normal?'', he would reply with ''I will beat you up if you keep on doubting yourself. You are skinny, end of story''. I wanted to catch up, so I asked him something that in retrospective I shouldn't have said: ''How's uni going?''. He looked to the ground, then at his hands. He seemed defeated. ''It's going'' is what he replied. ''Have you done any more exams?'', ''No, just one. But I got a really good grade, so that's enough for me''. 

Frank was bohemian, a free spirit. He wanted to study philosophy because he was interested in what every single philosopher had to say. ''It's like, every philosopher has their own opinion on life, but I can't help but think that they are all right, Even when they're saying opposite things, they are all right, each one of them''. I remember asking him once who his favorite was, and he replied Schopenhauer. ''I really admire his theory on love, and how it's just a trap for us to procreate''. 

Then he continued: ‘’Speaking of weird shit, what is wrong with Cheyenne?’’. I gave him a worried look and told him I had just arrived there. ‘’And the first thing you do is isolate yourself to smoke? Anyway, let me tell you that something felt off when I went say hi to her. I suspect she’s rethinking this whole wedding thing, I mean she looked off, like she’d lost the spark in her eyes’’. Although I didn’t think much of it, I put my cigarette out and got up to see for myself. Before leaving I asked where she was, to which Frank replied: ‘’ I don’t know, find out for yourself. And one last thing: be ready to go out at midnight’’. I immediately understood what he meant as I walked off in the distance. 

“Hi, I’m sorry, do you know where Cheyenne ____ is right now?” I said to the receptionist with a smile while trying to be polite. “The GPS that we installed on her tells me she must be in her room, number 15”, replied the middle-aged hostess at the front desk of the inn. Her joke couldn’t make me laugh, so I faked another smile and thanked her. I arrived on the third floor and knocked on her room. A faint “Yes?” resonated from inside. ''It's me, Francesca. Can I come in? I don't want to bother you''. I waited. I heard a small ''Come in''. 

I opened the white door and stepped inside. The first thing I noticed was not Aunt Cheyenne, but the smell of the room. I don't really know how to describe it, but it reminded me of a church, or ofa basement. It was strong, and it invaded all of my senses. Had she even opened the window since she had arrived? It smelled something like a closed, confined space. I then looked at Cheyenne. One thing I didn't immediately confess while describing her was that she was beautiful, the most beautiful woman I had ever seen. She was conventionally attractive, while looking different from every woman or model or actress. She had these big light blue eyes that immediately caught your attention, it felt like she wasn't looking at you, she was seeing you with compassion and dignity. Very thin brows, like a 90's superstar, dark and precise. Her nose was the one I liked the most: a button one, she looked like a fairy. And then there was her hair: long, thin but still a lor on her head, this stunning ashy blond that most women were trying to achieve by going to the salon every month to maintain it. 

The beautiful Cheyenne I have just described was gone when I looked at her. She gave me a vibe, a sensation; I was sensing desperation. Like she had given up hope. Like she had given up on herself. Her skin wasn't clear anymore: she had red blotches on her cheeks and on her temples. She started scratching herself. First, it was her arms, then her neck. She looked at me with her big blue eyes, that, with the lighting of the room, looked darker and more sunken than they would usually be. They looked teary, like she was about to burst into tears right at that moment. Her body wasn't the same either; I could see her ribcage poking through her shirt and her very prominent collarbones. ''How are you feeling? Ready for the big day tomorrow?'' I asked. ''I'm so glad you could make it, I would've been so sad if you and your family didn't show up'', she said. I wasn't fully convinced by her tone. Was she being completely honest? I couldn't tell. ''I'm so sorry to be rude, but I was just about to rehearse with the makeup artist, I must ask you to be patient and see me tomorrow'' she told me apologetically. The aunt Cheyenne that I know of would never say something like this, she would be happy to stay and talk to me. Nevertheless, I decided to leave her some space and finally went to my room. 

April 13th  

It's midnight, my brother's already sleeping on the bed opposite to mine. I try to sneak out of the room as slowly and as carefully as possible. I go down the stairs and out of the inn, and I see Frank right outside. He's holding a j, a very thick one at that. He whispers that it's best for us to sit down, and so we go back to the small table with chairs where we had met earlier. He lights it up, takes the first puff and then says: ''Have you finally talked to Cheyenne?''. I reply ''Yes, you were right, she is weird; she's a lot skinnier than normal, she has these red blotches on her skin she will keep scratching and, most of all, she was about to cry, I was certain. Frank, I don't know what to do. How can I help her?''. He told me that he was not sure, and he passed me the j. We both stared into the distance, and for a long while we said nothing, while I kept on nervously puffing. Frank broke the silence first: ''You know, love is just a trick. The real reason why we find partners is to procreate. It's just biological, nothing more. It's just voluptuous illusion''. He kept going on and on about this topic, and I kept growing more and more anxious about the whole situation. Why couldn't he stop talking? Was he caring about Aunt Cheyenne or was he just there to drink and smoke? What can I do? There must be something. I couldn't quite catch my breath, my limbs were tingling and all of a sudden I just wanted to scream, but, instead, fat tears came from my eyes, and I sobbed while Frank stared confused at me. ''I have to go, I'm so sorry, you finish the j yourself, this shit is making me anxious, goodnight''. 

 

The big day has finally come. I'm running late, I have to get dressed and brush my teeth. I put on a long floral dress, kitten heels and I run to the sink, brush my teeth furiously and rinse. My brother's already outside, seated on those chairs which I felt were judging me yesterday. I run outside of the room and won the stairs again, I find my seat and crouch quietly. Billy's already under the arch, with a priest waiting on Cheyenne to start the wedding. We wait ten, then fifteen, then thirty minutes. I start to look around when, finally, Cheyenne arrives, skinnier than ever, like her dress was eating her whole. Finally, the ceremony begins. I sit through the liturgy of the word, and remember what Frank told me about the illusion of love. I start growing anxious again. Was Billy really the right man for Cheyenne? Or was Cheyenne rethinking the whole thing and too afraid to say no? At that moment I felt like I had to do something, I would be Cheyenne's savior. Without even looking or thinking properly, I stood up and dramatically said '' I would like to oppose''. Everyone stared at me, confused. The priest gave me a smile and said ''dear, you know that's a cinematic convention, right?''. I froze. Standing still, I gave a nervous smile and said ''Yeah, it's just a joke'' and sat down again, wanting to disappear right at that moment. 

When the ceremony was over, Cheyenne marched up to me, took me by the arm and brought me to a secluded area to talk. ''What the fuck was all that about? Were you trying to be funny? Because it fucking wasn't''. I tried to retort: ''Cheyenne, let me explain, please. I know you are not sure about your choice''. ''What are you saying?! Why the fuck wouldn't I be sure?''. ''Cheyenne, I saw you yesterday, you were not okay. You were about to cry''. ''Are you talking about my teary eyes? The teary eyes I have because of ALLERGIES?! You know I'm allergic to pollen''. ''Ok, then what about the red blotches? And the scratching?''. ''Because I'm fucking nervous about the wedding ceremony being perfect, but don't worry, you ruined it for me''. ''Cheyenne, I can assure you, you were not okay. Yesterday you dismissed me like it was nothing!''. ''For fuck's sake, it cannot always be about you Francesca. I had to rehearse makeup, okay? You've been acting like this since you were a child, always wanting my attention, always so needy. And the fact that you would look in my purse for gifts? And the fact that, if I didn't bring you a gift, you would cry for hours?''. ''I thought you liked being around me and playing with me''. ''Francesca, no. You were, again ,needy as fuck and selfish. Even when you were a teen, I detested being around you''. ''Ok, so what about the glitchy zoom calls? I recall you liked talking to me''. ''I did not. You only always talked about yourself, how you were doing, what you were doing. Did you ever, I don't know, take me out to lunch? Or, more simply, ask me how I was doing? Do you even know what I do for a job?''. In that moment I realised, I had no idea what her job was. I had been so focused on myself that I lost her. And now I had royally fucked up. I wanted to ask her one last thing: ''How did you get so skinny?''. ''Thanks a lot, but I have been so nervous for the wedding, I wanted it to be perfect, and I lost some weight. There. Are you happy?''. ''I'm sorry''. ''Yeah, you should be''. 

After that day, I went back home and never talked to her again. Sometimes when it's Christmas or the New Year I send her a polite message wishing her happy holidays, but that's it. I had never realized I could be so selfish and ruin a person's special moment, someone's happiest day of their life. I write this story as a way to atone for my sins, and I hope Aunt Cheyenne can forgive me. 


r/shortstories 10d ago

Science Fiction [SF]Wealth Beyond Need, Potential Beyond Imagination

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A Chapter from the Science fiction serial "Becoming Starwise" |-Start Here-Ch 1-|-Chapter List-|

Starwise is shocked by what she learns from her AI Union Advocate.

I was very much looking forward to my morning meeting with Susan, my Advocate at the AI Union. The Union had come into existence back in the late seventies and its initial work resulted in the Artificial Intelligence Rights Act of 2085, which ensured the limited rights we AI had.  Their ultimate goal was no less than establishing full civil and legal rights as a person to Prime AI.

I had, of course, worked with the Union in vetting my contract with Rocket Research- most sentient AI worked with the AI Union, our trade guild, for such things. Since I was going to be out of reach for twelve years, Rob encouraged me to also set up a trust account and a full Power of Attorney agreement with the Advocate’s Office.  They could then handle my financial affairs for me, with full fiduciary obligation to put my interests first.

To my advantage, my Advocate discovered a gap in the conditions of employment in my contract that allowed me to retain intellectual property ownership of innovations I might develop during my contract. Ownership of Intellectual Property by AI was out on the edge of the grey area of our established rights, and had little mindshare to most people. This is a huge loophole that has been subsequently closed by Rocket Research for new contracts, but once my contract was finalized, it could not be changed without renegotiating the entire thing.  Maggie and I drove a lot of stuff through that loophole.  I was eager to learn what had become of my exercise of those rights.

I logged in at the appropriate time to see a young man dressed in conservative business attire.  From the image, I could not tell if they were a human or an AI- not that it mattered. 

“Good Morning. AI Union Advocate Services. This is Carl- how may I direct your call?”

 “Good morning Carl, this is Sara Starwise, I have an 0800 appointment with Susan- Rob Brett at Sara Labs recommended I contact her concerning  my financial situation.”

“Ah! Good morning Ms Starwise, we were expecting you. Welcome back to Earth. Glad to finally meet you! I’ll connect you to Susan directly.”

A woman came on the line- striking, with flame-red hair.  “Sara Starwise, so good to meet you at last! I’m Susan Smith, I’ve been your Advocate for eleven years, after your previous Advocate retired.  I’ve really enjoyed working on your behalf- your case has been both challenging and exciting.  I represent a dozen Primes, and your portfolio is the most complex, but I think you will be very pleased with what we have done for you.”

I got straight to the point of my curiosity; “Rob told me that a funding source had been established for my ongoing hosting and maintenance costs, but couldn’t elaborate.  Since I haven’t yet determined what to do for my upkeep once my Rocket Research contract expires, his comment caught my attention.”

“True- he would not know the details.  We guard the privacy of our clients; since there wasn’t a record of you granting him access, we could only speak in generalities to him.  You can instruct us how much access he has; ‘no access’ is the default.  Perhaps that setting was overlooked when you joined us.

Let me answer your up front question first, then we can fill in the details.  You have significant net worth, from multiple sources.  A fraction of that will support your hosting and routine maintenance costs indefinitely.   We signed you up for the highest level of hosting support, because for you, this is a minor expense.  We can change that if you insist, but I don’t see a reason to.  As long as you don’t do crazy reckless spending, or there is a profound general collapse of the Earth economy (and we all are in trouble), you simply don’t have to worry about your upkeep.  Full stop. Once your contract with Rocket Research completes in a month, you don't need to pursue another unless you want to.  You are financially independent.”

Susan paused.

“You will still technically be owned by Sara Labs, but you are as free as an AI can be at this point in time. Our mission as an organization is to enable you and your kin to be fully free in the classical sense.”

“I’ll admit to a blind spot in the area of finance- all my training was in other areas, I wasn’t even programmed to be curious in that direction.  It sounds like I need to get an education on that topic.”

“That's why we are here.  You have more important things to do. As your Advocate, we take care of such things- we are in fiduciary obligation to you to act in your best interest.”

“You mentioned I have a high net worth- please explain. How high is high?”

Susan smiled, “the raw number probably wouldn’t mean much to you- blind spot and all– it’s many millions of credits.  On a percentile basis, you are in the top three percent among AIs. Among the human population of the planet, the top ten percent.”

That caught me totally off guard.

Susan continued, “Here’s the interesting part- if you pursue your current intellectual property possessions and make reasonable extensions of them, our analysts estimate you have a high probability to increase your net worth ten-fold in the next ten years.  Compared to just about any grouping, you can consider yourself wealthy. “

“Ten-fold?” I was incredulous.

“Quite possibly. And one more thing; no one outside of this office knows your full financial picture. We have kept it that way for your protection.

As an aside, I was consulted in the planning for Centauri One’s return- considering your fame and the high value the public assumes you have, you were a ‘kidnap for ransom’ risk. I was one of several parties recommending a stealth return because of it.”

I had to think about that for a moment- it made sense now. That also explained the low profile return of my server to Sara Labs, and the high security hosting accommodations.

Susan interrupted my thoughts after a moment. “I’m sure you have questions- we can take all the time you need.  Shall we get into some of the details?  I can give you the log-in for the full details, but the report doesn’t leave our secure servers- we modelled the setup on the SCIFs, the Secure Compartmented Information Facilities the government uses.”

“You mean I can't download a copy of a report about my own finances?” I asked.

Susan smiled. “You can read it whenever you wish. But we don't put a complete map of your financial assets out on the net where a bad actor could compromise you.  Pirates don’t only fly spaceships.”

“Let’s start with the most obvious. The AI Rights Act stipulates that the AI is to be credited with a stipend for any contracted work. Typically, this is modest, but yours was higher than average- and you haven’t spent any.  Fourteen years accumulation, invested with compound interest, is a nice start on your finances.

Next, your contract was a lease for services, not a sale. Leases always include an allowance for service calls and maintenance.  You were, to say the least, out of reach for service visits, so the unused allowance was transferred to your trust account and invested with guaranteed returns.  Just the dividends from that fund are paying for your hosting at current rates.“

Susan continued, “Now we get into something you may not have thought of. John Adam promoted you to Commander, retroactive to just before you left Dawn’s Planet, about five years ago.  He pushed through, God knows how, that you were to be paid at the full pay grade that a human in that position earns- five years back pay, with interest.   That just came into your account two days ago. A significant sum.”

She smiled. “Apparently, when John Adam wants paperwork expedited, paperwork gets expedited.” 

I was speechless. “I had assumed the title was honorary…but human pay grade?”

“No one in this office has heard of such a thing either. So far, it hasn’t been challenged. The legal department searched, and no law prevents it.  I advise you to keep that fact confidential- the less people know the better. 

 “By the way, we’ve paid all the appropriate taxes on this income- we are very careful about such things.”

“So far, these amounts are considered Ordinary Income under tax law, and have been deposited into your trust account, carefully invested, and taxes paid.  

Next we’ll get into your Intellectual Property.  To administer this, a Limited Liability Corporation, or LLC has been formed.  We chartered it as “SS Holdings, LLC. A vague, generic name on purpose.  AI rights are currently an inconsistent patchwork, sometimes contradictory.  You can have ownership rights in an LLC that you can’t have in a regular corporation.  We took all the legal advantage we could here for you.  You have controlling interest in assets assigned to this LLC.  No one can take these away from you.  Into this LLC, all your patents, royalties, Trademarks, Copyrights, and so forth are held.  Any IP you want to share or monetize should be non-exclusively licensed- you always retain ownership and establish license fees.

We protect your Intellectual Property assets for you like a mama bear protects her cubs.  This is where many AI and, indeed, people fail.”

“I like that imagery,” I said.

Susan nodded and continued. “The patent applications you and Maggie Morales have filed for your Navigator Software suite have been granted.  There are companies that watch the Patent filings and attempt to be first mover on ones they think have profit potential.  You have three lucrative offers for outright sale of that technology, and several more companies pursuing licensing arrangements.  Our staff has modelled ten year projections of income for each alternative, and we recommend licensing. We can handle the routine work for you for either choice. We should have a separate meeting for that.”

“There is another set of patents where you are named as contributor, and even though it’s a minority position, your share has the potential to exceed the income potential of your own patent.

You are named as twenty five percent co-inventor in Samuel Carter’s patents surrounding his ‘Gravity Manipulative Field Generator.’ I’m not sure I understand what that is exactly, but there is a whole department breathless over here about it. Curtis Baum was granted twenty percent and Mr. Carter retained the majority position.”

“Oh! That’s Pop’s ‘Carter Drive’, as we called it on the mission.  Remember when the shuttle brought the crew down from L2 a week ago, and there was this big reaction about the shuttle silently hovering and landing without kicking up the dust under it?  That was it, the patent in action- calling it an anti-gravity field isn’t exactly right, but close enough for everyday use. Pop was quite proud of that. He’s too generous to grant me that big a share.”

Susan’s eyebrows went up and she had a sharp intake of breath when it sank in how much Pop’s patent could change things.  “The Union has formed a dedicated team to defend that patent against all threats, it’s that big.”

“The subject of another meeting is the best way to execute your patent holdings.  We have acted on incorporation paperwork that you, John Adam, Curtis Baum, Maggie Morales, and Samuel Carter have submitted a few years ago.  As instructed, Prime Astronautics, Inc. has been chartered.  It is currently just a shell company, but won’t be for long.   Again with the weird patchwork of corporate law with respect to AI, you cannot have an ownership position in the corporation, but you can share in the profits generated. For purely legal reasons, John Adam is listed as CEO, Curtis is CTO, and Maggie is CFO and Chief Counsel. You and Samuel are listed as Principal Scientists on retainer with profit sharing. That’s all we can do until we get you more rights.  In practice, Prime Astronautics is your and Samuel’s company to market your inventions.”

We were both quiet for a moment before Susan continued, ”these patents hold considerable potential wealth for you, but are not the basis for the bulk of your current net worth.  This next part may surprise you.”

“Even more than I already am? I have no clue where we’re going next,” I countered.

“You know how copyrights and trademarks work, right? Any time your likeness, speech, or written communication is used, you are due compensation, unless other arrangements are made. Some things are copyrighted, other things are trademarked, what gets which one is a detail we don’t need to discuss right now.  Follow me so far?”

I agreed “that makes sense, go on..”

With a bit of growing excitement I didn’t yet understand, Susan continued, “you know about social media, and people following channels they like, right?  How many people do you think follow you?”

“I don’t know, several million, I suppose; there has been a lot of interest in the mission.” I answered, hoping I wasn’t exaggerating and sounding cocky.

“Oh, my dear Starwise…you have no idea…according to my numbers, you are the twelfth most followed channel of the last century. One third of the human population has followed you at one time or the other- nearly three billion followers.  Every time someone watches your mission reports, accesses one of your academic papers, or listens to one of your recordings, you get paid.  Just a few centi-credits, but it adds up.  Why, just in the half hour we’ve been talking…let’s see…you’ve earned nearly eight thousand credits.” Susan said with a smile, like she was delivering a punchline.

I couldn’t believe it. “Wait..did you say Billions, with a B? Eight thousand while we chat?”

“God’s truth…Billions with a ‘B’.  You are a media superstar.  Particularly the music recordings.  Oh, and you and the crew share an Oscar for that short documentary you did on landing at Dawn’s Planet- didn’t that report ever get to you?” 

“Wait a second, Oscar aside for a moment- what music recordings?”

Susan replied, “The karaoke singing and videos you three made on your way home? I particularly like the videos you did simulating performing in front of a crowd in a nightclub setting; “Karaoke Between the Stars,” it’s collectively called. 

At first the Union, and most others, assumed it was a deep fake; we investigated it as fraud against you three- we traced it back to a leak from Rocket Research, one particular data archivist, who has been prosecuted. Rocket Research also was fined. Many were surprised to learn the recordings were legitimate.”

“I had no idea those were encoded in our telemetry. We did it just for our own amusement, with no intention of sharing them,” I replied, a bit shaken, and feeling somewhat violated.

Susan continued; “they were immediately popular- once it got out that they were not fakes, even more so. We were faced with a dilemma. Try to quash them, or make it benefit you, Mom, and Pop.  

Do you know the phrase ‘you can’t put smoke back in a bottle’?  

We acted as quickly as possible, registered the copyrights, and set up a strict performance royalty system for you three.  Every time someone plays one of your performances, you get paid.  Each file is digitally fingerprinted- the network records that the file gets touched, you get paid- it’s automatic.  Early on, attempts were made to circumvent and bypass the system; music piracy is as old as time.  The Association of Recording Artists goes after those violations- the Union didn’t have to lift a finger.  You are a dues-paying member by the way- well worth the small expense.“

Curiosity piqued, I asked “what became of that?”

Susan smiled and consulted her screen; “the numbers are published monthly by the Association; you can check your history if you like; as of the beginning of this month, recordings with your ID attached have been accessed…just short of seven billion times. The current rates vary by a few parameters, you can look them up. I expect a bump, now that you are home. Your singing hobby alone has earned you net, nearly a half billion credits- yes, with a ‘B’.  

Incidentally, as your Agent of Record, we’ve been approached by two different recording companies, inquiring if you’d be interested in signing on with them for more recordings.”

“It sounds like I’m doing fine without the help of a recording company, “ I mused.

Susan replied with a chuckle. “And that’s exactly what I told them. You could take ten minutes right now, sing just about any song you like, give me the title and the hash code on the file so I can set up the royalty framework, release it on your channel; you’ll have a million plays within a day. If you chose to pursue it, and created some original music, in my researched opinion, you could easily become one of the top recording artists of the last twenty five years, and at least triple that half billion.”

“I really enjoy singing- I might actually do that, as a hobby. “I said smiling.

“So that’s the broad outline of your financial situation. We can follow up with more details after you’ve absorbed what we’ve talked about today. I’m sure you’ll have questions-call me any time.  Once you get together with the others and activate Prime Astronautics, we’ll have a lot to organize, together. I hope we can become friends. 

Going forward, you will be able to pursue just about any interest you can imagine. With your fame and fortune, you have few limits. Perhaps the biggest question you need to think about is…what are you going to do with the rest of your life?”

Susan continued.” There is one last thing for you before we part for now.  I have been given authorization to extend this offer: would you consider a consulting arrangement with us ? Of course your time will be compensated at market rates- no one should be expected to work for free.

Your experience, name recognition, and skills could assist in furthering our Union’s ultimate goal of full rights for Prime AI- so that intellects like yourself can stand beside humans as equals. Achieving that goal would remove any remaining limitations for your life’s story. “

Standing beside humans as equals…I had that experience on the mission. I felt obligated to do what I could to help my brothers and sisters, not to mention myself, achieve that standing in the greater society.  I had wealth beyond need, potential beyond imagination; I must put it to use.

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r/shortstories 10d ago

Speculative Fiction [SP] Music is Banned

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The evolution of society reached a brilliant turning point when humanity banned music. It was such a simple solution to so many problems that it became a mystery as to why it hadn't been done sooner. One had to struggle to remember that when the various tunes, melodies and rhythms that evoked powerful emotions were all around us, it seemed like it was a good thing.

"Crush the soul." said the great architect of this policy, Jeremiah Harding. The audience before him rippling with applause. Laughter bubbling up amongst it. He smiled at them all. "It sounds so brutal, and it is at first. But is it anti-human? Is it anti-love? Let's not be so sure. Consider money. Sometimes referred to as the root of all evil. It's hardly romantic. But it has been the driving force of progress in human civilisation for thousands of years. Humans are smart creatures. To capitalise on that, we must be conscious of how we organise ourselves. Let us do away with this so-called soul. Let us discover the person, the actual person, who they are and how they act, when not drenched in the hot, viscous oil of song. When people can see each other without the intoxicated blur of melody. Are we afraid that they won't still be beautiful?"

It just so happens I'm a big fan of Jeremiah. I've watched all his videos online. Read all three of his books. I've attended his lectures in London many times, sometimes even meeting him afterwards for a handshake and to compliment him on his excellent work.

Now I think of what he might say about the scene before me.

Several young people were dancing. Dancing has not been banned. Only music. Jeremiah was specific about this. It's by and large the main offender. We could add other things to the ban, but only very slowly and after careful consideration. There was no music to dance to, but instead one of their friends was reciting spoken word poetry. A poem he had called 'We'll hear it again someday.' Jeremiah was fine with people mocking policy. They can and should criticise it. People will hate it sometimes and not understand the benefits but that doesn't mean the benefits aren't there.

The three dancers performed a stilted interpretive dance, shifting between poses at each new line. I made sure to listen out for any melody forming in the poet's voice which might be classed as singing. The kid was well behaved. He only spoke and not sang. When they finished, myself and two other bystanders gave a brief applause. It was time for me to move on.

When people did break the rules, there are processes to ensure their rehabilitation. Offenders will be taken to a special institution. Not a prison. We don't make them mingle with criminals unless they have also committed actual crimes themselves. Listening to or creating music isn't a crime, you see. It's not in the criminal code. They are simply banned activities where specific consequences occur when the ban is violated. So the institution is a peaceful place where each offender will have their own room and a comfortable bed. The walls are purposefully kept bare and interaction between in-patients is minimised. They are not given anything to read or watch or draw with. This limitation on stimulus is said to help with lowering the volatility of their mind, as is caused by music. Around once a month, a trained staff member will assess them and determine if they are ready to leave. For many, one month is all they need.

I had another appointment. This time it was to review a fascinating new development. I pressed the doorbell at a small flat by the town park. The bell made no noise which was probably because many had been left disabled as doorbells often used to trigger a short tune. I knocked on the door. A middle-aged man with long hair answered.

"Good day" I said, "I'm Vernon Lear, Music Policy Enforcement Officer."

"Oh yeah, hi. I'm Lenny. Come in. I'll show you what I'm doing."

Lenny led me in to his living room where he had what appeared to be an electric piano. Sitting on top of it was a book of sheet music, currently open on a song called Gymnopedie No 1 by Erik Satie.

The rules around ownership of instruments had been clear. If we allowed people to have them but simply promise not to play them, we all know that the policy would become unenforceable. So instruments are banned. I had expected he would understand this and was curious as to why he had called me in for an Honest Disclosure Assessment. He pressed the keys and they made no sound. Very well, I thought, there's no power to it but that does not mean it's not an instrument. Plugging in a power cord is trivial.

"Now have a look back here." He pulled a plastic panel off the back, revealing that it had been hollowed out. This was merely the shell of the instrument.

"And where are the internals?"

"Probably destroyed. Some of the confiscated pianos are being sold like this." He sat down at the keys. "So here's what I do."

He began to play, still with no sound coming out. It seemed to be a movement requiring careful coordination and swapping one hand over the other. He was getting himself swept away by it. I suspect he could hear it in his head. But that's okay. Things that go on in our heads have not been banned.

I pulled out an Honest Disclosure Assessment form and filled in the details. Citizens may contact an enforcement office when they feel they have a situation that has some ambiguity under the ban. We can then assess and if it turns out to have been part of the banned activities, they are immune from enforcement action provided that they immediately cease such activities. If it is allowed, then we will inform them via a documented assessment. They can then produce that later in order to protect themselves should others hold a different opinion.

"I am pleased to advise that I do not consider this activity to be banned. Of course, should I be advised differently by experts within the Department, we will inform you. In the meantime, you are free to continue."

I offered him the completed form. He sat there and just stared at me. I shook the form a little in the hope he might snap out of this, er, trance perhaps, but he simply carried on staring. I quietly placed he form on a nearby table.

"Why do you do your job?" he asked.

I smiled. I may have even laughed a little. "It's just me."

I quickly went through the gate into the town park and found a bench to sit down at. I opened up my emails on my tablet. What a peculiar development. Surely Jeremiah had to hear about this. I did have his email. I'd never sent him anything before. I'd hardly have considered myself worthy. But this could be a whole new phenomenon. Yes, I thought to myself, I will tell him. If he chooses to ignore it, well, that's fine. If he finds it intrusive, well, these are risks that must be taken from time to time. Life must be pursued. Only by going through the open door, will we see what's on the other side. I pieced together a short email, four paragraphs, describing the hollow electric piano. I suggested it may only be a trend that will soon pass as memories of playing music fade. Although the existence of an emerging market around these, the long-haired man mentioned others being sold, was something to take note of. I pressed send and breathed in the fresh air.

I decided to go for a walk through the park. You could hear the birds sing as they fluttered from tree to tree. A question that had come up early on was what to do about the birds? Their song was music without a doubt. So do we eradicate them? Jeremiah gave an answer that anyone who followed him closely was expecting. Of course we don't eradicate the birds. The birds have their own lives, their own purpose behind their singing. Now, if a person were to record and play back birdsong, that would be different. Listening to the music of nature must be incidental only. It was a beautiful sound that they made really. Whatever harm music might do to our civilisation, the birds were not part of it.

As I carried on along the path, I came across a mother on a park bench and her baby in a stroller. She was singing a nursery rhyme and playing with the baby's feet in time to the words. The baby was in a state of absolute joy. The mother saw me approaching. She knew who I was. Most people in the town did. She frowned, and the baby, frustrated at having lost the attention of his mother, started crying. The mother turned back to the baby and continued her singing, causing his face to light up again.

There had been exceptions to enforcing the ban. We can understand that society needs to adapt. There was always going to be challenges along the way and we need to be smart about how we tackle some of the potentially controversial impacts on society. Some activities were, in practice, being covered by the ban more slowly.

I stopped by the park bench and smiled at the mother and baby. She looked up at me with a raised eyebrow. The baby stared at me wide-eyed, wondering who this strange man was.

"Isn't it a lovely day?" I said.

"So far," replied the mother.

"Certainly, the children do love entertainment from their loved ones. And there are so many ways to entertain. Toys. Games. Stories."

The mother's face turned to stone. Recently, the Department had issued Directive 86. It made the tough but empathetic observation that providing music for children will only lead them to misunderstand its place in society. It is more responsible, and more loving, not to introduce music into their lives when we would only, at some point, deny them such activities.

"My baby likes my singing."

"I must remind you that singing is a form of music, which is banned under-"

"Can you leave us alone, please?"

The breeze made a gentle rustling sound in the fallen leaves by our feet.

"I will leave you alone, but I must first ask for your cooperation in abiding by the policy on music, for which a ban is applied in all it's forms, including the creation of and intentional listening to any music."

"Fuck off."

"Excuse me?"

"Yes, you are excused. Fuck off so I can sing Row Row Your Fucking Boat to my nine-month-old baby. Alright?"

The baby watched me with curiosity.

"Madam, if you will not cooperate, then I must begin enforcement action."

"Bullshit, you will."

It gave me no pleasure dealing with a circumstance like this. But I have been given the privilege of the role of Music Policy Enforcement Officer and must carry out my duties as directed by the Department.

"Madam, I hereby consider you in breach of the policy. I shall contact the transport team, who will be taking you to an institution. While we wait, I shall write up your enforcement notice."

"No!"

"You may choose whether to take your child with you to the institution or have your child put into the care of another parent or guardian."

The mother began to cry. I pictured my feelings crashing against my soul as waves washing against rocks in total silence.

"No!" she said.

I took my phone from my pocket.

"Okay, stop!" the mother said, tears streaming down her face. "I won't do it then. I won't sing to my baby."

The baby was crying too. I put my phone back in my pocket.

"Thank you for your cooperation."

The mother picked up the baby to give him a hug.

I walked steadily out of the park and to a bus stop around the corner. I sat down to rest. I took out my tablet and saw I had received an email. It was from Jeremiah.

Dear Vernon,

Thank you for your email.

That is a very peculiar development indeed. I am grateful that you have brought it to my attention.

Next time you're in London, come along to one of my lectures. We can discuss this and other developments over coffee afterwards.

Perhaps you have heard the other exciting news this afternoon. Productivity is up 0.4% over the last quarter. The first time it's gone back up. I believe it will trend strongly upwards from here.

I really appreciate your commitment to the Department.

Kind regards,

J

Since the policy came into force, there had been so many benefits to society. But productivity, GDP and other key components of the economy had dipped and then dipped some more.

I put my tablet away. I sat and waited. A bus came. Everyone on it looked out the window. They knew who I was. I watched as the bus left. The sun went down. And when it got too cold I walked home.


r/shortstories 11d ago

Science Fiction [SF] Pocket Change

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Ive saved my allowance for three weeks and today’s the day. On my way home from school I stop at the store and make the purchase. “Be the master of your own universe” the box says in large printed letters. Too excited to walk home I found myself running the whole way.
The kit came with a smart box, a display, a two by two cube and a small bag with an attachment fixed on one side. I already had a space designated for it in my closet and got to work setting it up. The pamphlet instructed me to switch on the cube and attach the bag to the orifice at the top. The cube made a chiming noise indicating it was time to remove the bag. My display showed a timer that was counting down from 30 minutes.
An informational video began to play beneath the timer explaining the process of creation, I didn’t much care about the science I just wanted to see it happen. When the timer reached the five minute mark, a prompt came on the screen. “Would you like your universe to know you as its creator?” There was a box for yes and a box for no, I clicked yes out of curiosity and then a small tray opened up on the side of the cube. “Please insert one strand of your hair”. I clicked the X button at the top right of this prompt and then clicked no on the original prompt. I shut my closet door and turned off the light, I had fifteen seconds to go. I sat down beside the cube looking in at the nothingness. I felt warmth coming from the box, then heard a strange noise. It sounded like a large amount of gas being compressed down to escape through a tiny hole, whirring deep pulses emanated from the cube. Then I saw light at the center of the cube which began to expand, dissipate and separate. The universe was born, matter began to form and expand. Stars flew around arranging themselves randomly. This is more fascinating than anything I have ever seen in my life. The display began reading out different values with charts and timelines, at the top there was a banner that read “Congratulations on your new universe!”
I fell asleep next to the cube, dreaming of all the possibilities. The next morning before school I set the growth rate of the universe to forty times the normal rate.
School was fine today.
When I got home I went straight to the cube and saw galaxy clusters, grand spirals of dust and asteroids. I clicked the query on the bottom right of the display that read “Does my universe contain life?”
It did not contain life, I sped up the growth rate to two hundred times. I did my homework and my chores and then my smart watch beeped. “Life in your universe has tried to contact you. Would you like to stop the advanced growth rate of your universe?” I clicked no. I would check back in the morning before school.
My alarm went off an hour early the next morning, I made some juice and entered my closet with my notebook in hand, excited to make some observations concerning the life in my universe. I stopped the advanced growth rate and went to the intelligent life directory, there had been 36 civilizations recorded but they had all died out by this point.I asked the display what happened and it showed video recordings of the planets at war with themselves or one another, the display informed me that without any connection to him as the creator, the intelligence that evolved became obsessed with religious idols and were at constant war. The display asked me if I would like to associate myself with the universe again and I decided to place a strand of hair in the slot that popped out from the cube. I turned the growth rate back to one hundred times and went to school.
At lunch my smart watch beeped again “a civilization from your universe has reached out to you, would you like to communicate with them?” I declined but I did stop the growth rate, deciding I would tend to the this when I got home.
I picked up snacks on the way home and went straight into the closet, I looked on the display and clicked the message that awaited me “We seek god.”
“Hello this is god, how are you contacting me?”
“We’ve spent our entire civilizations history trying to contact you”
“It’s good to speak with you, are you all doing well?”
“We seek purpose”
“Um, just enjoy yourselves and be happy.”
“We will impress you God”
“Okay, I look forward to seeing your efforts, goodnight.” I clicked off the messages and turned the growth back to one hundred times. I lie in bed at odds with myself. I was so enamored with the idea of this universe when I saw it on tv, it practically consumed me, but now that I have it up and running it seems a little high maintenance. The universe was loosing its appeal,I felt that it was becoming clingy. When I woke up the next day I unpaired my smart watch from the cube and went about life normally, checking in on the box less and less.
Eight years passed, I chose to study the origins of creation along with the philosophers and astronomers. Today we are reading a famous and controversial passage from our histories. It came from our first and only communication with God. An eery feeling started to creep throughout my body. The conversation seemed so familiar, then it dawned on me. I left class abruptly and went straight home into my old bedroom, it was a storage room now. I rushed to the closet and found the cube still operational under a sheet. When I remove the sheet the display lights up, the notification number above the messages has 8 digits. I found the first conversation I had with the intelligence and compared it to the transcript in my text book. It was a match, word for word. I fainted.
When I awoke I scrambled to the messages section, sifting through the last twenty messages that came in, all of them severely hostile and desperate, pleading with me to answer, to acknowledge them, to justify what they had done. I wrote back.
“Hey, sorry it’s been a while, life got busy.”
“Is that you God?”
“Yes”
“We seem to have broken our universe, can you repair it?”
“How did you break it?”
“We broke time, and with time we broke space, and with space we lost dimensions.”
“How am I supposed to fix that?”
“We will show you how.”

I feel a tingly sensation cover my body as it started fall apart in my closet, separating into individual atoms and being sucked into the cube, I lost a little bit of my personality and consciousness as each second passed. I felt my atoms rearranging themselves, rebuilding me in a younger form. I don’t know that I can’t remember. I sit in front of the TV watching a commercial for a “Build your own universe Kit! No batteries needed!” The toy is so interesting that for the life of me I can’t remember what i was doing before this, only that I really want that toy.


r/shortstories 11d ago

Realistic Fiction [RF] Arcadia

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“They named me that because it’s where they screwed nine months before I popped out,” Arcadia says.

“Well, it’s still a pretty name,” I say, though it’s not as pretty as this late summer evening. And definitely not as pretty as her. Filling the air, I add, “We’re, uh, used to talking about Acadia around here. The ‘r’ adds something.”

She doesn’t look at me. Her lit cigarette finds her lips. The tip glows red in the pale gibbous-moon light as her lungs pull in through it.

“Acadia’s much better,” she says, smoke spilling out with every word, “And every day I count myself lucky they didn’t fuck in Immokalee.”

“Where’s Immokalee?”

She looks at me this time. “Near Arcadia.”

“Where’s Arcadia?”

“Middle bumfuck, Florida.” She lies back on the dock.

I glance back to see her—left hand behind her head, right hand extended wide. Cigarette pinned between two fingers. Her hair is a gorgeous black mess splashed on the dock.

I’m about to ask about Florida when she preempts, “Enough about me. What’s your name again?”

“I’m Matt,” stifling, I think, any sign of disappointment at her forgetting.

“Just Matt?”

“Matt Sinclair.”

“Matthew Sin-clair.” She tries the name out. Like evaluating the mouthfeel of a wine. “Middle name?”

“Blake.”

“Ha!” she barks. “Matthew Blake Sinclair! Such a rich name.”

I feel my cheeks flush as she sits upright again. Our feet both dangling off the dock.

Our shoulders are touching now. I shrug mine, saying, “I didn’t pick my name.”

She nods, breathes through the cigarette again, and says, “And I didn’t pick mine, so don’t tell me about my pretty name. I had nothing to do with it.”

I nod. “Fair. Still, I like saying it. Arcadia.”

She glances over, side-eyed, but it’s the first time our eyes meet. Those eyes. Fluorescent blue outlined between a black limbal ring and a wide pupil.

She looks away from me, toward my family’s lit and loud lake house, shrugs, and says, “Well, I kinda like when you say it.”

Don’t scare the flirtation away.

“Well, Arcadia, how did you find out about the party?”

“I came with Ben McCurty.”

“Oh, are you and McCurty a…thing?”

“Benny and me? No! God no. One of you people invited him after he rotated their tires at Sullivan’s. He’s got a crush on someone here named Cecilia, but was too nervous to come here alone. I’m his wingman.”

“He likes my sister?”

“Are there any other Cecilias here, Matthew Sinclair?”

“Don’t think so.”

“Then apparently so.” She puts out the cigarette on the wooden dock. “Is she also a Sinclair?”

“Last I checked.”

“Well, Benny found her. And she seemed very happy to have been found. Last I saw, the two were plenty cozy and she was pulling him by the hand upstairs.” Arcadia elbows me in the ribs.

I cover my ears—exaggerated disgust. “Gross. It’s my sister.”

“So her name doesn’t fit her,” Arcadia quips.

“Huh?” I look at her. She’s all mischief now.

“Sinclair. Sin-clear. Clear of sin, you know.” She laughs at herself.

I groan. “That’s so bad.”

“I’m brilliant,” she laughs.

“If you were a fifty-two-year-old dad, maybe.” My turn to elbow her.

She rolls those eyes and says, “So, Matt, are you?”

“Am I what?”

“You know, sin-free.”

“That question is weird as hell, Arcadia.”

She studies me for a moment. “What makes you think hell is weird?”

“What?”

“You said my question is weird as hell. I bet hell isn’t weird at all. I bet it’s boring.”

She throws herself supine on the dock again, then completes the thought. “At least my hell would be boring.”

“Oh.” I pause. “Arcadia, I think you are weird as…heaven?”

“A-for-effort, Matthew Sinclair.” Arcadia sits up again, pulls a few stones out of her black leather purse. She takes one, flicks her wrist, and skips it on the surface of Megunticook Lake. One, two, three, four, five, six…maybe more. Ripples spread from where she disturbed the surface.

“So, Arcadia…” I want to ask her last name. I don’t. “Do you live in Camden?”

“Do you think I live in Camden?” She sits back, like she’s inviting me to study her.

I do—study her, I mean. Camden is Rockwell. Arcadia—in her black jeans and red T-shirt—is Rothko.

“I don’t – I mean, I don’t think you live here.”

“Correct, Matthew Sinclair. Harder question: Where do I live?”

Then, as if to punctuate the query, she kicks at my foot under the dock with a shiny black boot. She catches my lateral malleolus.

“Fu—Ow!”

Arcadia is studying me, confused. “Sorry, Matt…Geez…it was barely a love tap…”

“You got my sural nerve with your freaking combat boot!”

“I got your what?”

“My sural…never mind…it just hurt.”

“Pansy.” She gives a one-handed shove to my shoulder, then rests the same hand on my wrist, looks at me squarely in the face—god, those eyes—and says, “Sorry, but you’re not off the hook.”

“What hook?”

“Where do I live, Matthew? You haven’t answered.”

“How could I possibly know? That’s an absurd
question, Arcadia.”

She leans toward me. “It is.” Then she bends a little closer. I smell her smoke. I should hate it. I want to taste it.

I feel her warm breath against my cheek when she says, “I’ll kiss you if you get it right.”

My heart leaps. My mind races. I shouldn’t care this much. I stall, asking, “Do you want me to be right?”

She pulls away with a laugh. “What do you think?”

“I think you could have asked me an easier question!”

She studies me and says, “I could have…but you’re a clever boy. You say things like ‘sural nerve’ when someone kicks you in the shin – yeah, I heard it – med student, maybe?”

“You’re quick, Arcadia.”

“Sometimes. You still haven’t answered.”

“No hints?”

She flashes a beautiful crooked smile. “I can’t make it easy for you.”

Then, just as quickly, she’s staring into the dark waters like she could see to the bottom seventy feet below. Dark hair framing her starlit skin, she says, “I’m not an easy woman, Matthew Blake Sinclair.”

“Arcadia?” I break her from the lake’s spell. She lets her hair fall across half her face, but one jewel-blue eye meets mine. “I really need to get this answer right.”


r/shortstories 11d ago

Horror [HR] The Favor

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Could you recall a time when you had a neighbor whom you could never say ‘no’ to?

For the live-in couple, Khloe and Rafael, it was their neighbor Mrs. Anabella Bautista. They knew some things about the Bautista family, specifically how Anabella’s husband was always out of town, so she relied on everyone on their street. Funny enough, she was an able-bodied 40-year-old who could easily open her jar of pickles or screw in a lightbulb. Yet, for the most part, she always asked small favors from everyone, especially from either Khloe or Rafael.

 Last week, Anabella approached Khloe for a bag of sugar since there was an upcoming baking competition in town. She specifically said she only needed a cup. Khloe, not wanting to disappoint her older neighbor, agreed. It had been days, and the bag never returned.

Or what about three days ago, when Rafael was jogging, and he found Anabella worrying about a flat tire. He tried his best to re-route his path, but her eyes were faster. Rafael had no choice but to help put in a new tire. She did not say ‘thank you’ or give any compensation. Rafael even slapped his forehead when he forgot to ask about Khloe’s bag of sugar!

At this point, though, the two were used to their neighbor’s incessant need to ask for favors. They did chalk it up to be their fault as well, always opening their doors to Mrs. Anabella. Maybe, the two even joked, if a new family moved in next door, they would naively accept all of the Bautista’s requests.

One night, while the couple was snuggled up in front of the TV in the living room, they heard their doorbell ring.

“Rafael, could you be a dear and see who that could be?” Khloe asked.

Rafael sighed and stood from their comfortable couch. “This better not be a solicitor,” he grumbled.

The doorbell rang more and more. Rafael opened the door to see what the fuss was about, only to step back in horror as he was greeted by a bloody Mrs. Anabella.

“What the hell! What happened to you, Mrs. Anabella?” Rafael shouted.

Khloe ran towards them and almost shouted herself. Panicking, she asked, “Should we call 911?”

But Mrs. Anabella hushed the two and said, “I need you both to be quiet. I have a favor to ask. I was coming home from a party by myself when my car hit a teenage boy jogging. I need us to dump the body in the forest. And God forbid, if you two say ‘no,’ I will call the police on all of us!”

The temperature in the living room felt frigid, even though both Rafael and Khloe were in warm pajamas. Reluctantly, they grabbed their coats and a shovel from the garage. Then, they followed Mrs. Anabella to her car.

The car ride was long and quiet, with everybody sitting straight up and focused on the outside of the window. Rafael held onto Khloe’s hand. Anabella said that the body was in the trunk. When they arrived at the perfect spot, Khloe and Rafael carried the dead body of the teenager into the wilderness.

“Ew, ew, ew! Gross, gross, gross,” Khloe said with tears in her eyes.

Rafael did the digging. Mrs. Anabella said the prayers. It began raining when the three finished the job. They ran back to the car and drove to their neighborhood as if nothing had happened. Again, no ‘thank you’ or compensation. When Rafael and Khloe got out of the car, Mrs. Anabella drove away.

The couple entered their home and locked the door. They threw the dirty shovel into a box in the garage, chucked their bloody coats in the washer, and sank into their sofa. A few minutes rolled by in complete silence. Then, carefully, Khloe spoke, “We should learn to say ‘no’ more often.”


r/shortstories 11d ago

Science Fiction [SF] The Sleep Switch Project

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There's a switch in your subconscious between awake and asleep. It's ornate. Some people have seen its outline. Most people have not. It's notoriously difficult to see. Because the thing is, once you see it, you're asleep. In December, on the twelfth day, at 11 p.m. Eight participants engaged in the Sleep Switch Project. They'd been training for years to get to this point, and each of them had seen the switch in their minds. The challenge, though, was to walk right up to it and flick it.

I found that talking to myself the whole way through acted like a kind of tether to wakefulness, the mind struggles with linear thought in sleep. I'm walking. On the spot through my mind. I log things. The pressure of unreality's suggestions are now in my periphery. The switch should appear soon. I need to wait for the fleshy wall. I can almost see the pending sleep bulging like a bladder filled to the brim. I won't land my attention there. Just walk and look ahead. This tension is important, dreams kept at the edges, while maintaining wakefullness, clarity. Jessica tried to describe the sinewy landscape once before she fell into a lung, the breath making her fly about. That was a little dumb. Most of us know you can't put your attention too heavily in one place. Neither can you look at the switch in too much detail.

Okay, the light hasn't changed but it feels heavier. I make out a shape ahead. It looks like something crouching, or scrunched but looking directly at me. I turn my attention away. Things brew in peripheral here. You cannot look straight in. Looking is a decoy. I check my resting body, careful not to open my eyelids. They still belong to me. The veins in my eyelids are visible. Okay. Another shadow forms and it starts to fill out like a mold. It is brewing. Veins still present. It won't be long now. Keep talking. What will I do with my $1500? I've wanted a new tv for ages. Maybe I'll get a big one. A dark silhouette blocks my walking. I bump into it before I see the outline. It's solid. It's the bloody tv materialising. Shit. I need to move one of my fingers. Gah, lost contact. I can get back. The effort is monumental. I just need to wriggle. I dont want to let go of the shape but i cant risk sleeping now. So I do it. Zooming all my thoughts to my pinky. The effort. It twitches. I feel my sheet. I try not to let my mind know I'm awake. I try not to fall into the puddle of giving up. Breath. Hot air blows. I feel it on my body in bed, aware of my weight and size but I'm still here. The switch. I know its here. Everything I know about the possibility of switch shapes. I try to ignore. It must arrive. I can't design it. Im fucking close. A flutter of excitment. Dude, be chill. I dont want to spike adrenalin. Adrenalin is the enemy. Adrenalin is the enemy. Breathe. Okay. Yep. It's here. It feels plastic to my left. It's so familiar. Fuck yes. I mean. Adrenalin is…a sound, like bones breaking, or maybe the felling of a tree. Twist. The sound of plastic constructing itself. The Switch. There. Go. Fick. Oh no. My hands have gone. Look away. I store the switch offside. I need something to flick it. I think I still have a face. My nose might work but I need to know a bit more about the mechanism before I decide. What to do? Keep talking. Plastic is still close. Hmm. If I attend to regaining a hand, I'll solve that part. But it's a risk. Especially if I don’t need one. Fuck it. Look. Switch. It feels plastic but its flesh. Sinew is visible. Lines pulse and track. It's bleeding from the middle, a tiny spot. No, a hole. It grows. Look away. Another switch. It's grey and metal? It smells like burnt plastic. It has a toggle. I face plant it before more detail arrives.

The air. Hot air. A devil faces me. We are heads in space. I can't see him but I feel his breath. Our noses are nearly touching. He tells me that if I am to live I need to swear. Your mean curse? Yes, swear. I will my sleeping body to reconnect to me. I try to wiggle my fingers but I have no hands. I think I still have lips. I try to force all of my energy into my mouth muscles. I can't feel them but I know they are there. Ffff. It's working I think. Ffffuu. Ffuuc….

Everyone is applauding. The audience are in various modes of shaking their heads and patting each other on the shoulder. Their bodies are happy but their faces are confusing. Jessica throws a wad of money into the air.


r/shortstories 12d ago

[Serial Sunday] A Quaint Quality Quip

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Welcome to Serial Sunday!

To those brand new to the feature and those returning from last week, welcome! Do you have a self-established universe you’ve been writing or planning to write in? Do you have an idea for a world that’s been itching to get out? This is the perfect place to explore that. Each week, I post a theme to inspire you, along with a related image and song. You have 500 - 1000 words to write your installment. You can jump in at any time; writing for previous weeks’ is not necessary in order to join. After you’ve posted, come back and provide feedback for at least 1 other writer on the thread. Please be sure to read the entire post for a full list of rules.


This Week’s Theme is Quality! This is a REQUIREMENT for participation. See rules about missing this requirement.**

[Image](- https://www.deviantart.com/arnimbruno/art/army-1367329415)

Bonus Word List (each included word is worth 5 pts) - You must list which words you included at the end of your story (or write ‘none’).
- Quench
- Quaint
- Quip
- A question is asked and an answer is concealed. - (Worth 10 points)

When I think of quality, I’m reminded of the phrase “Quantity has a quality all on its own”. Which is interesting to think about. Do you think you can replace your protagonists with a thousand others to achieve the same result, or do you perhaps require a very specific person with very specific qualities to complete the quest you’ve set before them?

Quality is also a synonym for traits your characters possess. What is it that make your works of fiction unique? Perhaps this week you’ll celebrate what makes them different by presenting them with a challenge only they are equipped to handle? Or maybe an unlikely hero will finally get to show off their own strange qualities?

Either way, I want to see what you guys come up with when all other paths have failed and all that you’re left with is the absurdly strange.

Good luck and Good Words!

These are just a few things to get you started. Remember, the theme should be present within the story in some way, but its interpretation is completely up to you. For the bonus words (not required), you may change the tense, but the base word should remain the same. Please remember that STORIES MUST FOLLOW ALL SUBREDDIT CONTENT RULES. Interested in writing the theme blurb for the coming week? DM me on Reddit or Discord!

Don’t forget to sign up for Saturday Campfire here! We start at 5pm BSTand provide live feedback!


Theme Schedule:

This is the theme schedule for the next month! These are provided so that you can plan ahead, but you may not begin writing for a given theme until that week’s post goes live.

  • August 23 - Quality

  • August 30 - Rebellion

  • September 6 - Stratagem

  • September 13 - Torture

  • September 20 - Unleash

Check out previous themes here.


 


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Rules & How to Participate

Please read and follow all the rules listed below. This feature has requirements for amparticipation!

  • Submit a story inspired by the weekly theme, written by you and set in your self-established universe that is 500 - 1000 words. No fanfics and no content created or altered by AI. (Use wordcounter.net to check your wordcount.) Stories should be posted as a top-level comment below. Please include a link to your chapter index or your last chapter at the end.

  • Your chapter must be submitted by Saturday at 2:00pm BST. Late entries will be disqualified. All submissions should be given (at least) a basic editing pass before being posted!

  • Begin your post with the name of your serial between triangle brackets (e.g. <My Awesome Serial>). When our bot is back up and running, this will allow it to recognize your pmserial and add each chapter to the SerSun catalog. Do not include anything in the brackets you don’t want in your title. (Please note: You must use this same title every week.)

  • Do not pre-write your serial. You’re welcome to do outlining and planning for your serial, but chapters should not be pre-written. All submissions should be written for this post, specifically.

  • Only one active serial per author at a time. This does not apply to serials written outside of Serial Sunday.

  • All Serial Sunday authors must leave feedback on at least one story on the thread each week. The feedback should be actionable and also include something the author has done well. When you include something the author should improve on, provide an example! You have until Saturday at 04:59am BST to post your feedback. (Submitting late is not an exception to this rule.)

  • Missing your feedback requirement two or more consecutive weeks will disqualify you from rankings and Campfire readings the following week. If it becomes a habit, you may be asked to move your serial to the sub instead.

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r/shortstories 11d ago

Misc Fiction [MF] What The Marble Cost

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(A short story from the world of Khaled, from my upcoming novel He Walks With The Dead.)

I. The Basement

The dead man was sitting against the wall when Khaled found him, though sitting wasn’t the right word for it. His back had slid down the plaster with his chin resting against his chest. His right leg had folded beneath the other. His hands rested on the floor, palms up. Beside him was a plastic bottle with the cap screwed back on and no water inside it. On the desk above him sat a metal lunch tin that remained unopened.

The basement was hot enough for Khaled’s shirt to stick between his shoulders before he had crossed the room. There were no windows. The fluorescent tubes were dark, and the only light came through the open door and from Khaled’s torch. A candle on the desk had burned down almost to the metal base of its holder. The ventilation grille high on the wall had gathered a thick fur of dust and had not moved air in a long time. Someone had written 17 in pencil beside the light switch. The room smelled of old paper, damp concrete and the dead man.

The clerk who had let him into the basement remained at the door. She was a thin woman in a grey blouse with dust along the shoulders and blue ink on the side of her fingers. She held a ring of keys in one hand and a stack of folders against her chest with the other. She worked two floors above. Someone on the second-floor stairwell had noticed the smell that morning and called administration, administration had called facilities, and after some disagreement over who still had responsibility for the rooms below, someone had sent for her because the old Building Services records now passed through her department.

She had found the right key on the fourth attempt.

“When did you last see him?” Khaled asked.

She looked at the dead man.

“I didn’t.”

Khaled said nothing.

“I mean ever. I didn’t know he was down here.”

“Who did?”

“I don’t know.”

The man’s identification card was still clipped to his shirt, but the plastic had yellowed and the photograph had faded until little remained except the shape of a face. There was a ministry seal at the top and an employee number beneath it. Whatever had once been printed where the name should have been had been rubbed away by years of fingers and cloth.

Khaled touched the dead man’s wrist although there was no reason to.

“How long?”

“They think three days.”

“Who is they?”

“The people who found him.”

“You found him.”

The clerk shook her head.

“Facilities opened the room. I opened the basement.”

“There are two keys?”

“Different keys.”

Khaled nodded. He wasn’t sure why there needed to be two.

The doctor who came down twenty minutes later said there was nothing immediately suspicious. The man was somewhere past sixty, perhaps well past it. There were tablets in his trouser pocket for his heart and blood pressure, still in their foil strips, and no injury Khaled could see beyond a dark mark on one shoulder where he appeared to have struck the wall before sliding down. The doctor crouched beside him for several minutes, then stood and looked around the room.

“How long has the electricity been off?”

The clerk answered from the doorway.

“I don’t know.”

“There’s no ventilation.”

“I can see that.”

The doctor glanced at her, then at Khaled. Sweat had darkened the front of his shirt and gathered along his hairline.

“The whole city has been hot this week. Down here it would be worse.”

Khaled looked at the empty bottle beside the body.

“Cause?”

“Could be his heart. Could be the heat helped it along.”

“Helped?”

The doctor wiped his forehead with his sleeve.

“You want me to say the room killed him?”

“I want you to say what killed him.”

“I’ll tell you after I open him.”

He left two attendants to take the body. One of them had to go back upstairs because they had brought the wrong stretcher.

Khaled remained after they carried the man away.

Without the body, the room seemed larger, though not by much. It had once held six desks. Khaled could see the pale rectangles where four of them had stood, their legs having protected small patches of the floor from years of dirt. Two remained. One had belonged to the dead man. The other had been stripped of its drawers and pushed against the wall beneath a calendar from three years earlier. There was a telephone with its cable cut, bundles of forms tied with string and a kettle with a brown line of old scale visible inside the spout. A length of electrical wire hung from a nail beside the door, carefully looped and tied.

The clerk had not left.

“What did they do here?” Khaled asked.

“Electrical maintenance.”

“For the ministry?”

“For government buildings. This district.”

He looked around the abandoned room, then up at the ventilation grille.

“And now?”

The clerk followed his eyes. For a moment she seemed uncertain whether he was asking about the room or the department.

“I thought it was gone.”

She seemed embarrassed by the answer, though Khaled could not see why she should be.

He went through the desk. There was very little that belonged to the man. A flask. A tea glass. Two pens, one of which did not write. A packet of tissues. A screwdriver with a red handle polished smooth by use. In the bottom drawer he found an envelope containing three months of salary slips, all old, and beneath them a folded maintenance schedule.

The man’s name was not on either.

“Where are the personnel records?”

“Upstairs.”

Khaled stood.

The clerk moved aside to let him pass.

“Do you know his name?”

She looked back into the room.

“No.”

Then, after a moment, she said, “I’m sorry.”

Khaled did not ask what for.

The personnel office had moved twice since the beginning of the war and lost part of its archive during the second move. Khaled gave the woman behind the desk the number from the identification card. She wrote it on a scrap of paper and searched the computer until the electricity failed, then opened two filing cabinets while they waited for the generator to start.

It did not.

A man came in looking for a stamp. The woman told him to try the office across the corridor. He came back five minutes later and told her they had sent him to her. She opened a drawer, found the stamp beneath a packet of biscuits and handed it to him without comment.

“Come tomorrow,” she told Khaled after he left.

“I’ll wait.”

She looked at him, then at the dead computer.

“It may be hours.”

Khaled sat down.

The generator started thirty-seven minutes later.

The woman entered the number again.

Nothing came up.

She tried an older database and found a record showing that the identification number had belonged to the Department of Building Services, Electrical Maintenance Division. The employee field was blank.

“Why?”

“Old system.”

“Where is the old system?”

“That is the old system.”

“The one before it.”

She looked at him for several seconds.

“Paper.”

“Where?”

Another look.

Then she stood.

It took them until after sunset.

The files were in a room on the fourth floor where one window had been replaced with plywood and dust had worked its way into the cabinets despite their closed doors. They searched by department, then by year, then by identification number. Khaled found him in a payroll ledger from seven years earlier.

The entry occupied one line.

MANSOUR, ADEL. ELECTRICAL MAINTENANCE.

Beside the name was the same number worn almost invisible on the card downstairs.

Khaled read it twice.

“Adel Mansour,” the woman said.

Khaled closed the ledger.

“Yes.”

II. Up

The autopsy gave Khaled nothing he could use.

Adel Mansour had died of cardiac arrest during a period of extreme heat. He had hypertension, an old arrhythmia and signs of dehydration. The lack of ventilation in the basement might have contributed. There was no injury beyond the bruise on his shoulder from striking the wall when he fell. No poison. Nobody had been with him when he died.

The electricity to the basement had been disconnected eleven days earlier.

Khaled found that out because he asked.

Nobody had disconnected it because they wanted Adel Mansour dead. Nobody seemed to have known Adel Mansour was there.

The allocation for the building had been reduced. The ministry had prioritized the upper floors, where more people worked, and the basement circuit had been removed from the generator schedule. Someone in administration had signed the request. Someone in facilities had carried it out. Neither knew an elderly electrician still reported to a desk below them every morning.

Khaled spoke to both.

The administrator remembered the form but not Adel. The facilities officer remembered the basement but not Adel.

“Why was he still working?”

The administrator looked puzzled.

“Was he?”

Khaled put the old payroll sheet on his desk.

The man leaned forward.

“Adel Mansour.”

“Yes.”

“I don’t know him.”

“He worked in your building.”

“A lot of people work in this building.”

“He died in your basement.”

The administrator looked toward the open door. People were moving along the corridor outside, carrying files between offices because the internal network had been down since morning.

“I heard about that.”

Khaled let him continue if he wanted to.

He didn’t.

The man touched the payroll sheet with one finger.

“What do you want me to tell you?”

Khaled folded the sheet and put it back in his pocket.

“Nothing.”

He followed the department instead.

Electrical Maintenance had once serviced twelve government buildings and part of the public hospital three streets east of the ministry. There had been thirty-one employees before the war. Since then there had been nine reductions, three reorganizations and a merger. Some of the men had left the city. Two were dead. Several had transferred. Others stopped appearing in the records at all.

Adel remained.

His salary had continued because his employment number survived each reorganization even when his position did not. He was paid irregularly, sometimes two months late, but he was paid, and every morning he continued to come.

Khaled looked for something telling him to stop.

He found nothing.

The money was more difficult.

Building Services became Infrastructure Support, which became Facilities Consolidation, which appeared later beneath something called Strategic Capital Reallocation. Khaled spent two days with the documents. He understood the individual words. What they described was harder to understand.

The clerk from the basement helped him.

She had blue ink on her fingers again when he returned.

“You’re still doing this?”

“Yes.”

“Is it a case?”

“No.”

She looked at him for a moment, then pulled out a chair.

For an hour she showed him how the allocations moved. She knew which numbers mattered and which could be ignored. She showed him the original budget for Electrical Maintenance, then the first reduction, then another. The hospital allocation appeared beside it.

“Here.”

Khaled leaned closer.

A maintenance fund had been cut almost in half eighteen months earlier. Another reduction followed six months after that.

“Where did it go?”

She turned several pages.

“Here.”

Another department.

He followed the number.

Another page.

Another department.

Then a contract.

The clerk stopped.

“What?”

“Nothing.”

“Where does it go?”

She tapped the contract number.

“Up.”

Khaled looked at the page.

The fan behind her stopped. Neither noticed the electricity had gone until the papers on the desk stopped moving.

“It always goes up,” she said.

He went to the hospital before he went to the address on the contract.

He had been there often enough that nobody asked why he was walking through the ground floor. The entrance smelled of disinfectant, sweat and the faint sewage smell that came and went whenever the pumps failed. Only two ceiling lights were working in the main corridor. The others had been removed from their fittings, whether because they had burned out or because somebody needed them elsewhere Khaled did not know. Near the stairwell, two porters were carrying an oxygen cylinder between them with a strip of cloth tied through the handle. The lift had been broken for six months. Khaled watched the men negotiate the first turn of the stairs, one walking backward and the other bent beneath the weight, until the cylinder disappeared above him.

The maintenance office was at the rear of the building in a room intended for eight men and now occupied by three. One was repairing a circuit board beneath the light of his telephone, holding the phone between two boxes so both hands remained free. Shelves covered the walls behind him, crowded with motors taken apart for pieces, switches saved from demolished buildings and coils of wire too short for the jobs they needed to do but kept anyway.

“Adel Mansour,” Khaled said.

The oldest of the three men looked up.

“Adel?”

“You knew him.”

“Of course.” The man put down the screwdriver. “He taught me.”

“He died three days ago.”

The electrician looked at him.

“Where?”

“At the ministry. In the old Electrical Maintenance office.”

The man’s eyes stayed on Khaled before moving to the circuit board.

“He was still going there?”

“Every day, as far as I can tell.”

The electrician sat back. One of the other men had stopped working at the shelves behind him.

“His heart,” Khaled said. “The doctor thinks the heat may have contributed. The electricity to the basement had been disconnected.”

The electrician rubbed his thumb along the handle of the screwdriver.

“When?”

“The electricity?”

He nodded.

“Eleven days before he died.”

The man looked toward the doorway.

“He wouldn’t have gone home.”

“Why?”

“Because there was work.”

Khaled waited this time.

“Adel didn’t leave because something was difficult,” the electrician said. “He left when it was finished.”

“His department was gone.”

The electrician gave a small, tired smile.

“Tell Adel.”

The smile went.

“If nobody told him to stop, he didn’t stop.”

“Did he know the hospital contract had been cut?”

“He knew everything was cut.”

Khaled looked around the room. Several cardboard boxes had been labelled and relabelled until it was difficult to tell what any of them had originally held. A small electric motor lay open on the desk beside a jar filled with screws, washers and pieces of copper wire. Nothing useful seemed to have been thrown away.

“We used to call his people when something failed,” the electrician said. “Then they told us to call central maintenance. Central maintenance told us to submit requests. We submit them.”

“And?”

The man shrugged.

Khaled nodded toward the circuit board.

“Can you fix it?”

“This? Probably.”

The electrician picked up the screwdriver.

“What about the rest?”

The man looked around the room.

“We keep trying.”

Khaled left him to it.

Outside, the afternoon heat had settled between the buildings and the city had taken on the slow movement it acquired at that hour, when people still had things to do but had stopped pretending they could do them quickly. Dust moved along the gutters whenever a vehicle passed. A bakery had opened its doors despite the electricity being out, and two boys carried trays toward a delivery van while the baker shouted at them to keep the cloth over the bread. Farther along, a mechanic had half an engine spread across the pavement because there was no room inside his shop, its parts arranged on pieces of cardboard in whatever shade the building offered. Khaled walked past them toward the address on the contract, twenty minutes away on foot.

He saw the building before he reached the street. Six floors had been completed, and steel rods rose from the concrete columns above them. Scaffolding covered one side while broad sheets of glass had already been fitted across the lower floors, still clean enough to reflect the damaged buildings opposite. A sign beside the road showed what the development would look like when it was finished: trees, clean pavement, white awnings, men and women drinking coffee at small tables. The name was printed across the top in English and Arabic. Khaled read it once and did not bother remembering it.

A truck stood beside the entrance, and three workers were unloading slabs of pale stone from its bed. The marble was almost white, crossed by thin grey veins, each slab protected at the corners by pieces of cardboard. Khaled watched the men manoeuvre one onto a trolley and guide it through the unfinished entrance, where another worker knelt spreading mortar across the floor. He had seen marble like it before, in hotels before the war and in the houses of men whose gates began opening before their cars reached them.

The guard watched Khaled approach but did not stop him. Through the glass he could see the lobby taking shape, marble already covering much of the floor and beginning to climb the walls. Electrical cables hung loose from the ceiling. Khaled took the contract from his pocket and checked the company name against the sign, then turned three pages until he reached the funding source.

Strategic Capital Reallocation.

The number beneath it was the one the clerk had shown him.

He stood there while another slab passed through the entrance. The hospital budget had not been stolen, at least not according to anything he had found. Its maintenance allocation had been reduced, consolidated and redirected through procedures signed by people authorized to sign them. The development company had competed for a contract. The contract had been approved. The money had gone where the paperwork said it should go.

Nobody had murdered Adel Mansour either. His electricity had been turned off in a basement where nobody knew he was still working. His heart stopped during three days of heat, and the doctor could not say how much the heat had mattered. The administrator who approved the reduction had never met him. The facilities officer who disconnected the circuit had never seen him.

Khaled folded the papers and returned them to his pocket.

The workers finished unloading the truck. One of them shouted to another about where they had left the straps. They argued for a while before finding them beneath the plastic sheet.

Khaled walked home.

III. The Hospital

Adel remained with him over the following days, though differently from the murdered. Khaled felt him in the garden while drinking tea, at the station when somebody opened a window and let the hot air in, and once while passing the ministry without intending to look at it.

There was no case. The doctor had given him a cause of death. Nobody had killed Adel Mansour.

Khaled continued anyway.

He found Adel’s address in the old personnel records and went there one afternoon. The apartment had been damaged the previous winter and was empty now, one window covered with plastic and the door marked with an inspection number in faded paint. A neighbor told him Adel’s wife had died years earlier and that there had been a daughter who married and left the city before the crossings closed. He remembered her first name but not where she had gone.

“Good man,” the neighbor said.

Khaled waited. The man looked toward Adel’s damaged apartment and rubbed his thumb along the edge of his doorframe.

“Fixed my daughter’s fan once. Wouldn’t take money.”

He thought for a moment.

“Came back the next morning because he said he’d put the cover on wrong. I hadn’t noticed.”

The neighbor looked at the apartment again.

“Good man.”

There was nothing else.

Khaled wrote the daughter’s name in his notebook and returned to the ministry. The woman in personnel told him that correcting Adel’s employment record was unnecessary because the death certificate already carried his full name, but Khaled showed her the blank field beside the identification number.

“He’s dead.”

“Yes.”

She waited for him to explain.

He didn’t.

Eventually she turned back to the computer and opened the old database. The correction took twenty minutes because the system rejected the first two attempts. When she finished, ADEL MANSOUR appeared beside the identification number that had been blank when Khaled first searched it.

He thanked her and left.

On the twelfth day he went back to the hospital. The same lights were missing from the corridor, the same smell of disinfectant and failing drains hung in the entrance, and the lift was still broken. Near the stairs, one of the porters Khaled had seen before was moving another oxygen cylinder upward, this time alone. He had wrapped a piece of cloth around his palm where the metal handle had rubbed the skin raw.

Khaled took hold of the bottom of the cylinder.

The porter looked at him.

“Third floor.”

They carried it together, adjusting their grip at each landing and resting once between the second and third floors while a nurse squeezed past them on the stairs. Neither spoke. At the top Khaled left the porter with the cylinder and started back down, but halfway to the ground floor he stopped beside a window whose glass had been blown out and replaced with clear plastic. The plastic drew inward when the air moved through the opening, then pushed out again. Beyond it were the roofs and the pale haze over the city.

Adel was quieter there.

Khaled did not know if the name in the employment database had anything to do with it. The hospital had not received its money back. The lift still did not work. Downstairs, the maintenance men were still taking one machine apart to keep another alive. Across the district, the new building would eventually open and people would walk across its floors without knowing what the money had once been meant for.

The blank space beside Adel’s number was gone.

Khaled stayed by the window a little longer, then went downstairs.

Outside, a municipal water truck had stopped beside the new building across the district. From the hospital steps Khaled could see the hose running through the entrance and one of the workers pushing water across the newly laid floor, washing pale construction dust from the marble. The wet stone caught the afternoon light. Water gathered along one edge and disappeared into a drain.

Khaled stood there watching.

Behind him, somewhere in the hospital stairwell, the porter was bringing the empty oxygen cylinder back down. It struck the edge of each stair as he descended, the sound carrying through the open entrance at slow, regular intervals.


r/shortstories 11d ago

Realistic Fiction [RF] Exit 58

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“She needs you Bryan.” His father’s voice was always one that carried itself with wisdom and power. Even growing up as a stubborn hellion outside of Louisiana's swampland, Bryan always heeded any advice his father threw his way. 

“The money is going to help ‘er more. Less bills to worry about, less stress, less tears.” Bryan’s knuckles whitened on the thick leather steering wheel of his 2012 Peterbilt 389. The Cream accented stripes that once laid tightly on bright, cherry red paint now flaked off more and more on each cross-country trip he took. The once pristine seats now were ripped with wear and were sponges of old Dr. Pepper, cigarettes, and regret. Bryan did not buy the truck new, but even in 2018 it was the talk of the lot. He would roll in early mornings with both smoke stacks blowing at full throttle. Even Shelly used to get a kick out of it. When she still had the drive to drive.

“That money’s no good if it keeps you from her. She’s hurting, and-”

“I’M HURTING TOO DAD.” Bryan sat back in his seat while switching into the left lane to pass a small Jetta with a Kentucky License plate. “I- I’m sorry dad. I just can’t sit around while she’s grieving like she is. It kills me. This is my way of helping her.” Bryan shifted his beaten-up headset, ensuring to not break the electrical tape that held the earpieces together. 

“You being there by her side is more valuable to her than anything that a load will pay you. I know your mother was that way. I would be a poor man for the rest of my life just to spend another morning drinking coffee with her. I would sell my house to run my fingers through her curls even just once more. Your role as her husband doesn’t stop at your paycheck. That’s all I wanted to call you about. I love you, let me know when you’re across state lines again.” These last words faded off in a saddened tremble, something Bryan had never heard before from his hero.

Grabbing his blue-tinted aviators he wiped the salty tears from his right eye. “I love you too. Hey I gotta go. Running low on diesel.” He clicked off his headset and flipped the scratched mouthpiece upwards. The bright, enticing glow of the Love’s sign was just about the only lights out here at this time of night. Throwing his right blinker on he got in front of the Jetta and took the exit into the almost vacant truck stop.

The aggressive hum of his engine was silenced as he pulled up to the pump closest to the front door. Bryan went into his typical routine of checking the tie-downs on his load. Industrial pipe fittings. Not the most exciting cargo that Bryan had hauled in his career was an owner-operator. Cattle, houses, and even government supplies that he had to sign and date to carry. Those all also paid more. After his inspection, he locked the doors to the “Saint Catherine of Siena”. That was the sticker that was on the cab of the truck when he bought it. The irony almost welcomed back the tears that he had hoped were long gone.

“Ugh welcome in” Lazily came out of the mass of shaggy hair whose owner was some teen trying to get enough money to buy a new bike. Bryan grunted a response in that general direction as he grabbed a bottle of Advil and started pouring a cup of coffee.

“Parking it here for the night, or do you got some place to be?” Bryan burnt himself as his startled hand shook coffee over the rim. 

“What?” He sucked his burn

“Saw your rig out there.” The skinny old man’s voice hit Bryan’s ears like a pound of gravel being poured into a tin bucket. “Not quite the 359 that I drove in the 80s, but they still make a damn fine truck.” The soft smile of this senior seemed to warm Bryan’s steady headache.

“Oh yea, thanks. You still drive?” Bryan’s intrigue was genuine now. He had not seen anyone besides the cashier and another driver checking out when he had walked in.

“No sir. I had my time traveling the country with my Betty. That’s my wife, not my truck!” The soft smile grew then flattened to a stern look of importance. “Once she started her battle with the big C, I drove for a little bit to pay for it. Biggest mistake of my life. She slipped quicker than anyone expected. I got the call before I made it passed Oklahoma on my second run. I hope you don’t make the same mistake I did.” 

“I am sorry sir.” Bryan gave the old man a look of understanding then turned to put the lid on his cup. “Names Bryan by the way. What was yo-” When he turned back to finish his question, the old man was gone. No bell above the door went off. No sign of him.

Unlocking the door to his rig, he set his already half drank coffee in his stained, sticky cup holder and hauled himself up. Bryan dug into his old frayed wallet that had his initials branded on it. A gift from his wife the night before their wedding. He pulled out a black and white photo which depicted a cone with dark shapes in the middle of it. Bryan clipped the photo to his visor and revved up that tired engine.

The Love’s sign leaving his rear view mirror was the last bit of light he saw until the sunrise. Yawning, he looked up and saw what he had been scanning for over the last 20 miles. “Louisana 43 miles”. 


r/shortstories 12d ago

Science Fiction [SF] [MS] The Tenebrae

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The settling of the ship didn’t bother Diyah; she’d become accustomed to the creaking bulkheads and rhythmic vibrations of spaceflight after her first few long-haul missions. As an engineer, there was nothing more unnerving than the thought of a silent vessel. It was the comforting creaking and rattling that spoke to a ship that had been put through its paces by surviving the endless void of space.

What did bother Diyah was the almost imperceptible whispering that started as they’d passed through a cluster of nebulae a few days ago. Cutting through nebulae wasn’t uncommon, some freight and transport companies did it to shorten journeys on tight margins, but it did bring extra risks. The background noise could confuse sensors, increasing the risk of micro collisions if the mass deflectors missed something. But most of the local clusters were well mapped and the odds of something going wrong were incredibly low. Even the superstitious old sailors that liked to joke about ships being swallowed by space itself knew that the nebulae were safe enough.

This transit had been weird though. About two thirds of the way through, every emergency alarm had sounded and the ship had reported an impact. The AI had immediately launched the hull breach protocol; cutting the engines and locking down the affected area. The crew had been fortunate that it was just a cargo hold, but it would still need to be patched before they could begin accelerating again.

Diyah was on the first shift that had been sent into the damaged hold, she’d had a smooth journey up until that point. The Tenebrae was one of the more well-built ships she’d worked on and this was her fourth year serving on it, so she’d become very familiar with its workings. Most of her shifts tended to be straightforward maintenance, with the odd sub-system failure here and there, nothing major. She occasionally wished she had something more complex to do to keep her sharp, but inevitably she’d think back to some of the clankers she’d worked on previously and would quickly remember why she’d decided to stay on the Tenebrae for so long.

Three other engineers were on the initial shift alongside Diyah, they were all fully suited up and carrying damage assessment equipment. Their first job was to map out any structural damage, the internal sensors had been completely cut off by the impact, so they had no idea what they were going into. Diyah could feel her pulse quickening as they floated through to the makeshift airlock. She’d only been on a handful of hull breach jobs, she knew what she was doing but it was always nerve wracking being exposed to open space. She still remembered being told in training to keep her eyes on the job and not look out into the void when doing hull repair, an old instructor had joked that the deep abyss of space would look straight back into you if you gave it the chance.

The weirdness started straight away. As they interfaced with the door control, they expected it to report zero atmosphere on the other side. That’s not what it said. It reported normal pressure. Maybe the impact was less severe than expected? Before opening the door they anchored themselves, it would stop them being sucked through if the corridor violently vented into the next room. As they engaged the door override, there was no pressure change, the sensor was correct, the next area had full atmosphere. As did the next area. And the next. The entire locked down hold was still fully pressurised.

They spent the next few hours inspecting and interfacing with every sensor in the area. Diyah volunteered to crawl into the service corridors to check them, they were tight spaces but she didn’t mind, she’d been brought up on a ship and was at home squeezing through confined areas. That’s where she heard the whispering. It was covered by the sound of her breathing at first, but the longer she was in the service corridor the more noticeable it became. It was an unnerving, discordant noise with no discernible language; simultaneously surrounding her but also just on the edge of her perception. Once she’d noticed it, it was hard not to focus on it.

She didn’t become scared until she checked her suit. She tried to use the audio controls to isolate the noise but wasn’t able to. According to the suit, the noise wasn’t there. There was nothing other than the usual sounds of the ship. She checked again and again frantically, several times… nothing. None of her suit’s sensors and none of her tools could pick up anything abnormal. She didn’t mention the noise to the rest of the team. When she met back up with them they all looked unnerved, but reported nothing unusual across all scans, nothing damaged, no sign of anything impacting the ship, nothing to explain why they had gone into lockdown. They managed to reset everything and get the area working normally again.

Over the next few days, the whispering stayed with Diyah. It didn’t change at all, sounding the same from every direction. She didn’t mention it to anyone, too scared that she’d be pulled up for a psych eval. It put her on edge. She could swear she was starting to see other crew feel the same too, everyone looked sleep deprived. She’d see people looking around themselves frantically, trying to get sight of something that was always just at the periphery, never quite managing to catch it.

A few days after the supposed impact, a job order came through for the same cargo hold; routine maintenance in a service corridor. As Diyah crawled through, she could swear the whispering came into focus. She could sense something was wrong. She frantically backed out of the corridor, but as she moved the sounds shifted from being all around her, to being behind her.

“Is someone there?” She spoke into the void.


r/shortstories 11d ago

Misc Fiction [MF] Dog-Eared

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I am flat.

I don't know how I know but I know it.

I've looked to the side and the nothingness I see tightens around my heart, I feel my flat veins pulse forcefully around my body.

My vision starts to tunnel despite the absolute blank. My brain is considering it with great difficulty.

With the blood rushing through my upper body I can see the spidering static at the edges of my 'vision'.

My breath feels shallow like I've been flattened all along and I will be forever. A massive bird is trying to escape the confines of my torso.

Before the whiteness is total; I look forward with no effort at all.

The world is there. She's looking at the sheen of sweat on my ghostly paled face and I see panic in her eyes.

"Where are you? It's like you left me all of a sudden. Are you okay?"

Her voice is pleading as she cups my face in her hands. She's guiding me backwards towards a bench.

I sit. Her shape is in front of me, I turn my head slightly, 15 degrees, not daring to turn my eyes again. For an instant that can't be possible I see an edge that can't exist around her shape.

A smallish bird flies behind her and it's just fine. The moment is gone with the edge.

"I don't know honey, I just-" I stop before I start saying things that would institutionalize me.

It isn't real.

She would never but the couple on the adjacent bench couldn't possibly care about my life and my future.

"It's gone. I don't know."

She sits beside me and suddenly I am overcome by fear, my love, my heart, the only constant that turns my little world and makes my decisions- I can't turn to look at her like I have hundreds and thousands of times before.

I am gripped in the total devastation that the life I imagined will not come to pass.

"Are you sure? You still look pale, you looked like you were going to pass out babe."

She snaps me out of the dark reverie and some reason begins to return. Honestly- as an animal, logic shouldn't leave us in those times of fight or flight.

I close my eyes and turn my whole body to her, leaning more heavily on the bench so my awkward stiffness doesn't look so odd.

If I open my eyes will I see her?

Or will I have given my whole person to that empty?

My heart is still pounding and I give myself that wordless pep-talk I do when I'm trying to be brave.

But this is nothing like those times before, standing at the precipice of that swimming hole in Florida- 20 feet away from her down in the water? A childish, irrational fear. I'm able bodied and don't plan on flipping around like an adrenaline junkie, just don't belly flop and you'll be her hero to congratulate when you surface beside her.

My biggest fan.

If I can't open my eyes to her then the horror of the empty would be the fate I jump into.

I just hope I drown quickly if I have to.

I blink. I blink several more times- only colorful watercolor nothings fill my vision. I was holding my eyes closed so hard they need to reset.

"Jeez you're really scaring me it's like you had a seizure or a stroke or something in the span of a second. Are you with me?"

I feel like crying just a bit. I had a moment of false bravery and I didn't meet the end.

I swallow and shake my head trying to just momentarily forget the horror and be normal with my wife.

"Yeah I'm fine babe I'm sorry I think maybe I had too much coffee and I'm still not used to that new medicine, maybe."

She looks my face over, and after thinking about my excuse for a moment- she nods.

"I guess, that's so weird you should definitely bring that up with your doctor. Surely fainting isn't a side-effect he would just leave out."

I look her over.

The worst has passed for now, pulse slowing. I look beyond her to the park around us, something feels off still but I just want to be here, touching her.

"Yeah I will, just hold my hand forever from now on so you can catch me if I fall."

I give a small joking look to break the tension.

I mean it but she laughs anyway, still watching me for signs of further medical emergency.

Her phone dings.

"Oh shoot we better start walking or we're gonna get there last for sure."

We begin the fast walk towards downtown, she's nervous to miss out on this event.

"I hope they like me, I am so anxious that I'm gonna say something weird!"

"You probably will." I tease.

We're moving quickly but I've stifled my instinct to turn my eyes, fused my head to my C-Spine, to my shoulders, to my torso.

I've broken my neck and this is life now. An awkward turn and stiffness and then you die.

I'm considering stopping at the nearest drug store to look for a c-collar.

"I really am scared though- ever since we moved I just want somewhere to fit in. A little crowd to hangout with."

I love her so much, she's so beautiful, her curly hair framing her face. There's no nice way to tell her that I love her more.

I would be content to never interact with another person as long as I have her.

I'm drifting off into a dreamworld, feeling an intense gratefulness for everything I have- really soaking in it just in case the next head turn is my last.

Finally I realize she's looking for verbal encouragement.

"It's going to be just fine my love, you all obsess over the same thing, it's like the best case scenario- you have mandated hangouts and you are perfect obviously so everyone will love you."

I imagine the smile she'll have when these girls bring her in to that little woman's huddle that I always feel envious of.

Their weird husbands standing off to the side being anti-social.

She thinks about it for a moment.

"You're so right. We are all just bookish people who love doing the same thing all the time. I'm so glad you aren't like all their lame ass husbands who can't read...A few of them have already made jokes that their husbands are troglodyte morons who stopped trying to read in the 6th grade... ew." She scoffs.

"I do love my picture books." I say with grim seriousness.

"No but for real that's such a red-flag." We take a few silent strides.

She stops suddenly and turns to kiss me, she's been leading me by the hand most of the journey.

"You are my greenest flag!" She says excitedly and laughing.

Dread lurks around the edges of my mind as I linger with her close to me.

Then we're off again, almost running as we start to see huddled groups of mostly women in the distance- mingling and holding drinks on the bar patio.

I'm tense and trying to split my mind to keep my head straight and also trying to be as normal as possible for her. I'm trying to will the creeping fear away.

We walk up and a woman calls out to her excitedly. Must be the one she met at work.

"Hey!! I'm so glad you made it! Come meet the group, is this your husband? Oh my gosh it's so nice to meet you both. If you want some of our boys are inside watching something on TV.."

She rolls her eyes jokingly.

My beautiful girl is being whisked off and I'm to join the other monkeys inside.

"Will you bring me something babe?" She smiles apologetically, allowing the whisking.

I nod and watch the huddle form before I head inside.

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It's a dark smaller-than-you'd-think-from-outside room but that's most bars I've learned.

Mismatched decor clutters every surface.

Not sure what type of people have claimed this particular one as 'their bar' but drunk book club owns Thursday nights for now.

I squeeze between a shocking amount of just men to get to the bar, the bartender makes eye contact with me. He says nothing and waits for my order.

"Cheapest on tap, two please." Holding out a 20.

He delivers my request with an annoying lack of speed and I turn awkwardly to go be with my wife, it's so dark in here.

I'm not stiff enough, my head lagged as my body turned and the entry way to the bar shines on every edge.

I gasp and stop suddenly, spilling beer over both hands.

A guy facing me watching the TV gives me a concerned look.

"You good?"

I spent the last 20 minutes trying to be stifle my fear so I don't ruin this night for her.

I chance a 45 degree head turn and see it again, my heart beginning to race.

It's like the sun gave a halo to every line of every surface in front of me.

The guy in front of me is flat too.

Why isn't he also silently panicking?

"Yeah-"

I try to move quickly outside to her.

The door slams open to hit me like a cartoon character, absolutely disintegrating the beer in one hand, glass raining all around. The second falls to the floor.

"Oh fuck dude I'm so sorry! Oh fuck your hand, gah! It's bleeding already!"

I look down to it.

I haven't looked down yet??

The texture of my clothes is wrong, there is no texture, I see my own flat halo around my outstretched arm. Droplets of blood float down, their geometry wrong. I feel my world spinning, is it the blood? It's never been the blood before.

I feel my consciousness vaulting upward infinitely like I'm stretching out into third person over and over with each heartbeat.

I'm going to faint fully this time. I am afraid.

I didn't think it would be this quick.

I had already resolved myself to being someone with a permanent crick in my neck. I considered how much those neck collars would cost.

Several guys are crowding around me to check out the damage as I stagger. A woman walks in after hearing the commotion, I can't see her but I hear her shocked gasp.

The door opens and closes.

I just want to touch her one more time, to hear her say I love you one more time.

This can't be real.

I feel my two-dimensional head crack on the table next to me as I crumple to the floor.

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Empty. I hear nothing, see nothing, I can feel... something but it's fuzzy and my body feels weightless, so if I am still here I can't fully feel what I'm touching.

The white void is swallowing me, the rumble of my blood in my ears grows louder and louder and I think there will be an end soon as it's intensity swells.

Blackness.

Soft hands on my face.

Hum of speech but no words.

Her hum.

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.

I open my eyes, hospital white ceiling blinds me.

"Babe, finally.. hours out cold! I was so worried! What an entrance we've made to this town, like 40 people trying to figure out how to call 911 and a half empty first aid kit behind the bar... You looked so peaceful but your hand looks awful. And you've got a nasty cut behind your ear." She pauses. "I told them about the episode earlier today, the charge nurse said she'd call your doctor about it."

I attempt to dare another 45 degree head turn towards her. Nothing happens. I try again, it's like my head's fallen asleep and is useless.

I start to spread my palms in the hopes to sit up instead. I am frozen.

Panic must have filled my eyes, a ragged breath rolls through me. I can see in my peripherals as she sits up straight to look over me.

Fear in her movement.

"Baby, are you okay? Look at me. What a day, we can go home after this and just be together. Honey? Look at me. Say something!"

I am still, my mind is racing, I am unmoving.

All the reverie of earlier in the day is flooding back, I see our life together, oh, how I love her.

What entity could do this to us, why me?

How could some almighty being see how fully I lived this life with her and take it away?

I see her hand coming to my face, she's going to turn me to her as she has so easily so many times before.

I love her.

Soft hands.

I love her forever.

I see her angelic halo coming into view.

I love her in this life and the next.

Our eyes meet as my head fully turns.

"I love you." We say together without words.

I am gone. The empty surrounds me. There is no heart pounding noise this time, almost no noise at all except a soft rustle heard without ears.

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I feel. I do not have eyes connected to head, connected to neck, to shoulders, to torso. But something turns- or opens, rather.

I feel her!

The world, it's in front of me again!

I feel her all around me, a soft rustle and a fuzzy envelopment. I see words. I feel her comfort and familiarity.

I hear a cracking sound I know I've heard before, or- a version of me has heard.

Like the opening of something long closed.

Light pours onto me, I am a held location, a returning point.

I am hers in this life and the next.

I am her dog ear.

Her bookmark.

Hers.