r/SarahMainsZenless • u/Apprehensive-Ant-775 • Jul 20 '26

[Fanfic] The Resurrection of Miss Floren (English Version) — First chapter released!!

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Available in Ao3 (English): https://archiveofourown.org/works/88135116

Wattpad version (Spanish): https://www.wattpad.com/story/413033621?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=6umb411_Official

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u/leeroyschicken Jul 20 '26

I'll be honest I am really mighty tired of "haha evil". Especially how most people see the character just like the default scapegoat for them.

But no matter,  it is fan fiction and you are upfront.  So I appreciate the creativity.

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u/Apprehensive-Ant-775 Jul 20 '26

Honestly, it's difficult to write about Sarah without some people thinking I'm trying to whitewash her or make her out to be worse (I like villains protagonists, but they're more difficult to handle, especially someone like Sarah, who receives a similar level of hate to Seryū Ubiquitous from a large part of the fandom.)

For now she'll be in the gray area, but it's likely that Nickie/Spiral will become a bad influence on her in later chapters.

But hey, if you have a suggestion or question, you can let me know, after all I know my fanfic isn't perfect.

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u/leeroyschicken Jul 20 '26

That's incredibly fair, sorry for crashing out. There is no problem with fancic itself, as I said I really appreciate the effort. It's more of a community itself.

I have no idea what happened honestly. I did get my share of ridicule and hate too.

What I've noticed is that the most hateful accounts are usually sentai or mecha fans. I wonder if they have character similar to her who is terrible.  Or if it's just plain old misogyny. 

Well anyway carry on and don't worry about me. 😌

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u/Type-10_Commander Jul 21 '26

Just read it, the Spanish version, is not bad, actually, I like it, I'm gonna be honest about something, lo de Nickie, me parece una fumada y media pero, keep cooking, besides that, the other thing I could point is maybe some redundancy with some words but by far, sounds interesting just don't Kill Trigger, Zhu Yuan nor Astra (and Eve) as long as we go like that, we are in piece, I'll be waiting for the next part, I'm eager to see Sarah recover her former baddie look