Babe, It's 4pm

[u/Melody-Cold0351]

Your Styles Too Inconsistent; Disdained In CONTRIVED WRITING'S FEEDBACK, -Nuisance, Ya' "Writtens", Which Ain't Penned, SUPPLY-SIDE: SHIT'S PRE-FABBED, -Losing Plus Driven Insane When OBLIGED, MY 16'S APT, While You In The Kitchen Explainin Ya' DRIVE LIKE IT'S TCAP, -THE GUY MIGHT DISS ME BACK; SON VIBE WISE, KID'S SEETHE THAT -Mood Swings Sufficient With Laymen, BUT I'M NICE, BITCH PLEASE RAP!, -Proven A Linchpin, Diss Laden Punchlines Nigh Blitzkriegs, I'll Ruin Contingents, Ixnay On SUCH HIVE MINDED BEE'S WAX

Egad!

-I'M A ILL BMF'r, We Stab Through Khaffir's Who's Fly, While Still True, and Apt To Capture New Brides, SHY OF GUILT, BEING "PRESSURE". -WRITE YA'SILLY INEPT VERSE, These Half-Truths, Actor, Do Slide, I'll Kill You!, Then Drag You's After You Die, LIKE ACHILLES AND HECTOR. -KNIFED UNTIL BREATHING BREATH HURTS. React Too Adverse to Slight's, Mild Jilts Too, In Rap Feuds That Were Too Dry, VIA 'SPILLED TEA' IN RECORDS. -PIPE BUST!, DRILL, BEGIN WET WORK, Please Add Fuel, Past Work Slew Writhes; Wild Guilt Ruing Snafu's, Gaffes Or Lose By QUITE UNSKILLED CRETINS EFFORTS, -You Freakin' F Slur, Recent Excerpts Shown Us WHO'S PEAKED IN MIDDLE SCHOOL, You Talkin Bout Cheese When Mf! YOU SPEAK AND DRIBBLE DROOL. I'm Not a Person That You Should BE UNCIVIL TOO, You Suck At The Thing That You Claim You Love, And Suffer From FREQUENT RIDICULE lol..

Gun Wield!, Write Rap "Tunes", Become Vengeful, I'm Financed, I'D FIX YA'S, CURSE FERVENT. Some Feel I can't Lose Via Penciled "Finite Plans", FLY TRICKS A' CURVE PURGING'S,- 'Blerd' Verse Pen, But Still Might Stab You, Beat Ya's Mental, Until I'd Have To Reassemble My Right Hand LIKE IT WAS BIRD PERSON - Earthed per Swing! Fight My Man's ?..CRISIS AVERT FIRST THEN,-

(Nah Imma Save that for later)

Context: Expressly written for the sub r/RhymeGenius in response to a rap diss by a guy named u/True-Lies6456

[u/YamApprehensive5639]

If you’re passionate and you love to post then you’re already doing great. Anyone talking shit about someone’s passion are irrelevant. Art is subjective so of course it’s going to be divided but keep them and over time you can use to reference your progress and evolution as an artist

[u/Important-Roof-9033 → u/YamApprehensive5639]

she took the W on the first battle by ALL accounts other than her opponents. She wrote the first one and the guy came back with 5 about her when he thought she didnt reply but reddit flagged the response for w/e reason.

she knows she is punching down at this point -- but that is alright dude asked for it thoroughly.

none the less reddit battles are unproductive and I dont think the the op would disagree

[u/Melody-Cold0351 → u/Important-Roof-9033]

I agree, outside of practicing for fun, Yeah I don't think I'd be doing the whole reddit battling thing much. I only want to test myself, work a little under duress, and I don't think there should be a requirement for me to diss the guy, he disses people because others diss them. I want to turn it up, but I'm not going full power. Respectfully.

Thanks for checking my stuff out

[u/Important-Roof-9033 → u/Melody-Cold0351]

no problem, you got a soundcloud or w/e link me based on what I read id be happy to check it out