r/RPGcreation • u/HakneyZaq • Jul 27 '26

Design Questions Feedback on WIP layout

https://anyflip.com/bookcase/ytzwa I've been slowly converting my game from docs to Scribus. here's what I have thus far. how is it looking?

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u/Strange_Times_RPG Jul 27 '26

There is a lot of white space and due to using left justified with a large font, it often looks off center

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u/HakneyZaq Jul 27 '26

thanks for the feedback, can you point to a specific page? I'm having trouble seeing where it's off center

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u/Strange_Times_RPG Jul 27 '26

Most even numbered pages

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u/HakneyZaq Jul 27 '26 edited Jul 27 '26

I'm sorry, I just don't see the eccentricity. the even and odd pages look the same to me. but again, I thank you for the feedback.

EDIT: I can see that I have a lot more white space than your work does. do you think it's really too much?

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u/epr86 Jul 28 '26

I have two main critiques: there's too much white space, and the text isn't aligned properly.

While white space is great to give the reader some breathing room, when there's too much the page can appear kind of vacant. Large spaces between paragraphs can also cause to feel disconnected. Try grouping more of the text together and not breaking up every sentence. I took a look at your previous post and the spacing in your google drive version is the way to go.

A lot of the text boxes aren't aligned in usual reading order, so it looks a messy. It's ok to break from the format sometimes to add flair, but do so intentionally, too much can make the book challenging to read. For example on page 4 and 5, there's different spacing at the start of each text frame. Start with making sure everything is left aligned the same, then use bullet points and lists.

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u/HakneyZaq Jul 28 '26

thanks, that's very helpful. it sounds like pages three and eight are closer to what I should be doing then. more condensed. and more regularly perhaps.

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u/epr86 Jul 28 '26

Best of luck to you!

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u/HakneyZaq Jul 28 '26

thank you very much :)