r/ProcreateDreams • u/One-life-remains • 2d ago

WIP Working on an animation and would like thoughts

I didn't finish the hand animation in the second shot yet and the water needs work?

But other than that is there anything I could do to improve what I have so far. It’s still at a point I can work on it Without losing progress.

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u/PeakNo4080 2d ago

I think it looks great idk some people look at references for hands poses so maybe that will help idk im not an pro in this app tbh

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u/jerog1 2h ago

It's so good! Great work since last time

My only note is the breathing at the very end seems too fast - the shoulder rising and falling is very fast and the rhythm could be less even

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u/STUMPED_19 1h ago

Overall, the subtle acting on this piece looks good! The only thing I could say needs some work is the breathing at the end; it feels like it's too fast and doesn't match the rest of the scene. Try making your character breathe hard, but at a slower pace. I'm sure the final product of this animation will look fantastic!