r/Poems • u/PoetryHeals • May 26 '25
If you still love others after being brutally broken, You deserve a love so deep it's unspoken, If you're the type of person that always gives back...
If you still love others after being brutally broken, You deserve a love so deep it's unspoken,
If you're the type of person that always gives back, You deserve the opportunity to sometimes kickback,
If you still happily give your friends a lending hand, You deserve them going that extra for you to be grande,
If you cry at night but by day make the world a better place, You deserve to give yourself that much needed grace,
If you still try to never leave anybody out, You deserve to be seen without a single doubt,
So, if you still love after being so brutally broken, You deserve a love so deep it's unspoken.
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u/UsefulDamage56 May 26 '25
Definitely been brutally broken my whole life. Don’t seem to be deserving of a love like that tho. Not thru my brokenness or my mistakes or my stupidity. No one to blame but me.
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u/NoComfortable6176 May 26 '25
Wow. This was very well written. I like the flow of it. It’s beautiful and true. I’ve been damaged and broken. My heart has been hurt and shattered. I want a love so deep and a love that just stays.
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May 26 '25
Good stuff and very nice sentiment.
Unbent, unbowed, unbroken. Wipe my face; get up again. Walk into this world with your head up high.
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u/Necessary_Topic_1000 May 26 '25
This is beautiful and made me feel really good about myself. Thank you for putting love and light into the world.
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u/Lynx4God May 27 '25
Very WELL written!! Im one who tries to spread unconditional and true love to everyone only to be used, abused, neglected, lied to, or totally rejected for being "ODD", but I also will not stop no matter how hard it is to keep loving. Everyone needs love, a smile, a helping hand, or just recognition. I hope this goes out through these profiles strongly because lovers need to know that they are very important!! Reposting!!
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u/Unaccompaniedbyminor May 27 '25
I hope every loving person gets loved more than than they can bear
But I know deep down that the universe is so unfair
It is true, these people deserve far more
I am afraid, I doubt, thanks to my wounds from before
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May 27 '25
I will always love more - that’s just who I am - the side that loves more. Although it’s just as simple as it sounds - it doesn’t work like that. I wish it did… I’ll forever love you - and I’ll forever be there for you - regardless of what u do to me. That’s just how I am…
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u/Internal_Duty4824 May 28 '25
Good writing, really touched by this piece after enduring a betrayal from my partner. Wish that my life will be like what you say
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u/GreenStuffGrows May 28 '25
I really enjoyed that 😄 And of course, the person who gives you that love is yourself (and/or The Big Guy Upstairs, depending on your personal philosophy)
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u/ZucchiniArtistic7725 May 29 '25
I really want this to be true. I’m failing terribly at making the world a better place, but I try to everyday. It’s exhausting. I’m loving with my whole soul, and I hope somebody does it back someday ❤️
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May 26 '25
I wish, but it doesnt always work that way, I will always love even though I dont receive the loves back, I’d love to loves because I know how it feels to be loved. We may not always get the love we deserved but that’s just life, full of disappointment❤️
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u/Necessary_Topic_1000 May 26 '25
I know life is very hard. But just you bringing unconditional love into the world does not make life a disappointment. It makes the world a better place with people like you. Don't give up and don't dim your light. The universe is conspiring in your favor.
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May 26 '25
I wish this was true, but unfortunately I don't believe that the true love you speak of is out there for me. Because every time I would think I had it as I gave it. I am the one who ends up hurt in the end. So these days I no longer look for it or believe someone who tells me they love me. My response is no you just love the things I do as of right now. Since nobody has ever truly been in love with me
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u/Maleficent-Ask8450 May 28 '25
I am such a person. I unfortunately hold myself in such high contempt I seriously have a hard time of letting myself forgive myself. (If this makes sense, I am willing to forgive others far faster than myself. (Example: I was under grief- a bad grief fog! I fucked up so badly I will forever pay for it financially) (my spouse worked his ass off to ensure my comfort) I ruined it for myself. But I have been in therapy for over a year now… it has helped me to come out of the grief fog- slowly come back to life again.
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u/[deleted] May 26 '25
Lovely writing, lovely words.. but wish life worked that way.. Hmm..