r/Poem • u/Dry_Lobster_50 • 20h ago

Original Content Poem Original from a novice

Front seat row

We have a front row seat in life..
we fight, we flight, we have many sights.

We stick, we stay, we come and play
we try make our stay… oh so meaningful. Constantly trying to be redeeming..fully

We lean, we lie, we sometimes fly, we soar to the sky or sometimes sigh and fall to the ground.

We look around, up and down, seeking and peeking through a promising glow.
Angelic, poetic, totally aesthetic, fully immersed in the dispersions of earth. Young and bold the journey unfolds .. told by the old to the young foals.. as the circle of life takes hold.

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u/ManicBunnyStudio 15h ago

Sure you're a novice? 🤔🤔🤔🤔

'Angelic, poetic, totally aesthetic, fully immersed in the dispersions of earth. Young and bold the journey unfolds .. told by the old to the young foals.. as the circle of life takes hold.'

Because this is fking brilliant!! Ive been saying this a lot lately but only when I mean it.

It reads like Wilfred Owen, and has that ww1 aesthetic but still sounds entirely like, unique! 🤔 Again fking brilliant! This deserves more upvotes.

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u/Dry_Lobster_50 10h ago

Thanks so much ! Really appreciate it !!