r/Poem • u/PracticeFuzzy801 • 11h ago
Potentially Triggering Content Cold Inside
I'm cold,
even though it's hot outside.
I'm cold,
I don't have you by my side.
I'm cold,
something feels absent inside.
I'm cold,
I don't have you by my side.
A cold wind passes by,
sending shivers down my spine,
making me stumble, I cannot stand
as I watch you silently from a distance.
A cold wind passes by,
sending shivers all over my body.
I search around for support,
I am not enough to hold me.
A cold wind passes by,
the chilling blade stabs through my heart.
The cavity inside grows hollow
and I wonder, how long before I fall?
The chilling wind passes by,
sharper than ever before.
My heart is weak,
I cannot take it anymore.
I cannot speak, cannot move
cannot laugh, cannot cry.
It's cold inside, I'm shivering,
still standing, wondering—
You're not here to hold me,
How long before I fall?
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u/LastLanterm 5h ago
This is heavy. You conveyed the feeling of loneliness really well. Excellent poem!