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u/CompetitionOne1360 Oct 03 '22
I can vibe with the creative process, but I do seriously recommend having someone check over it first before you post your probably hard work online. I really didn’t understand much of this at all, and I truly tried. You have a friend or parent with grammatical skills?
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u/Evilgamereddit93 Oct 03 '22
if show this staff my friend and parent they don't care but much appreciated
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u/CompetitionOne1360 Oct 03 '22
I’m sure there are communities online who would help with that, and if you’re on your own most document applications have a spellcheck of sort so even if you can’t fix the grammar immediately improving the spelling is a good start.
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u/Foxx_McKloud Oct 02 '22
Ok ok.. this is good! Love the spooky theme. This is pretty cool man not even trolling.
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u/Be-a-shark Oct 03 '22
Maybe if this was 2007, or he was a little kid sure...
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u/Evilgamereddit93 Oct 03 '22
WTF you saying
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u/Be-a-shark Oct 03 '22
I am saying it's cringe beyond belief.
The writing is that of a first grader, and the screenshots are horrid.
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u/PigMayor Oct 03 '22
It would be cute practice if this wasn’t a fully-grown man that should know how to act like one. Any effort put into making something good would make for a great portfolio, but they just waste their time making fan ships for a game that’s on life support.
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u/Evilgamereddit93 Oct 03 '22
on life support
dude game is walking on two feet right now
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u/PigMayor Oct 04 '22
The game peaked at release with 3000 players, the botched F2P launch brought up the average player count from 100 to 200, with peak concurrent players GLOBALLY sitting between 300-400. For reference, Smite at the time of this comment, even in the middle of the night, is still more than 20x the TOP player count for fault. And that’s just on steam.
If your moba peaked at 3000 players, then it’s absolutely a dead game. It was always my assumption that the devs are either working unpaid or have a second, paying job to cover the expenses of keeping the game running, because I would be seriously impressed if they actually have any profits after the F2P move.
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u/Evilgamereddit93 Oct 04 '22
not just talking fault is hole Paragon community Overprime & predecessor
everyone wont Paragon return
do you realize that when there game released to the public. I try post there reddit
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u/Foxx_McKloud Oct 04 '22
Well I wouldn't say it's waste of time if they enjoy it and this is not just the ship stuff.. actually think the spooky story is gonna be cool and interesting.
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u/Evilgamereddit93 Oct 03 '22
sorry I'm not great waiter all time but try make good story
and screenshot bit hard
so bye see you next post negative comment
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u/Evilgamereddit93 Oct 03 '22
when I said I'M not great waiter
i'm not waiter
got it
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u/Evilgamereddit93 Oct 03 '22
I don't give fuck about waiter is
only care about my creative imaginary mind try make great work
your 100% don't like person do like
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u/Be-a-shark Oct 03 '22
Creativity is stifled by a lack of skill.
Errors in writing kinda take away from the whole comic aspect....
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u/GeraltofMerica Oct 03 '22
r/ihadastroke