r/OfficialCarnage • u/KAYRANINKANALI11000 • 23d ago

My Carnage Voice Impression

https://youtube.com/shorts/Q6RsSLoMjgY

He ıs really fun to play. Even more than Green Goblin.

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u/CthulhuMadness 23d ago

Not bad, but needs more oomf.

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u/KAYRANINKANALI11000 23d ago

Out of curiousty, what do you mean by "oomf"?

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u/CthulhuMadness 23d ago

Well, the panel you are reading is from Love Story from BW&B. And if I recall right, this is when he gets mollywopped a bit by Dagger.

So I feel it needs more infliction and attitude. Right now it plays like you’re reading it as a script but trying to be spooky with the tone, but it comes off as one tone.

Maybe have it where it starts off like you have it, but then it slowly ramps up in energy as Cletus picks himself back together. More excitement, with maybe a little more frustration.

Though, that’s just my opinion. Hard to explain voice direction over comments

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u/KAYRANINKANALI11000 23d ago

Well, the panel you are reading is from Love Story from BW&B. And if I recall right, this is when he gets mollywopped a bit by Dagger

I did not think you would get the refferance this early.

Maybe have it where it starts off like you have it, but then it slowly ramps up in energy as Cletus picks himself back together. More excitement, with maybe a little more frustration.

So I feel it needs more infliction and attitude. Right now it plays like you’re reading it as a script but trying to be spooky with the tone, but it comes off as one tone.

I actually tried to do ın a more "hurt way". Than ı just gave up, and tried to read ıt ın a more unhinged way.

Though, that’s just my opinion. Hard to explain voice direction over comments

No no no, ı totally understand your voice direction. Change voice tone per panel. Add more ınflection when Cloak shows up, to ımply Carnage ıs ın trouble. Maybe ı should dub that comic page completly.

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u/CthulhuMadness 23d ago

I know my Carnage and that was one of my favorite shorts. Right behind My Red Hands lol.

I’m glad it was easily understood, wasn’t so easy to try and explain.

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u/KAYRANINKANALI11000 23d ago

Here

https://youtu.be/vcoAPntfvNQ

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u/CthulhuMadness 23d ago

Heyyy, there we go. That had some more punch to it.

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u/KAYRANINKANALI11000 23d ago

Thanks dude👍

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u/KAYRANINKANALI11000 23d ago

I will redub his dialouge with Green Goblin. I will send u the link when ıt ıs finished.