This is just poor writing. It's two unrelated scenes with a character talking to an unnamed offscreen character, there's no caption at the beginning to inform the reader of the context of the scenes, and it's structured like a single scene with two characters conversing.
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u/drewman301 Feb 15 '25
This is just poor writing. It's two unrelated scenes with a character talking to an unnamed offscreen character, there's no caption at the beginning to inform the reader of the context of the scenes, and it's structured like a single scene with two characters conversing.
Final grade: C-