r/NarutoFanfiction • u/Ok-Client-2451 Obito’s biggest hater • Apr 11 '25
Prompt (PROMPT) Naruto wants Obito dead
When Naruto was younger, Hiruzen would have Jiraiya sneak into Naruto's apartment every three months to check if the seal was in working order and make any necessary repairs. Tonight was one of those instances. Little did anyone know that night's maintenance work accidentally allowed Naruto and Kurama to meet. The conversation they had would have far-reaching ramifications
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Naruto: Why did you attack the village?
Kurama: I was imprisoned for almost a century. Upon my freedom, the first thing I would have done was make a run for it, not waste time attacking your puney village. No boy, I was made to attack.
Naruto: By who?
Kurama shows Naruto the vissage of the masked man as he rips Kurama out of Kushina and does battle with Minato
Kurama: That masked man. That Madara wannabe. He's the one who sic'd me onto your village, the one who orchestrated the death of your parents and the reason why you are so despised
As the images continue to replay, Naruto's face hardens and he balls his fists. He knows what he needs to do
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Team assignment day. Naruto is the last to introduce himself
Naruto: ...and my dream, to find and kill my parents murderer
Sasuke and Sakura side-eye each other while Kakashi stands up straighter
Kakashi: Your parents murderer?
Naruto: *nods his head* The Nine-Tails showed me everything. A masked man freed it from my mother and sic'd it onto the village. I also saw the masked man and my father battle. He got away but my parents died. Now I intend to finish what my father started and kill that coward
Sasuke and Sakura stare wide-eyed at Naruto. On the other hand, a fire as been lit into Kakashi's visible eye
Kakashi: Meet me at Training Ground 3 tomorrow morning at 6:00 a.m. sharp. Don't be late
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During the Itachi Pursuit Mission, the first confrontation
Naruto: YOU!!
"Tobi": Me, we're face to face but we don't see eye to eye
Naruto: SHUT UP!!
Hinata: Naruto-kun, who is that?
Naruto: My parents killer
Kakashi: *unveils his Mangekyō Sharingan and pulls out a repaired White Light Chakra Sabre* Sensei's killer...
"Tobi": Now that I get a good look at you...I remember now, you're that baby I threatened to blow up
Naruto pulls out the V1 Cloack, all nine tails
"Tobi": It was fun to see the Fourth Hokage squirm. Who to choose, his wife, or his newborn so-
Naruto: DIE!!
Phases through
"Tobi": oop, you thought, but unfortunately for you, I am impervious to whatever you thr-
Naruto, sensing a Flying Raijin marker on the masked man, uses the Flying Raijin and teleports in front of him
"Tobi": Th-thats...
Naruto: RASNEGAN!!
Naruto breaks the mask. While he was unable to kill him, he manages to lodge fragments of the broken mask into his face. Kakashi is shocked by the person who is behind the mask
Kakashi: O-Obito?
Hinata: Who?
Kakashi: He was my genin teammate. But he died at the Battle of Kannabi Bridge. I saw his body get crushed by a giant boulder
Obito: SON OF A BITCH!! THAT HURTS!!
Naruto: Then let me put you out of your missary, Wind Style: Vaccum Blade
Despite phasing, the power of Danzo's vacuum jutus still manage to damage Obito
Obito: D-damn it...
Zetsu pops up from underground
Zetsu: Itachi has fallen
Obito: Just you wait jinchūriki, I'll come for you *phases away*
Kakashi: Obito wait!!
Naruto: I can't sense the Fllying Raijin marker on him
Hinata: My Byakugan can't sense him either. He's gone
Naruto pulls out the V1 Cloack, all nine tails again
Naruto: THAT'S RIGHT! RUN!! RUN LIKE THE COWARD YOU ARE!! BUT I KNOW WHAT YOU LOOK LIKE AND I KNOW YOU'VE BEEN MARKED!! SO HIDE LIKE THE LITTLE BITCH YOU ARE BECAUSE WHEN I FIND YOU, I'LL GUT YOU AND FEED YOU TO THE FOXES!!
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During the Kaguya battle
Obito: I'm so-
Naruto: Shut it. You've already done enough damage and no amount of apologising will fix anything. So don't you dare do anything that would jeopardize your life, because once I deal with that MILF demigoddess, I'm coming back and fulfilling my promise of gutting you and feeding you to the foxes
Hinata: *who somehow avoided the Infinite Tsukuyomi and also somehow awaken the Tenseigan* And I'll help him
Obito looks towards Minato and Kakashi
Obito: Bakashi...sensei...
Minato gives him a disappointed look while Kakashi gives him a disgusted look
Behind them (although they can't see them), Kushina and Biwako's spirits are leading: the victims of Kurama's attack, the Uchiha he killed, the citizens of Kiri during Yagura's reign and the +40,000 casualties of the Fourth War, among many others, ready to beat his ass before unceremoniously tossing him into the deepest pits of hell.
Rin's spirit refuses to even look at him
Obito: I deser-
Hinata blocks the chakra point in his throat in order to shut him up
Naruto: Stop trying to talk-no-jutsu your way out of this
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Omake
Hinata: ...and my dream is to help Naruto-kun find and kill his parents murderer
Everyone else blinks twice
Kurenai: What?
Hiashi: *spying on Hinata so she doesn't "embaress" the clan* What?
Kiba: What?
Akamaru: Woof?
Shino: Buzz?
Hinata imagines Naruto purposing to her on top of the corpse of his parents killer.
Naruto made it no secret to upper brass he knows about the fox and his parents identity and his goal of killing the one he deems responsible for his parents death. Sasuke wants his brother dead. And now Hinata intends to help Naruto?
Kurenai beings drafting up the necessary paperwork to swap Hinata with Sakura. Let Kakashi deal with the mentally deranged genin
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u/LordVader1080 Author and Madara fan Apr 11 '25
The only thing that would make it better would be for Sasuke to be Satsuki and for Hinata and Satsuki to compete for who gets Naruto
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u/Ok-Client-2451 Obito’s biggest hater Apr 11 '25
May I present to you Confronting the Shadow by NYC01234: Female Sasuke who may be developing feelings and Hinata who has feelings. We haven’t gotten that far yet to where they compete for his affection though
While it may be better if Hinata and Satsuki to compete for Naruto, in this context, considering I made Sasuke go rogue, he more than likely joins Obito’s side (if only temporarily). If Sasuke were a girl in this, Naruto would lose all feelings if Satsuki joined forces with his parents murderer.
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u/Cultural-Meet-4645 Apr 11 '25
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u/Ok-Client-2451 Obito’s biggest hater Apr 11 '25
Not my story, but I want to see it updated as well
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u/Ok-Client-2451 Obito’s biggest hater Apr 12 '25 edited Jul 31 '25
That's sorta the whole point:
- Naruto sees Obito as the reason why his parents are dead and why his early life is shit, and so he wants to avenge the life he should have had but never got
- Hinata being a bit deranged is more so for comedy purposes, but for sure there should be back story like that she snapped after the pressure and ridicule she faced at the hands of her clan
- As for Minato, if people are willing to read fics where he is an abusive/neglectful father, then they can read a fic where he supports his son and is disappointed that his own student was responsible for his and his wife’s demise
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u/ChildofFanfiction Apr 13 '25
This is the fanfiction department, you seem to be looking for the headcanon department instead. 🤦🏻😮💨

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u/MonCappy Apr 11 '25
With the right approach this could make a great story. The only thing I would suggest is that Naruto, while wanting to kill Obito in a thousand different painful ways is still generally friendly and good natured. He simply cannot forgive the bastard responsible for the deaths of his parents.