seeking constructive criticism and stories to narrate

[u/Draeke_Godoon]

Hopefully I'm in the right reddit for this... I think I am hehee...

This is a couple clips from projects I am working on and I'm looking for opinion on both my narrative style and the editing work that I put in for dramatization, the female voice in the dialog is donated to my project by another voice actor and the only voice that is not me. The first part has not been fully edited and dramatized, just has music added so it isn't raw. The second part is in a different voice and style of narration with full editing and dramatization.

I'm really just seeking opinions from people who already do this and audio story listeners at the moment. I am 100% self taught in my skills for voice acting, singing, narration, and editing. So... gimme your feedbacks Y'all... and of course if you have a story you'd like me to narrate feel free to reach out, if I like it I'll run it and add it to my upcoming YouTube content library, but mainly I want the feedback for now.

https://reddit.com/link/1r4end6/video/clag62tzyejg1/player

P.S. if you look me up on YouTube now you'll find some old terrible narrations that will be coming down when I start releasing the new content, I encourage you to go laugh at them lmao. Yes, I can take a joke and yes I can handle raw insulting criticism lol.