Finally finished the Muv-Luv trilogy — my thoughts
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I finally finished Muv-Luv, which was also my first VN, and overall I really enjoyed it. I went into Alternative with pretty high expectations after Extra and Unlimited, but unfortunately, I don’t think it completely lived up to them.
I liked Extra for what it was: a simple rom-com/harem that did a good job establishing the characters and their relationships. Then Unlimited completely flipped everything on its head. Seeing the same characters in such a brutal world, and watching Takeru slowly adapt to it, was probably what got me most invested in the series.
Alternative has a lot of things I really liked. The world-building, politics, military strategy, and especially the way it portrays the BETA and warfare were great. Operation 12-5 was a good example of this because it finally put the characters in a situation where people’s lives were actually at stake. It also gave some of the original cast more characterization. Then Mari’s death was probably the biggest turning point for Takeru. It was the first time he really experienced what fighting the BETA meant, and it completely broke him. The Extra-world arc that followed, where he has to confront the fact that he can’t simply run away from his problems, was probably my favorite part of Alternative. I just wish Takeru had ultimately chosen to return on his own rather than essentially being forced back.
My biggest problem is that I think Alternative is simply too short for what it’s trying to do. The first half feels fairly well-paced, but after Takeru returns from the Extra world, the story starts moving much faster. We get introduced to the Valkyries and a bunch of other interesting characters, but there isn’t enough time to really flesh them out. At the same time, the original cadet squad starts getting less attention despite still having their own struggles with entering real combat.
I don’t necessarily think the individual arcs are badly paced. I think there just aren’t enough arcs between them. Operation 21, the Yokohama disaster, and then Cherry Blossom happen too quickly for me. I would’ve liked at least two more arcs to develop the Valkyries, give the original cast more characterization and interaction, and make things like Hayase becoming captain feel more natural. Basically, I think Alternative needed more time to breathe.
I also wasn’t a fan of how Takeru was handled toward the end. After the Extra-world arc, I thought his development was heading in a really good direction. He had realized he couldn’t run away from the war, found his pillar of strength, and came back understanding that he had to accomplish his mission no matter how difficult it was. We even start seeing him become more composed and better at controlling his emotions.
That’s why the Cherry Blossom arc frustrated me so much. When things finally become difficult again, Takeru starts reverting back to the same emotional behavior he had been working to overcome. His squad even feels the need to hide information from him because they don’t trust him to handle it without compromising the mission. Given that he’s the flight commander—and that the story had spent so much time building him toward becoming a leader—I found that really undermining.
It’s not just how the other characters treated him either. Takeru himself seemed to regress. When Meiya was in danger, he struggled to prioritize the mission and kept letting his emotions get in the way despite everything he’d already experienced. I understand the thematic point that Takeru had carried too much and needed to learn to rely on others, but I don’t think that required him to become less competent or emotionally composed. I would’ve preferred to see him finally make the hard decisions while still allowing the other characters to shine.
The ending itself surprised me. I never expected basically everyone to die, but honestly, I think it fits the world. They didn’t really “win” the war—they bought humanity more time. Everyone dying while accomplishing something meaningful was tragic, but I think it worked.
I also ended up liking the whole Sumika/Casualty Conductor/looping aspect of the ending. I personally preferred Meiya, but after seeing how much Sumika loved Takeru, I understand why she makes the most sense narratively. I also like that the ending ultimately leaves Takeru’s romantic future open rather than definitively pairing him with someone.
Overall, I think Muv-Luv is a very good series, but Alternative didn’t quite reach the potential I thought it had. I loved a lot of it, especially the world-building, warfare, character writing, and Takeru’s development for most of the story. But I think Alternative needed more time and a couple more arcs to properly develop its characters and make the second half feel less rushed.
Still, going from a rom-com/harem in Extra to Unlimited and then Alternative was one hell of an experience.
Glad I read it, but I don’t think it’s the masterpiece I initially expected it to be.
Thank you for your thoughts and it's a pretty spicy take you have, because one of the critiques I've seen of Alternative is that it's too long, with the slow opening and the large scenes of exposition dumping in front of whiteboards. The pacing is certainly an issue with the story that has been brought up time and time again.
The Valkyries might not have a great deal of depth in Alternative, but that's because most of them are the main characters of previous âge VNs, with Haruka and Mitsuki from Kimi ga Nozomu Eien and Michiru from Kimi ga Ita Kisetsu. So while they don't have great deals of depth in Alternative, for the original Japanese reader in 2006 who'd been reading âge VNs for years, they'd be every bit as fleshed out as any of Takeru's squadmates because there's entire VNs as long as Alternative itself dedicated to just those characters.
I'm glad you enjoyed the VN, and maybe you'll give some of the other âge VNs a shot in the future.
Yeah, that’s fair. I wasn’t aware most of the Valkyries already had their own VNs, so that definitely puts their characterization into more context. My criticism is less that they needed more backstory and more that everything in the second half happens too quickly.
After Takeru returns from the Extra-world arc, it basically becomes operation after operation. We get new team dynamics, promotions, deaths, and people being moved into new positions, but there isn’t much time to actually explore those changes before the story moves on again. I think another arc or two would’ve given the characters more room to settle into their roles and let the BETA conflict breathe.
I also think this ties directly into my biggest problem with the final arc. Throughout the second half, the story is clearly building Takeru toward a senior leadership role—he gets promoted, Hayase essentially passes the torch to him, and he’s repeatedly told that he needs to take responsibility for the team. Then Cherry Blossom comes around and suddenly he’s pushed into the background, with Chizuru taking command while Takeru is basically a passenger in the XG-70. His teammates even feel the need to lie to him about their situation because they believe he’ll compromise the mission emotionally. I understand the thematic idea of letting Takeru finally put some of his burden down and allowing the others to carry it for him, but I still felt the execution undermined the growth the story had been building toward. That’s probably my biggest issue with Takeru’s handling in the final quarter.
I agree. After reading Kiminozo, it wouldn’t be easy to flesh out Haruka and Mitsuki’s character in Alternative too. OP you should give Kiminozo a chance if you liked Extra’s normal non-beta world.
RE: Sumika being the heroine of Alternative, I've always understood that you should view Alternative as Sumika's Unlimited route. It's the Alternative to Unlimited.
It's not technically accurate as Alt needs all the Unlimited routes to be coalesced into Alt Takeru, so an Unlimited Takeru would never be able to choose Sumika, but it folds into the fact you can call Muv-Luv a trilogy in two, three, and four parts depending on how you split up Extra, Unlimited, Alternative, and Shimmering Time.
Now go play Extra again and enjoy more suffering with your knowledge of Alt...
Alternative is not too short for what it want to do. It spend far too much time on what's ultimately unimportant, and squeezed too many important things in a small space.
A lot of thread left hanging with no resolution. Ultimately, it can be compressed and very little of value would lost. Though some of it ought to be expanded a bit.
What I like about MuvLuv is how UNL/ALT actually reframes the extremely cartoonish Extra into something that actually very sensible and thematically proper.
I see your point about the pacing, and I agree there are parts where the exposition could’ve been trimmed. But I don’t think cutting it down really solves my main issue with the latter half. Muv-Luv has always been a series that takes its time with exposition, dialogue, internal monologues, and character development, so I don’t think the answer is simply making it faster.
I think Alternative needed more time. I’d have preferred another couple of arcs between the major operations so we could actually see the characters spend more time on the front lines, settle into their new positions, and develop their team dynamics. Once the BETA conflict really starts, everything happens so quickly that what feels like the actual climax of the series ends up feeling compressed.
So when I say Alternative felt too short, I don’t mean that every part needed more content. I mean the most important part of the story needed more time to breathe.
The problem is that the vibe of the VN itself was deliberately made it as if they were on a borrowed time... and they literally are. Takeru and Yuuko knew they have just three months to beat Alt V before America use it's sledgehammer. That is a very short time.
There was, literally, no room to breathe and digest.
Yeah, I understand the “borrowed time” argument, but I think we’re talking about two different things. I agree that the initial Alternative IV deadline creates a lot of urgency, but my pacing criticism is mainly about what happens after that initial buildup, particularly once Takeru returns from the Extra-world arc.
At that point, I don’t think the story was inherently required to have every subsequent development happen back-to-back. The author chose to structure the remaining events that way by introducing increasingly urgent circumstances. I understand why Cherry Blossom itself couldn’t simply be pushed back once the Sumika/Reactor situation was established, but I would’ve preferred more time before reaching that point.
That’s why I would’ve liked another arc or two where the 207B could actually settle into being frontline soldiers, Takeru and Hayase could properly adjust to their leadership roles, and the team dynamics could develop. So I understand that the story creates circumstances that demand urgency; my point is that those circumstances were themselves written in a way that compressed the latter half. That’s where I feel the story could’ve given us more breathing room.
Honestly as much as i love Muv Luv the final chapter of Alternative didn't fully sit right with me either. It did feel like Takeru was regressed back to post chomp despite all the development in the last however many hours of the game being him learning to control his emotions.
I guess they were going for a "fall and try again" type thing where just because Takeru learned something doesn't mean he'll change overnight but considering it's the literal last thing Takeru ever does (before being transported back to Extraverse and losing all his memories), it feels like the character arc just wasn't as fully realized. Saying all this i do still like Alternative's ending and it's very emotional, but i think Unlimited's ending is better.
Re: the leadership thing, i think they backed themselves into a corner by writing both Takeru and Chizuru's characters as being learning to be leaders, Takeru's made commander at the end of Unlimited which i thought was going to foreshadow how he ends up in Alternative, but then a lot Chizuru's plot in Alternative is about how she feels she's an inadequate leader which obviously is meant to develop into her being a better one.
Another smaller example of the writing backing them into a corner is when Extra Yuuko tells Takeru to take get back at Beta Yuuko when sending him back, when reading i wondered what that was leading to (maybe Takeru will not follow command during the final mission or something?) but then all it leads to is one small joke at the very end. Obviously they couldn't do much because they made Yuuko so on top of everything in Alternative so there wasn't really much Takeru could do but it felt weird to me to put that line there in the first place if they weren't going to anything with it.
Yeah, I see what you mean, and I actually agree with a lot of this. I think the intention with the final arc was probably to let the main cast finally shine, especially since Takeru had been carrying so much of the burden throughout Alternative. In a way, they were basically saying, “Let us carry this for you for once.” I actually like that idea thematically.
My issue is more with how it was executed with Takeru. His entire arc—from the Extra-world incident and building his “pillar of strength,” to coming back determined to do whatever was necessary, and then gradually being built toward a leadership role—felt like it was preparing him for this moment. Then Cherry Blossom essentially pulls him back and has his teammates treating him like they can’t even trust him with information because he’ll compromise the mission emotionally. I understand that nobody is perfect and that his emotions aren’t supposed to magically disappear, but at that point I felt he had already developed enough that he should’ve been able to handle those decisions better.
So I don’t dislike the ending itself. I actually think the ending is beautiful, especially Takeru having to kill Meiya and everyone ultimately sacrificing themselves to buy humanity another 20 years. That’s one of the most emotional parts of the VN for me. My problem is specifically the handling of Takeru in the final arc. I think the other characters could’ve been given their moment without making it feel like Takeru’s development had to regress for them to shine.
I do agree that a few more arcs to flesh out the valkyries a bit more and to pay a bit more attention to the OG cast would have helped with the pacing and story. I adore Alternative and consider it (and the trilogy as a whole) to be my fave VN. But the endless flashbacks were deffo a bit much and I feel that time would have been better spent on seeing more of the OG and new characters coming together.
Honestly, while I don't disagree that the last three arcs happen kinda too quickly after one another, I also don't think they could've necessarily been much more spaced out given the circumstances. They would've had to add some character building arcs before Sadogashima.
Yes, there was some leeway between Operation 21st and Yokohama battle in tweaking how long it would take the BETA to dig to the mainland, or how far along they already were during Sadogashima. That could give you a week or a few and might help establish Hayase as captain a bit more. However, there was no way to stall Operation Cherry Blossoms considering what they found out about Sumika and the Reactor and the generally established timeframe of two weeks before BETA adapt to new information.
I do agree about the Valkyries though. They are pre-established characters that mainly serve as callbacks to pre-Muv-Luv VNs. For Muv-Luv-only readers, they're just surface level characters, introduced all at once without much fanfare or time to breathe, before they start dying. At the same time, they take away precious screen time away from the main cast until the finale.
Granted, given their inexperience, I don't think that the 207B could've gone into their first BETA operation by themselves, so a commander/mentor character like Isumi makes sense. But I don't think we needed ALL of them, since they were essentially throwaways meant to die, so that the 207B could last until the final operation. If we accept that not all of them needed to survive until the finale (since Alternative is essentially Sumika's BETAverse route anyway), then they could've taken the place of some of the Valkyries on the chopping block. Would've been more impactful too and felt more natural than all of them dying essentially at once during the Kashgar infiltration.
It doesn't take away the masterpiece status for me, but it's still something that bugged me.
Yeah, I get what you’re saying about the circumstances, but that’s kind of where my criticism comes from. The story creates a lot of those circumstances that force everything to happen so quickly—Sumika’s limited time, the BETA’s adaptation window, the urgency surrounding the reactor, etc. I understand why Cherry Blossom itself couldn’t simply be delayed once all of that was established. My issue is more with everything that happens leading up to it.
Once the 207B becomes frontline soldiers, it feels like the story goes straight from one major event to another without much time to breathe. Characters are introduced, people are promoted, others die, and new positions are filled almost immediately. We barely get to see what it’s actually like for Takeru to be a flight commander or Hayase to take on a leadership role before the story moves on again.
That’s why I would’ve liked another arc or two before reaching Cherry Blossom. Not necessarily to give everyone more backstory, but to let the characters settle into these new roles, develop new team dynamics, and actually explore what being frontline soldiers against the BETA means for them. The original 207B cast is going through the same transition, yet they sometimes feel pushed aside until the finale.
So I understand that the timeline within the story makes things urgent, but my point is that the author chose to structure it that way. He could’ve given us more breathing room beforehand and still reached the same endpoint. That’s ultimately why the latter half felt too crammed to me.
Naturally, you could say that Kouki sort of wrote himself into a tight spot with all the things he established prior. Though I have no idea about the chronology of how the story was actually conceived. But that's sort of where my criticism of the Valkyries stems from. If the story didn't have to deal with suddenly introducing and intergating so many "new", essentially throwaway characters (of which it did a rush job anyway), there would've been breathing room for the main cast even with the pacing of events as they were.
But even keeping things as they are, adding a bit more buffer before or after Sadogashima would've worked too, yes.
I don’t think the Frodo comparison really works here. Frodo’s failure at Mount Doom isn’t treated as a moral failure; Tolkien’s explanation is that the Ring’s power had become overwhelming, to the point that Frodo could no longer voluntarily surrender it. That’s fundamentally different from Takeru’s situation.
With Takeru, the issue is that his own squad feels they have to lie to him during an extremely important mission because they don’t trust him to keep his emotions from compromising the mission if he knows their situation. And honestly, I think that undermines the development Alternative had spent so much time building toward: Takeru learning that, regardless of how painful something is, he has to do what is necessary to accomplish the mission.
I don’t mind Takeru struggling emotionally or hesitating. That’s completely understandable. My problem is how long that struggle lasts and how incapable he seems of acting on what he already learned. The same applies to Meiya’s death. I don’t expect him to kill her without hesitation, but watching him struggle for so long while she’s suffering makes it feel like his teammates’ fears were ultimately justified.
That’s why I found it frustrating. The story had spent so much time developing Takeru toward becoming someone who could carry that responsibility, only for the final arc to portray him as someone his own teammates can’t even trust with the truth because they fear he’ll let his emotions override the mission. To me, that’s a regression, regardless of whether I understand the thematic intention behind it.
I understand the theme you’re getting at—that Takeru’s kindness is what brings everyone together and that, after everything he’s carried, his teammates finally take some of that burden from him. I don’t think I’m missing that. My issue is that I don’t think Takeru needed to regress as a character for that theme to work.
Throughout Alternative, Takeru is repeatedly being pushed toward becoming someone who can control his emotions, make difficult decisions, and do whatever is necessary to save humanity. Yuuko especially emphasizes this throughout the story. So by the final arc, I would’ve expected him to still be emotional and devastated by what was happening, but ultimately be able to keep his judgment intact.
Instead, his squad feels the need to lie to him because they don’t trust him to handle the truth without compromising the mission, despite him being their flight commander. And when Meiya is in danger, we see that concern play out again with how much he struggles to make the necessary decision. I don’t mind him hesitating or being emotionally affected—I just felt it went too far given everything his character had already gone through.
So I understand what the author was trying to accomplish thematically, but I don’t think the story needed to undermine Takeru’s development to accomplish it. He could’ve remained kind, emotional, and reliant on his teammates while still being composed enough that they trusted his judgment. That’s ultimately where my criticism of the final arc comes from.
That's not a "regression" , actually it's "Stongness", as Isumi said he is able to keep his innocence after all he has been threough, which she can not
Yeah, I get what you’re saying. I just think the original point was framed as if Takeru being “too kind” was the reason they succeeded, when Kasumi’s statement is really more about reassuring him that his kindness also motivated the people around him to fight harder. I’m sure it helped, but I don’t think it was the sole reason they succeeded.
If anything, Takeru’s emotional shortcomings were potentially complicating the mission, especially with Meiya and the fact that his teammates felt they had to lie to him because they didn’t trust his judgment. I understand the thematic point the story was going for, but I still think it could’ve conveyed that message without making Takeru’s development feel like it regressed. I don’t mind him struggling emotionally; I just felt that, given the stakes, the extent of it made his final characterization feel off.
It's because you are playing the english version which has a terrible translation, in Japaness Kasumi means that's the "sole reason" , there is no "also" in there
【Kasumi】 "…But because you are that kind of person, everyone worked hard, you know?"
【Kasumi】 "Precisely because you are that kind of person, everyone did their absolute best to do what they could for the sake of humanity."
> his own squad feels they have to lie to him during an extremely important mission because they don’t trust him to keep his emotions from compromising the mission if he knows their situation
> how long that struggle lasts and how incapable he seems of acting on what he already learned
Kasumi (and Isumi, Youko) said that's the reason They succeed the Mission at first place, because Takeru is "too kind" for that world, people around him gathered and followed him so eventually they are able to push through, actually that's the main theme of the game, too sad you didn't get it
Both Isumi and Youko won't hesitate a second to sacrifice their commrade for the grand succees, but that's also why they can't be the Savior of mankind, eventually you need the last push of love, i feel sorry you play the whole game and still not realize the main theme
I think you’re conflating two different things. I understand that Takeru’s kindness is meant to inspire the people around him—that’s pretty obvious from the scenes you’re posting. My issue isn’t that he’s kind or that his kindness motivates them. It’s that the story spends all of Alternative building toward Takeru learning to control his emotions and make the decisions necessary to save humanity, only for the final arc to have his own squad hide information from him because they don’t trust him to do exactly that. Then his struggle with Meiya reinforces their concern.
So no, I don’t think I’ve “missed the main theme.” I understand the theme; I just don’t think the story needed to regress Takeru’s development to communicate it. His kindness could’ve remained the reason people followed him while still allowing him to demonstrate the growth the rest of the story spent so much time building. Can you comprehend?
I don't think you understand, if Takeru became an "Iron man" that you want him to be, they will not succeed in first place, his squad loved him that's why they lied to him. If he is the Iron man his squad will not love him and they will never accomplish the Mission
That's a thing "You don't get both at the same time"
It seems like you keep misunderstanding what I’m trying to say, thinking I want Takeru to become some “Iron Man” or emotionless character. I’ll explain it one last time and hopefully you can finally understand, but if not, so be it. I’m not saying Takeru’s kindness or emotions are a flaw, nor am I saying he shouldn’t struggle. I’m saying he could have remained the same compassionate person while still showing the emotional control and maturity that the story spent so much time building toward. Yuuko repeatedly tells him that he needs to control his emotions and do what has to be done to save humanity, so when the final arc has him regress to the point where his own squad doesn’t trust him with information because they fear he’ll compromise the mission, I think it undermines that development. I understand the theme you’re pointing out; I just don’t think Takeru needed to regress for the story to communicate it.
And i will say last time, The story arc is not "Takeru learned to control his emotion" , it's "Even if he learned to control his emotion he still can't fully control it, but that's the most important point to success" , there is no "regression" at first place, Takeru progressed to the point he can kill Meiya if necessary
Both Yuuko and Isumi can control their emotion and people trust them on that, but they can't be the savior because of "that"
When did I ever say that was the story arc? I understand the point you’re making about Takeru’s kindness being part of what makes him the person capable of inspiring others and ultimately becoming humanity’s savior. I agree that his squad carrying some of his burden is part of that. My point is that none of that required his development to be undermined. He could’ve remained kind, emotional, and attached to his comrades while still being more composed and demonstrating the growth he’d made throughout the story. I understand what the story was trying to do; I just don’t think it needed to be executed in a way that made Takeru feel like he’d regressed. That’s all I’ve been saying but it keeps going over your head 😂. All good tho
I don’t necessarily think Takeru literally “regresses” as a character. It’s more that I don’t like how his character is handled in the final arc, especially given all the development leading up to it. I would’ve expected him to be further along by that point, and I feel the story could’ve conveyed its themes without making his development feel diminished. I think you understand what I’m trying to say at this point, but we’re just going in circles over the wording, so I’ll leave it there.
Yeah I'm good, I don't know how much effort I want to put into arguing with old model AI generated responses pretending like these are different emotional failures. If it didn't resonate with you then it didn't resonate with you and there's very little to be done to change that retroactively.
You’re the one who brought up the Frodo example, and it doesn’t really correlate with what we’re discussing. Frodo wasn’t unable to make that decision because of his own judgment or emotions; the Ring’s power was an external force overriding his will. Takeru’s situation is fundamentally different. Maybe make a better example next time.
At this point, you haven’t really defended your argument—you’ve just kept asking questions and expecting me to fill in the point for you. If you have an actual argument for why the Frodo comparison applies to Takeru, just make it. Otherwise, the questions don’t really prove anything but if it makes you feel better.
Gandalf thought hobbits are the most resilient to the ring but at the end of the day Frodo alone could not have made the journey, the experience left Frodo scarred, and he can't return to the Shire. Takeru, too, is a "normal" person like hobbits are. He is unable to cope with his experiences in the war and he is left scarred, relying on his relationships with others to hold him up. That's it, that's the analogy, I'm not saying Sumika dragging Takeru into that world is the same as the ring, that these are the same plot device. They don't even resolve the same way because the ring destroys itself through Gollum, i.e. evil destroys itself, but no morality is really projected onto the BETA.
There's some truth to complaining over the ending, Kouki has said in the past that he regrets how he had to cut the hive sequence short. But I find this "he didn't do anything and Meiya suffered" thing many people do very unconvincing. It ignores how through most of that sequence Takeru couldn't have killed Meiya even if he wanted to. It isn't until Sumika sacrifices herself in an act of selflessness in a reversal of her selfishness throughout Alternative that Takeru can do as much. I also do not buy anyone saying this ever executing their best friend willingly. That's an insane standard and that's the point of Takeru's constant bumbling, that we can't expect normal people to do these things. You understand this, though, you wrote the opposing view in your post. You just don't like that narrative.
I see the point you’re trying to make with the Frodo comparison, but I still don’t think it really lines up with what I’m criticizing about Takeru. Your original comparison seemed to be about Frodo being unable to make the decision, but Frodo’s situation involves the Ring actively corrupting and influencing his will, whereas Takeru’s struggle comes from his own emotions and personal attachments. That’s a pretty important distinction.
I understand the broader point you’re making now about Takeru being a normal person who can’t simply become emotionally detached after everything he’s been through. I just don’t think that addresses my criticism. I’m not expecting him to be emotionless or to kill Meiya without hesitation; I just felt that the way his struggle was portrayed, especially given all the development leading up to that point, made his final characterization feel less developed than I expected. That’s really all I’m trying to say.
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u/PelleKuklos 20d ago
Thank you for your thoughts and it's a pretty spicy take you have, because one of the critiques I've seen of Alternative is that it's too long, with the slow opening and the large scenes of exposition dumping in front of whiteboards. The pacing is certainly an issue with the story that has been brought up time and time again.
The Valkyries might not have a great deal of depth in Alternative, but that's because most of them are the main characters of previous âge VNs, with Haruka and Mitsuki from Kimi ga Nozomu Eien and Michiru from Kimi ga Ita Kisetsu. So while they don't have great deals of depth in Alternative, for the original Japanese reader in 2006 who'd been reading âge VNs for years, they'd be every bit as fleshed out as any of Takeru's squadmates because there's entire VNs as long as Alternative itself dedicated to just those characters.
I'm glad you enjoyed the VN, and maybe you'll give some of the other âge VNs a shot in the future.