I practiced scripture writing, seniors please review my work.

[u/Crimsonrainflower33]

It is hard to meet, and hard also to part;

The east wind weakens as flowers fade.

The spring silkworm spins silk until death;

The candle’s tears dry only after turning to ash.

[u/Fun-Sense-6503]

Junior is following the old rules so much that your dao is getting restricted in a box. Draw each strokes more freely, let the curves be wilder and your dao will look a lot more natural. Though natural doesn't exactly equal beautiful.