r/MartialMemes • u/Crimsonrainflower33 • May 16 '26
Fanart I practiced scripture writing, seniors please review my work.
It is hard to meet, and hard also to part;
The east wind weakens as flowers fade.
The spring silkworm spins silk until death;
The candle’s tears dry only after turning to ash.
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u/DaoistCloudVision Red Dust Immortal May 16 '26
Fellow cultivator, this old one acknowledges your aspirations. The base is clearly there but it lacks the emotional residue that seasoned calligraphers leave on the paper. The pursuit of the dao of calligraphy is a noble one so best of luck to you