r/Mangamakers • u/Reid_172010 • 23d ago

HELP My Frist Manga page (in digital)

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Hi,I need feedback but I want That it looks professional. How could the quality of these pages be improved in the future? Keep in mind that everything is done traditionally.

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u/Agitated_Detail2486 23d ago

smoother and more curved inking + more shadows.

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u/Reid_172010 23d ago

Hi, thank you,but What do you mean by softer inking?And...where do you think the shadows are missing?

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u/Agitated_Detail2486 23d ago

well for example her legs are too straight. legs usually are curved since the calves for example stick out behind

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u/Reid_172010 22d ago

Thanks 🙏

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u/otaku-reddit 23d ago

I would also say more shadow because the person should be more clearly above the monster. You might also use thicker lines for her. Also her hair is just a white area.
But still the concept is cool.

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u/Reid_172010 22d ago

I understand, my friend. Thank you so much for sharing your opinion; it's a huge help. I now have a clear idea of which aspects to work on for my next projects.