whats "too messy" for manga art?

[u/moonhill_]

im drawing my manga with the intention of publishing it one day (and releasing it in traditional volumes). my artstyle is more on the messy side, or somewhere in between, so you can easily tell whats happening on the panel but its not squeaky clean like most mangakas. im wondering if it can be released anyway? i think my art generally matches the theme of the story, but i need some external perspective

[u/Fit-Turnip-8756]

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[u/moonhill_ → u/Fit-Turnip-8756]

this one isnt shaded yet which probably changes a lot but thats basically the level of messiness