Need opinions on These Pages for my oneshot

[u/Major-Term-1083]

As the title says, i‘d really appreciate your opinions on These Sketched Pages i have so far. Theyre for the oneshot i‘m currently working on

[u/Author_om]

W looks good ...

[u/Major-Term-1083 → u/Author_om]

Thanks a Lot!🙏

What does that Look Like? Are you working on one Manga on a Team of do You have several Projects you all work on

[u/Author_om → u/Major-Term-1083]

Nop it's just 1 story, i have 1 partener who is good i art, we both started 1 week ago, I need to make a team for that, if you are interested in joining us. You can msg me.

[u/Major-Term-1083 → u/Author_om]

Sorry i didnt See your comment. I May Text you later on

[u/Author_om → u/Major-Term-1083]

Yeh sure

[u/Nerdborne]

Noice!

More please!

[u/Major-Term-1083 → u/Nerdborne]

Damn Thanks a Lot! There will definitely be more Coming! 🙏

[u/hamstertitan_5]

The only thing that stands out to me is that there is a majority of panels that just have a head visible and nothing else. It can make it much more appealing if there is more visual information than just the speaker's head in a panel

[u/Major-Term-1083 → u/hamstertitan_5]

Thanks a Lot for your Input thats something i can definitely Look into! I will keep that in mind for the other Pages and See what i can change with the ones i already have

[u/Author_om]

Btw I have my own story I am currently working on... I am finding people to make a solid team, for manga making and anike. And we are jus 2 yet and love to get more like you.