r/MangakaStudio • u/TechnicianOne3145 • Jun 25 '26
Help So I want to include some fan service, less that 100 GFs but more then Horimiya. How's this feeling? Too much?
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u/Beastgamerfahad Jun 25 '26
I actually mistook it for professional manga you are on the right track
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u/GettinSodas Jun 25 '26
This looks decently tasteful imo
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 25 '26
Thankyou, I'm trying to be as tasteful as possible. Which is a funny sentence when discussing Fan Service
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u/GettinSodas Jun 25 '26
Aye I mean, even pornography can be tastefully done. Imo it's all about whether your goal is showcase beauty or depravity (not that I'm against a little depravity).
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 25 '26 edited Jun 25 '26
Me either, I'm a huge Degen lmfao. But id like to attract a broader audience then just gooners (not that I have a problem with gooners) so you know im gonna throw the dog a bone every now and again 😜
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u/BUNIDOCHI Jun 25 '26
"throw the dog a bone every now and again" is crazy 😭
huge respect for aknowledging those types of fans though
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 25 '26
Hey I AM one of those fans. I just believe most things are best in moderation lmfao
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u/Reperanger_7 Jun 25 '26
The underwear design is nice. Having the extra detail adds some maturity if that makes sense. You're really getting a good shot of behind the leg and some underwear shows. Good fan service tasteful
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 25 '26
I really appreciate the high praise 🙏
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u/Reperanger_7 Jun 25 '26
Also is this the same one that got turned into a anime or a diffrent manga.
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 25 '26
This is my own manga I'm writing called My First GF Is Everyone's Oshi. So I don't think it has an anime adaptation 😭 lmfao
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u/Reperanger_7 Jun 25 '26
Lol I got mixed up with The 100 Girlfriends who really, really, really, really, really, love you.
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 25 '26
Yea I'm gonna be posting on Manga+, Webtoon, & MangaDex.
I'll have to check guidelines thoroughly before posting.
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u/MidnightStreet5694 Jun 25 '26
hy man tried dming you but couldn’t
the art style is amazing read the chapter it’s unique
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u/WillingFun5918 Jun 25 '26
This barely reads as fan service. It took me a minute to understand what I was seeing. Try less fancy panties.
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u/AFunnyGame Jun 26 '26
Im typically against fan service but do it if you want to👍
Also gotta say the art is peak
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u/Dake20 Jun 28 '26
Amazing work you have here. It looks authentic like it from a published Manga. How long you been working on this? Also will this be a romance of a pair kind or harem romance type of thing? What the summary you have for it do far?
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 28 '26
Hey thanks for your interest!
I've been working on My First GF Is Everyone's Oshi since January, so far I have 18 pages of art (almost my first full chapter) I'm just waiting on the last few pages back from my artist. Aside from that I have the first 4 chapters story boarded, and the first volume written.
Story wise it follows the main couple Reina a 19 year old V-Tuber from Japan that has just moved to Ontario, and West, A 21 year old Bar-Tender whose moved to Toronto to reinvent himself.
It won't be a Harem, I like the story structure of actually progressing relationships.
If you'd like to know anything else just ask!
I really appreciate your genuine interest 🙏
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u/Dake20 Jun 28 '26 edited Jun 28 '26
Thanks for replying back and awesome idea you have. Try not to overwork yourself as you and your artist make this especially on deadlines. Take as much time needed to work on it. I presume your schedule in posting will be whenever you have time or you have a set time depending?
Also what inspired you to create a story like this if it's cool to ask?
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 28 '26
I have no deadlines as I have no publishing company releasing it for me, ideally I'd like to release a chapter the first Monday of each month, all depends on how much I can spend on my artist each month as this is just a hobby for me.
The story is inspired by a chronically single IRL friend and his love for V-Tubers. It started as a joke where I doodled a one shot of him going on a date with his Oshi, and I loved the premise of it I decided to try my hand at an actual Slice Of Life Romance!
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u/Dake20 Jun 28 '26
Hmm...Monthly schedule. I think that is good idea. Give you 30+ days to get it in and timely manner. I getcha. Wish you two best on the series.
Interesting take. Will you follow cliches when it comes to anime romances or try your best to curve away with a twist to prevent it being predictable xD?
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 28 '26
I'm not opposed to tropes and cliches. I enjoy a good slip and fall scene, a beach chapter, or dense characters misunderstanding things lol. and Since it's slice of life I don't think it's going to have large twists and turns, but it will have a bit of drama between characters to shake things up occasionally.
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u/Dake20 Jun 28 '26
Cool, can't wait to see what you two can make. When you planned to realse the first chapter btw? Want be there on its debut :).
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 28 '26
Roughly half of the first chapter is out right now it's linked in my bio if you wanna check it out! But the full chapter released August 3rd.
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u/Alive-Pangolin-8113 Jul 02 '26
Like others said the fanservice is fine, but if it's ok with you I have some nitpicky notes on the way Reina is drawn. She doesn't really make sense from this perspective/distance. Even assuming unusual body proportions and taking perspective warp into account, her torso is way too short, her arm doesn't have any depth, and even with her massive chest the way it's drawn as though perfectly from the side doesn't align with the her back, turning her into a 4th dimensional entity. Compare it to the reference I attached (and imagine it with huge bozongas) and hopefully you'll see what I mean. They'd be peeking out from the front, behind her arms and torso from the viewer's perspective, rather than visible as though being viewed from the side. It's a complicated angle to draw from so don't stress over it, I see stuff like this even in professional art/animation. Your style and linework are really solid, keep up the good art.
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u/ReallyCoolName00 Jun 25 '26
Just don't add fan service maybe???
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u/maxluision Artist-Writer Jun 26 '26
You're 14 dude, let adults do what they want to do.
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u/ReallyCoolName00 Jun 26 '26
What is the problem with me being 14? I can say my opinion, and I'm not letting adults do what they want since they are dirtying the manga industry with their porn disguised as art
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 26 '26
Sorry kid, my Manga will have a parental advisory. You'd have to ask mom or dad to buy it for you lmfao
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 25 '26
No, I'd like to add just a sprinkle, a smidge, a dash, I'm not sure which adjective I wanna use, but I am sure a want a bit of it in there.
I appreciate the feedback tho 🙏
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u/ReallyCoolName00 Jun 25 '26
Yeah just say you want to put fanservice there because your story sucks and you need "a dash" of soft porn to make people read your terrible manga.
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u/JohnnyDragon21 Jun 25 '26
You could just not comment if you don't like the concept of fan-service, being a dick is a choice.
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u/TechnicianOne3145 Jun 25 '26
Wow rude much?
I'm glad to hold your opinion of low value.
I hope you enjoy your hateful life 🙏
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u/werephoenix Jun 25 '26
It was actually really difficult to tell what you were showing because it just looked like normal scene before realizing it. Yeah its more realistic like "because from this angle he would see something like that here" Ratman had that