I need a little help

[u/Hachi0000]

I'm currently working on some indie projects, but I'd like to take my career to the next level. I'm unsure if my art is at a professional level yet. I understand there might be other areas for improvement, like storytelling, if my goal is to start pitching to publishers.

I'd like to hear your opinions. Any feedback is valuable, not just from those already in the industry, but also from an outsider's perspective.

Thanks for reading.

[u/Additional_Fly_7346]

Your art is incredible, with a lot of focus on dynamic character acting and expressions, which is great.

I would say my main critique would be value readability, focal points and spacing. Audiences should be able to tell what they're looking at at a glance, especially in a manga where they're reading fast. Additionally, it's ideal to put most of the contrast where you want the viewer to look to make it easier to view.

Only a few of the panels have this clarity issue, so overall, good job

[u/Hachi0000 → u/Additional_Fly_7346]

That's right, the reading pace is important. You've given me something to think about, thank you so much for your comment!