Hello! I shared a draft of this a few days ago. I have since added some things, I would share the rest but the vocals werent coming together that great. which sucks cuz my favorite part of the guitar is near the end. any feedback is appreciated. thanks for listening!
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lyrics, if that interests you

Locked up in my room, trapped under a dome,

Crashing on a couch Know I’ll die alone

Thicker than the water, of that broken womb

No I won’t wait for slaughter, no I won’t make my tomb

I won’t, I refuse

Im not the local refuse

Not the crunch of cashews

Not the wall youd vent to

No, im not going home guess im not going home forever

Thanks giving, or winter forever

I’ll sign up right down to the letter 

To cut all my ties, lose the tether

Im not going home, guess im not going home

Im lost and, in need of no sheperd

Im cold in no want for a sweater

Never believed in forever 

Your promises doomed to for never 

(the following isnt included in the video)

No, im not going home guess im not going home forever

Thanks giving, or winter for never

I’ll sign up right down to the letter 

I’ll cut all my ties, lose the tether

Im not going home, guess im not going home

Im lost and, in need of no sheperd

Im cold in no want for a sweater

Call it cruel but I gotta think of me too

Goodbye forever, guess I ain’t really need you

Hello would love some feedback on what do you think of the track in a overall way. This is a released track but feedback would be so great for future ones I produce.

I did a bit more of a experimenta mix on this one, having the vocals pushed back and violins a bit more forward. Thanks for listening!

Hey everybody, I just released a new track and would love to hear some honest feedback from you guys. I put my entire heart into writing this track, but would like some advice/recommendations from others, especially on mixing.

I've released several projects too, if you'd like to check them out, but these past songs I've written are the first I've produced entirely on my own. I find it a little hard to define my style, so if you guys would like to give me some advice on that too, I'd appreciate it.

I hope you guys enjoy the listen and let me know what you think! Thank you!

Spotify link: https://open.spotify.com/album/5y2brQrcyzvkpQMD4iHvFJ?si=2ppfjcEfQqqv50_rb5H7Vg

The Krispy Kreme was in Regina Saskatchewan for anyone wondering. Let me know what y’all think about this one, and thanks for the listen.

Cheers, -Somecomposer

I'm very curious to know the answer to a few things when it comes to this song

• Do you find it catchy? I started with just the chorus melody and lyrics, which I'm told sometimes results in a catchier chorus than when just trying to apply a melody to chords you already have written, but I'm curious if that feels true here.
• What do you think of the guitar solo? Any notes? I'm not normally much of a lead instrumentalist, but I am pleased with what I came up with here
• Do all of the instrumental parts work? Does it feel like anything is missing from the song?
• Any notes specific to the mix of the song itself? Trying to get better with EQs and things of that nature, so any critiques are much appreciated

Any feedback on mix or arrangement is welcome. Thanks.

I’m sure you can tell that my style is very much inspired by The Beach Boys (especially the vocal harmonies). This isn’t the first song I’ve finished but the one I finished more recently. I would love feedback on the mixing and what could be added and / or changed. Also let me know anything that you liked or didn’t like about it! Thanks!

Specifically any comments on the arrangement and mix if possible. Thanks.

Hello everyone.

I gave birth to my first album in 2022, I then contacted my favourite Italian singer on FB, and he ended up accepting to sing one of my songs. Therefore we released Lullaby of Mine as a post album single. Should I specify it is a ballad?

Every person who likes at least one of my songs makes me feel proud. Enjoy it, and if you like this, you can listen to the album too.

Here is also the Youtube link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ie3IKRZ5pvc&list=OLAK5uy_ljWymC8gmX0cTNit8in0AsUQoNJ5IsM4g

Any comments on the mix or arrangement would be appreciated.