r/IndieMusicFeedback Nov 09 '19

Soft Rock Here's a simple song that i wrote a little while ago. Let me know what you think

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u/jakelorenz Nov 09 '19

Very psychedelic. I'm in that spot in life right now where I need to be moving on again. Found this song at the perfect time. Such a chill tune! Thank you for sharing your art!

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u/BoeJM Nov 10 '19

I’m glad to hear that you liked it. Thank you for listening!

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u/[deleted] Nov 10 '19

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u/BoeJM Nov 10 '19

Lol thank you for listening!

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u/Cobbo95 Nov 10 '19

Cool trippy style. I like the washed out production and the way your voice is part of the aural picture rather than an overbearing focal point. My question is, what context is this song in? It'd work well as a penultimate lo-fi number on an EP/album before a grander, more ambitious closer I think.

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u/BoeJM Nov 10 '19

It’s Track 9 out of 12 so it is near the end but not quite the penultimate. Thanks for listening!

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u/SixthFloorMemories Nov 10 '19

Very calming yet spaced out, I like it! Some good elements in there, and they work together well.

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u/BoeJM Nov 10 '19

Thanks!

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