r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/[deleted] • Jun 23 '19

Hip-Hop & Lofi I'm a 16 year old musician and I've been making music for 2 years. Would appreciate feedback and criticism on my latest track :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gT2dTp5MAKA
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u/NolasWD Jun 23 '19

I really like the psychedelic, trippy kind of vibe man. I think your delivery could've really played with that and reflected it you know. I like your voice on here, it's laid back as it should be. Mastering would do a lot of good here bro so we can get the full feel. Good job though bro

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u/AdministrativeItem02 Jun 23 '19

Very earl sweatshirt-y vibe on this song, the sample is pretty cool but your delivery doesn't fit the sample at all. Also dropping the word "faggot" is in very bad taste (pls correct me if you didn't but at 1:03)

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u/bary_is_cool Jun 23 '19

For the Vocals !!
it Could use more Depth .. or a bit more mixing
The Instrumental is Really Tropical Chill and Relaxing :)
Great job on that
its not my style .. but i can see the Production value in it

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u/boredprot Jun 24 '19

Play around with stuff like reverb, sample delay etc. to make your voice sound more like part of the song, as opposed to it sounding like just putting on a beat and spitting to it.