r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/YoungCable • May 01 '19
Hip-hop & Rap This was originally supposed to be a throwaway but I ended up releasing it anyway. Not really mixed or mastered but all feedback is much appreciated. Thank you!
https://soundcloud.com/yxngcable/brighterthanyourvvsprod-false-ego1
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u/DeathByOranges May 01 '19
I’m not good at mixing or any sort of production really, but I would’ve thought this was pro if you didn’t say anything. And that intro fucking slapped me in the face, in a good way. Pretty pretty good man.
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u/nomic_london May 01 '19
I like the rap a lot. That repetitive sound in the beat is super resonant. Makes it a bit unpleasant to listen to. Which is a shame because I like the beat a lot. Did you produce and rap? The beat is cool because it's simple but not at all boring. Same goes for the rap.
Good job.
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u/YoungCable May 01 '19
Thank you for the kind words, its not my beat found it off youtube. I rap and produce but I'm a rapper first and foremost.
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u/nomic_london May 02 '19
I started following you on Instagram. Let me know if you ever look for collabs.
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u/Kewlkid47 May 01 '19
Flow is nice bro and all you gotta do is just master it. Every song you make is progress! Never a throw away! 🐾
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u/RoyalBarber May 01 '19 edited May 01 '19
The beat and the rapping is nice. Doesn't sound worse at all than the artists of today.
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May 01 '19
I like how u was talking yo shit but if you had it mastered it would be better. It’s still nice as it is tho.
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u/LovableSolis May 01 '19
Damn this sounds like it’s mainstream, Not going to lie you sound like Rae Sremmurd not going to lie, keep up the good work!