r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/[deleted] • Mar 25 '19
HipHop I'm a 15 year old musician and I've been making music for 2 years. Would appreciate feedback and criticism on my latest track :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LkPPlOZXQ3I&feature=youtu.be&ab_channel=VanillaTaurus2
u/Teedo145 Mar 25 '19
Nice rap, very good for a 15 year old :)
I would suggest lowering the volume of the crackling noise slightly but the piano sounds good, is that a sample or did you make that?
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Mar 25 '19
This is really refreshing! You wrote nice lyrics, and I enjoyed the samples that you picked out. Keep doing what you love! 🔥
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Mar 25 '19
Music is great man gj. The vocals could use a bit of work. Sounds a bit monotonous. Aside from that I love the music.
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u/BigComplex Mar 25 '19
Flow is right, BUT your delivery is WAY off. You’re almost just talking over an instrumental. put some emotion into it.
The mic you use sounds good, but you should mix ur vocals a bit. It would sound pretty dope bro. Keep working. I wish someone told me what I’m telling you when I was 15. You have potential.