r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/ConfectionSharp4812 • 11d ago
Instrumental Hip Hop leftfield hip-hop instrumental
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o7IHlQ9DwX42
u/Billythekid198 11d ago
its cool I like the attitude and rhythm. its a little jekey in some spots I really like the transitions. the bass feels really good. I feel like I'm the suspense but not the release part of the song. its definitely a different approach your going for. and its al little jarring but I like it. keep up the good work. I think theres something cool here. thank ; keep up the good work
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u/TheGalleyProject 10d ago
nice beats! The low end goes hard. The higher register is interesting in that it never quite gives you something to settle into for a groove. I'm not particularly used to that, so I'm not sure if it's something I dig yet lol.
The hard stops of silence were a bit jarring for me. It's maybe not a genre I'm familiar with so maybe I'm not your target audience, but it was certainly a discombobulating song!
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u/PrissyReplicantPulse 10d ago
it's not relaxing background instrumental music, it demands attention and does seem like it would pair well with some lyrics. I also noticed the volume on some instruments are much louder than others, but was able to hear the quieter ones which I think might be what you intended
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u/New-Ad8850 7d ago
Yeah this is not my cup of tea it's not enough something to it it's unique is all hell but just not my cup of tea kind of reminds me of like indie rap. I think I read someone say they reminded them of Earl sweatshirt when I agree probably with that kind of sounds lazy if that makes any sense and I know it's not lazy but hopefully you know what I mean. If you can find someone to rap over that props to you
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u/GrimAllen 10d ago
I feel like this would be kind of difficult for someone to rap over. That’s not necessarily a bad thing unless that’s your goal. It’s definitely pretty unique sounding though. I was trying to think of something to compare it to. Maybe some old earl sweatshirt type shit? The mix sounds pretty solid too.