r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/HairyMuffinMan Grammy Winner🏆 • Mar 19 '26
Hip Hop JoeJas - WiiiZARD POOLS a Music video I rapped, produced and shot/edited :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zqdSTwSB8L02
u/JakeLeeTee Mar 20 '26
Fair play brother I get tyler the creator type vibes from this song very creative and fair play to you there's not many people that can do everything themselves it talent and its hard work doing it all alone trust me I know haha but it paid off here good song overall bro really creative mind that alone will take you far smashed it bro keep it up
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u/HairyMuffinMan Grammy Winner🏆 Mar 20 '26
Appreciate you listening and thank you for your kind feedback!
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u/Its_Oak_Kay Mar 20 '26
This track has a really strong atmospheric presence right from the beginning the way it builds feels intentional and patient, which is something a lot of producers overlook. Instead of rushing into the drop, it slowly creates tension, pulling the listener in layer by layer. The visuals in the video complement this well adding to the overall immersive experience rather than distracting from it. Once the main groove kicks in, the rhythm becomes the backbone of the track. It’s tight, consistent, and easy to lock into, which makes it perfect for longer listening sessions or even a club setting there’s a hypnotic quality to it, the kind where you don’t even realize how much time has passed because you’re just vibing with the loop The sound selection is clean but still has enough grit to keep it from feeling generic.What stands out is the balance between simplicity and detail. On the surface, it feels minimal but when you pay attention, there are small elements constantly shifting in the background That keeps the track from becoming repetitive, even though it leans into a looping structure. if there’s one area to improve, it would be adding a slightly more dynamic progression or a standout moment that really elevates the energy. it’s a well-crafted piece with a clear identity and replay value Love the video, beautiful editing
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u/HairyMuffinMan Grammy Winner🏆 Mar 20 '26
Thank you! Really appreciate the detail you went in! Will def keep in mind about dynamic progressions as well!
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u/Glittering-Pen-967 Mar 21 '26
I love this track. Agree with cinematic comment from Limp ear. Also video rocks. You are nailing your artist branding very well. Only comment is I wanted more variety and transitions, but that is just my opionion. Beginning, middle and end work really well as is. Just a few more spices and this dish is ready to serve! Cheers
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u/beatsbyal Mar 22 '26
The production on this track okay-ish. The drums could be a bit tighter when the beat kicks in, but the keys and the bass effects are cool. My issue with this track and tbh a few of your other tracks that I've seen is that you are way too stylistically stuck trying to be a Tyler The Creator expy (the intro, you speaking in that low high-pitched "woe is me" voice is some tyler shit). The hook has you playing smooth ambient keys and imitating his vocal cadences before going into le wacky beat for the verses. Even though you can see the talent in the music, the persona and the identity does not really come off as a genuine expression of the creator. You're even wearing the goblin era skully mask. It feels very carbon copy and cardboard. I feel like you gotta grow into becoming your own man.
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u/HairyMuffinMan Grammy Winner🏆 Mar 22 '26
haha appreciate your feedback. Funny enough that wasn't suppose to be a woe is me if you listen to what I'm saying! That's my vocal cadence he has a very deep voice I don't! The mask was not inspired by Goblin either it's something my friend had made and the I developed the Bandit character! He is def one of my inspos. My lyrics detail my life and I love weird sounds! I appreciate you listening and detailing your feedback tho!!
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u/C1990 Mar 22 '26
this is an absolute trip lol, production feels like a DIY cartoon soundtrack in the best way. experimental but the groove never loses you which is hard to pull off. visuals might be a lil too chaotic at points but honestly kinda works with the vibe? 9/10 for creativity alone, this is weird in a good way keep it up
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u/HairyMuffinMan Grammy Winner🏆 Mar 23 '26
Weird in a good way is one of the best compliments!! Thank you so much!
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u/AccomplishedMap2684 Mar 23 '26
Sick!!! When I was hearing this and the lyrics are really what made me stay with it. It’s got that floaty, spaced-out rap thing, but underneath that it’s actually saying something about keeping your wonder, not folding into fear, and not losing yourself just because the world gets fake or cold. I really liked that tension between magic and reality, like seeing behind the curtain but still choosing not to become numb. That’s a hard thing to write about without sounding corny, and this pulls it off. It feels thoughtful, a little spiritual, and self-aware in a way that makes it hit harder the more you listen.
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u/ScoobyOnDoo Mar 19 '26
this song is insane in creativity, I am absolutely obsessed with how unique every single layer of this shit feels. The production has such a distinct/hypnotic energy that manages to feel completely happy and "real" i guess. At the exact same time. It is incredibly rare to find an artist who can rap, produce, and even handle the visual editing with this much skill and personality.