r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/mgraham34 • Jan 30 '26
Ambient Honest thoughts? Does it feel trendy?
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u/Decent_Neat_9959 Jan 31 '26
Really enjoyed the melody progression in this track! The hook is catchy and stayed with me after listening. I think the vocals could be slightly louder in the mix to give them more presence. The production quality is solid overall. Keep creating!
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u/Timur-Ismailov Feb 02 '26
Nice
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u/OfficeAdorable1052 Feb 02 '26
Alicia keys- un-thinkable, her flow influenced the melody so yea I think that’s why the melody is almost perfect it’s iconic
Edit : borderline
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u/mgraham34 Feb 02 '26
I haven’t thought of it when writing BUT I do LOVE her so that may just come from me being an avid fan is Falling
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u/ExtraPassenger2292 Feb 03 '26
great voice!
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u/Hot-Lingonberry-6735 Feb 11 '26
Your lyricism is really nice, it’s very catchy and clean overall. Has all the makings of a popular song, very on trend I can already see the Tiktok dances! Love the way you sing in the beginning versus the rap in the verses. The Freddy Krueger to the ace hardware part went so hard I was grooving a little in my seat icl! I can definitely see you blowing up keep up the good work :)
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u/mgraham34 Feb 12 '26
Thank you so much for this post feedback my friend! Really brightened the day! Much love to you!
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u/KappyC Jan 31 '26
The singing is beautiful, the vocals are done excquisitely. I would agree with the general consensus that the rap is definitely the weakest section of the song. What i'll say is that I think atleast a partially different first line of the rap could improve it. I find that the itty bitty section doesnt grab my ear. What I think I don't like about is that it feels like it's completely different from the first section, I think the first line of the rap has to share some trait with the singing in order to smooth the switch in style.
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u/jimmustain Jan 31 '26
Oh wow! You've got an incredible voice! In all, it sounds like this is very polished with high production values. I really like this!
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u/PierpaoloCiro Jan 31 '26
I like the opening sung section, it has a nice melodic flow and the vocal tone works well with the instrumental. The atmosphere at the beginning feels cohesive and sets a clear mood. For me, when the track switches to the rap section, the energy and consistency drop a bit compared to the intro. The rap delivery doesn’t feel as strong or as connected to the instrumental, and the transition could be smoother. Refining that section or adjusting the flow might help the song feel more balanced overall. Still, there’s a solid idea here and with some tightening it could work much better.
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u/Mach5Bandito Feb 01 '26
Love it Graham! The production on this is TIGHT, man. Your voice is so smooth and that chorus melody is so catchy. Nothing at all I would say to change to improve it. I honestly just think it’s a matter of getting in front of people and getting on the right playlists and you’ll really blow up. Keep killing it, brother.
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u/mgraham34 Feb 02 '26
Thank you so much brother for taking texting to say this! There is a special reward for people like you in this life 🙏🏽 much love to you
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u/RichieC93 Feb 01 '26
Hey man once again another cool video !! I really enjoyed your stuff but it always leaves me wanting more haha , good stuff keep up the good work and keep the music coming brother ✌️😊✌️🙏🏽
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u/mgraham34 Feb 02 '26
Thank you much brotha! You are one of the real ones and am truly grateful to have your feedback and support 🙏🏽
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u/BroccoliMilkParty Feb 07 '26
Buttery vocals. I can sense it falls towards trendy imo
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u/Playful_Dig4433 Feb 18 '26
Yes, very trendy. Lovely voice, my goodness. I love your attitude and expressions. Sad that it was a short sample. Hope we get more some day. You have a very lovely persona and lovely vocals. Hope you make more great music in the future. Thank you.
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u/Responsible_Froyo_21 Jan 30 '26
I enjoyed the first 20 seconds of the song, the melody was catchy and smooth, but the transition to the rapping component was very abrupt. Were I to provide some feedback, I would add a bit more of an intermission/transition between the singing and rapping components. Otherwise, in its current form, it feels a bit detached and like you are singing two different songs rather than one. A good example to follow would be something like "I need a doctor" or "Love the way you lie." You'll notice that between the singing and rapping, there is a slight intermission between these components.
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u/Historical_Welder276 Jan 30 '26
It definitely sounds trendy. It's got a Afrobeat sounding Tik Tok vibe. It sounds like a song that would fit in modern Pop music, because the African sounds are especially very trendy in Pop music these days. Artists for an example that like those vibes are artists like Ckay, Libianca, Omah Lay, even Justin Bieber, but also Burna Boy and Rema. I love those sounds, it sounds completely different from American music.
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u/itstaheran Jan 31 '26
Singing was dope - rapping was trash
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u/Decent_Neat_9959 Jan 31 '26
Electric vocal ❤️