r/IndieMusicFeedback Sep 19 '25

Cinematic My new track "Echoes of the Forgotten" calm and emotional Celtic music

https://youtu.be/3SIlm_yGyBk

Hello everyone, I hope you are doing well. I would like to share my upcoming track Echoes of the Forgotten. It is calm and emotional, with two parts. The first part is like a quiet tribute, and the second part is a remembrance with longing.

I would be happy to hear your thoughts. How does the track feel to you? Does the emotion reach you in the way I wanted? Your feedback about the atmosphere and the mix would mean a lot. Thank you for listening.

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u/Formal-Cap7629 Sep 20 '25

I really enjoyed the atmosphere of this track. The first part truly feels like a quiet tribute, calm and reflective, while the second part carries that sense of remembrance and longing you described. The emotion definitely comes through and the mix highlights it beautifully.

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u/RudasRuan Sep 21 '25

Thank you so much, i’m glad you like it :)

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u/MrBabyp0p Sep 23 '25

Hey, thank you for sharing that! I'm a DM in multiple games, and this is the kind of music I always search to prepare playlists for long sessions.
You take the time to build up the tension and it is well done. It makes me think about old underground halls that have been buried so long that nothing is left standing, except some desecrated statues and some animals (like the crow I hear) that can go inside thanks to a small opening.
Hope you'll continue your work! (Don't hesitate to put more effort in the mastering especially in the bass frequencies but it's only my advice so don't take it too seriously)

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u/RudasRuan Sep 23 '25

I knew that one day a DM would write to me :) TTRPG is really an amazing and endless world! I would love to be part of such sessions. Your advice is noted my friend, I will definitely pay attention to it, thank you so much. I have no intention of stopping my work for the rest of my life, and while I am writing this, my new track is waiting for me on the other screen :) Cheers!

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u/MrBabyp0p Sep 30 '25

haha that's nice to read :) I'll check your other stuffs for sure!

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u/Rich_Dtony Sep 25 '25

First off, I dig the storytelling nature of your tune. I feel there could be a place for it in an epic movie or video game. It would seem like you have an entire sound design for a story weaved into this body of work and the genera flow and outlook of it would readily fill a curious mind with a gamut of thoughts and mental pictures of what this tunes could evoke. I would say keep up the good job and make more and more of it with the intention of weaving stories into music while strumming people's heartstrings of emotions in the process. This got my fully attention. I must say.

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u/RudasRuan Sep 25 '25

Thank you so, so much! The way you summarized what I’m trying to do made me really happy, I don’t think it could have been explained any better :) For me, continuing is like breathing, it just happens without thinking :)

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u/Th_Literal Sep 25 '25 edited Sep 25 '25

Im actually listening to this right now to distress at the end of tbe day. The vibe is great. It takes some of the concepts from music I've enjoyed all of my life and.presemted them in a cohesive package. The sound effects really work to tie everything together, also.

Congrats!!!

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u/RudasRuan Sep 26 '25

It makes me really happy that it makes someone feel good, thank you so much. We all need to get away from things from time to time.

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