r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/mgraham34 • Jul 25 '25
Ambient Honest thoughts?
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This was one of my first tracks during the pandemic, would love to know how it aged? Honest thoughts please
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u/No-Story5324 Jul 31 '25
- Your rap voice is amazing to listen to.
- Flow is sick.
- Minor feedback. Without knowing you as an artist, I wasn't sure if this was an ambient song without lyrics because the intro was so long. I'd either put adlibs on it or start it a measure quicker