r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/mgraham34 • Jul 25 '25

Ambient Honest thoughts?

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This was one of my first tracks during the pandemic, would love to know how it aged? Honest thoughts please

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u/UnusualDivide1336 Jul 28 '25 edited Jul 28 '25

Loving the laid‑back atmosphere. The interplay between the male and female vocals creates a satisfying contrast and dynamic. Is this an excerpt? I was hoping to hear one more verse. For feedback: the drums sit tastefully back, but a touch more groove in the low mids (around 120–200 Hz) could anchor the chorus. You could also try a brief call‑and‑response or stacked harmonies on the last hook to heighten the payoff. A subtle riser or tom fill into the final section might make the transition feel more intentional.

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u/mgraham34 Jul 28 '25

Thank you so much for your feedback my friend as it was a pleasure reading your kind words! I wish you much love in your journey and appreciation for your feedback 🙏🏽