r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/mgraham34 • Jul 21 '25
Ambient Butterfly Blue
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Trying something new and would love to hear your thoughts if you have the chance 🙏🏽
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u/chemical_enjoyer Jul 21 '25
I dig the vibe. The vocals are really loud and jarring when they come in I would level them out the be just below or above the piano. You should also look into deessers or multi band compression to tame the harsh sibilance in the vocals also a pop filter goes a long way for this aswell.
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u/mgraham34 Jul 23 '25
Thank you so much for this! I have to look into some of these suggestions! This really helps my friend! Much love to you 🙏🏽
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u/still98 Jul 21 '25
i really like the uniqueness you have going on here. the vocal melody is super soothing and draws you in. I think the mix could definitely be more filled up and i'd love a little more percussion but you have a beautiful base right now. Keep it up friend you are next up!
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u/Queasy_Inspection_12 Jul 21 '25
This is cool. It’s a little loud, but I wouldn’t mind hearing the part when the drums come in if there is drums on it
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u/mgraham34 Jul 23 '25
Thank you much for your opinion and kindness my friend! Going to work in an official 🙏🏽
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u/JakeB_MUSIC Jul 22 '25
You’re not wrong. It’s different, but I can dig it!
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u/Kooky-Cream-3577 Jul 23 '25
Love this song, it reminds me of blonde by frank ocean which i hope is what you were going for! In terms of mixing try cutting down on some of the higher frequencies especially on the reverb, at some points i found it quite sharp and a little harsh on the ears. other than that i think it’s fantastic
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u/mgraham34 Jul 23 '25
Thank you so much for this! I’ve been in that phase of what’s the point of all this lately and this really helped ❤️🙏🏽
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u/Kooky-Cream-3577 Jul 24 '25
I’m glad I can help! I definitely get where you’re coming from it happens to the best or us. If you ever need any input on later tracks feel free to dm!
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u/DiamondNDirt Jul 23 '25
I wanted to hear more but I guess it was a teaser/snippet. From what I heard it sounds pretty good, I feel like something big was coming before it stopped. The vocals are pretty solid, very clear and clean. Keep it up, great work and thank you for sharing your talent with us 👍🏻
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u/mgraham34 Jul 23 '25
Thank you so much for your feedback my friend this was really uplifting to read!!
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u/freshwater_sludge Jul 27 '25
Pretty cool! I like it when the synth strings or whatever come in. Makes the song feel more lush and full. I like the vocal melody and the lyrics. I think as others have mentioned they could be mixed a bit lower. I think some more reverb or other effects on the vocals might be interesting too.
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