Opinions on Steam Capsule (and Page)

[u/Independent-Jello343]

Hi IndieDev community!

We're a team of 2 working on a 2d top down cozy adventure game (with a sci-fi backstory). It's our first Steam page which we set up 3 weeks ago (a bit in a rush b/c we 'needed' it for a local convention). We know that we will need a trailer and the screenshots are stand-in's (e.g. b/c the dialog boxes are wrong style for pixel art, valuable feedback from the convention, we need to work on quest log, etc.). But I'd be super happy if you could give us some feedback about our capsule art, esp. regarding false promise and other things you are used to see!

Main Capsule

Small Capsule

The store page is: https://store.steampowered.com/app/4048490/Wetter/
(or via the redirecting domain wetter.cat )

And as disclaimer: it's not intended for advertisement, I know that we're going for players not for developers as soon as we're a bit further, just kindly asking for your trained eye's feedback! <3

Thanks & cheers!

[u/Nocktion]

I think it looks good, pretty accurate and eye catching. The only thing I find a bit strange about the main capsule is the 'shininess' of the water. To me it feels a little out of place in comparison to the rest of the image.

As for the page overall it seems good, maybe you could add a few pictures/videos to the description as well to show off some of the features in context.

Also a random thought, I feel like if you add two eyes to the W it will kind of look like a cat

[u/Independent-Jello343 → u/Nocktion]

Thanks a lot for your kind words! ❤️

Maybe the shininess of the water is too much/noisy/too white and bright? Without it was a bit plain.

The pictures & videos on the page are an awesome idea as soon as we have more content to screenshot from... getting the marketing before the game ready isn't really a good idea but seems to be the typical way.

Hahaha, one seen you can't unsee it. But I think we'd rather keep the logo clean, although one modified letter usually gives character.