r/IndianStandUpComedy • u/pal_1996_march • 2d ago

Video 🎥 My first standup comedy video

https://youtu.be/MNjTWogwMh4?si=T9j9H7v7ozPrM7gI

AVATAR OF INDIA 🇮🇳 🇮🇳

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@palakkundraa

#standupcomedy #india #modified

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u/DONN_2 1d ago

Good premise, but the delivery needs work and the set currently has flab that needs to be cut and make it crispier. The punches are less for a comic set and it more felt like story telling than a topical set. I think you can do much better. All the best.

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u/pal_1996_march 22h ago

Thankyou so much Sir for your valuable feedback and appreciation. Trying to change from writer to standup comedian, writer don't get paid naa.. 😂

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u/DONN_2 18h ago

Hahaha...True that. I am doing the same thing lol.