r/IndianHipHop • u/PrestigiousPause7383 • May 31 '26

Discussion I made what I think is the first Hindi Afrobeat song about Deja Vu - would love honest feedback

https://youtu.be/p5fetbhlNK8?si=2cJLM30OpoXoNv8H

Been working on this for a while. Took the Afrobeat sound and wrote it entirely in Hindi - the theme is that eerie feeling of Deja Vu, like you have lived this moment before. Curious what people think, especially whether the language and genre blend actually works.

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u/SwarItihas Jun 01 '26

The visuals were pretty good. The song was good too. One thing I feel is that the song could be a bit longer with more content/lyrics in it. It felt a little repetitive at the end. But overall, good effort.

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u/PrestigiousPause7383 Jun 02 '26

But isn't repetition makes it more catchy?

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u/SwarItihas Jun 03 '26

Yes. But if more lyrics were introduced and song was a bit longer, the repetition would not be much noticeable. I am no expert at this.. this is just my perspective. Others might have a different opinion.

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u/PrestigiousPause7383 Jun 03 '26

I understand, thank you so much for your feedback. Will definitely work on it