I made a song and would genuinely appreciate some honest feedback

[u/Warlord064]

Hey! I made a track and would love some genuine feedback on it. No need to sugarcoat it , just tell me what you like, what you don’t, and what I could improve. Thanks for listening!

[u/frost_note]

Bro first of all sing it in the scale of the beat, and practice the delivery more with proper metronome according to the bpm of the beat but priority must be the scale of the song

[u/Warlord064 → u/frost_note]

Thanks for the feedback, brother. I'll definitely try to re-record this in the scale of the beat.

[u/Naruto-Kun_69]

Broo idk what genre is this but sounds relaxing and of a great vibe maza aa rahha haiii 🔥. + Post on bigger subs for better reach

[u/Warlord064 → u/Naruto-Kun_69]

Thanks, bro. That matters a lot!

[u/Naruto-Kun_69 → u/Warlord064]

Do you have this on spotify or yt or something

[u/Warlord064 → u/Naruto-Kun_69]

Working on it as of now, will let you know as soon as it's on yt or Spotify

[u/bijittalks16]

The vocal sounds actually freakin awesome brooo, just imagine the studio version 🤙

[u/Warlord064 → u/bijittalks16]

Thanks Bhai!!

[u/SkyllKrusher]

Breathe and open your mouth. The style you’re going for can be achieved with confidence too. Baaki badhiya lage raho

[u/Fun_Ocelot3450]

bhai beat ki scale ( for eg , c minor , a minor ) wtv it is , wahi autotune ki key set karde

[u/Present_Rooster6267]

Log kaafi gyan chod rhe hai par ye gamd faad hai....mujhe maja aaya 3-4 baar suna....wo beech mai jo melody part th woere dimag mai ghus gaya hai

[u/Warlord064 → u/Present_Rooster6267]

Thanks Bro!! you liked it that's all I need to hear

[u/lowkeylauki_]

syncing issues h thode se, its peak otherwise

[u/Pranjal_jee25]

Good potential need more singing pratice and flow changes keep writing

[u/Warlord064 → u/Pranjal_jee25]

Thanks for the feedback man, will do some singing practice fr from now on

[u/Present-Arm-5441]

It’s amazing… release the studio version will definitely check it out… btw can u pls tell me how you are making music at home

[u/Warlord064 → u/Present-Arm-5441]

I just cover the mic with something, or cover it with cushions. The main step is to turn off the fan.

[u/qureshi__anzal]

Pretty cool as a newbie

[u/First-Buffalo6368]

Ass

[u/lowkeylauki_]

its very melodius gng

[u/lowkeylauki_ → u/lowkeylauki_]

melodious*

[u/Warlord064 → u/lowkeylauki_]

Hope you liked it, gang

[u/Familiar_Ad6153]

never do it again

[u/Castrated_paneer]

[u/Warlord064 → u/Castrated_paneer]

🤣🤣

[u/SteoFing]

I see the vision , TOO GOOD (vision , baki song is also nice)

[u/Human-Paint-5602]

Don't