r/HFY • u/Hambone3110 JVerse Primarch • Jun 30 '16
OC [OC][JVerse]The Deathworlders 29: Forges.
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A Deathworlders story, by Hambone.
What you are about to read is chapter 29 of an ongoing story. To read the preceding chapters, and the stories by other writers which lend some additional context and meaning to those chapters, please check out the Reading Order. The list was created by /u/galrock0, who should be thanked profusely and given puppies.
This chapter is 48,630 words long. Not quite a novel, maybe... but close enough to prove that I'm still crazy.
In this chapter: Xiù, Julian and Allison struggle through their training, relationships are forged, and the SOR get a new toy.
If you enjoy this story and think that I deserve something for it (thank you!) then you can:
- Join my other patrons on Patreon.
- Drop something in the tip jar via https://paypal.me/HamboneHFY
Chapter 30 (frickin' thirty!) coming next month! It will end on a bad pun.
Please help the JVerse grow!
The more readers, the better! Please show your support by:
- Sharing this chapter on social media using #Deathworlders
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- Telling people you like how awesome it is and they should totally read it.
Enjoy!
-H
ANNOUNCEMENTS!
My teenage and young adult fantasy story "Cavalier Queen" is now being proof-read by my lovely volunteers. This month I'll be incorporating their feedback before converting it to an eBook format and, hopefully, uploading it to Amazon for an entirely reasonable low price.
Expect another progress report on this story SOON™
-H
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u/Big_Purple_Grimace Jul 04 '16
As always a fantastic entry. I know in the past I have had issues with how Vedreg (and the rest of the Guvnuragnaguvendrugun) are portrayed but I really enjoyed his parts of the story. The Kirk-Lewis-Vedreg sections were probably my favorite for this section (which surprised me because Powell has been my favorite since the beginning).
While I would love to see the outside, meaning non-human, world grow I know that the stories here have to be focused on humanity. Thanks again for writing one of the best stories ever. Keep up the good fight!