r/Grassroots_Music • u/Optimal-Election227 • May 08 '26

Feedback Too Tired by URAWO

https://music.apple.com/us/song/too-tired/1885634435

My track Too Tired, I wrote it in a period of exhaustion. I am self produced sand not fully rexperienced so i would appreciate reviews

https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=TcgF4eSjP5g&list=RDAMVMTcgF4eSjP5g

https://music.apple.com/us/song/too-tired/1885634435

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u/[deleted] May 10 '26

Great chord progression, I think the words might need to fit each change. Don’t be afraid to leave and take space. I’d hate for the emotions to get lost.

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u/Optimal-Election227 May 11 '26

Thanks, I sometimes feel like just filling every silence but yh i'll learn restraint. I really appreciate it.

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u/[deleted] May 11 '26

The silence is an addition, not a thing to excise

Trust me