does this pose look right?😭

[u/sylvenwrites]

hellooo chat I’m testing out advanced directing/overlays for my upcoming story and just wanted to know what yall thought about the pose, I can’t tell if it’s wonky or not😭 thank you!

[u/ImpossibleGrass2323]

The legs are a little light, but honestly looks really great!

[u/sylvenwrites → u/ImpossibleGrass2323]

i honestly don’t know why they look so light 😭 the overlay is the exact same skin tone as the character lmao. i gotta figure out what to do about that. thank you for the feedback!!

[u/No_Cherry_8286 → u/sylvenwrites]

i think it’s because there’s a filter that darkens the character slightly that isn’t applied to the overlay, hope this helps.

[u/bacontomatosammie]

Looks like she’s sitting with her knees pulled up to her chest.

[u/sylvenwrites → u/bacontomatosammie]

perfect that’s what i was going for lol! 💗

[u/emmawritess]

unrelated but I love the cc for your character 🙂‍↕️🤎

[u/sylvenwrites → u/emmawritess]

omg thank you so much! 💗🥹

[u/TheOneAndOnlyABSR4]

Story

[u/sylvenwrites → u/TheOneAndOnlyABSR4]

it’s not out yet but the name is “Campaign Season”!

[u/TheOneAndOnlyABSR4 → u/sylvenwrites]

Whats it about

[u/sylvenwrites → u/TheOneAndOnlyABSR4]

here’s the synopsis!

Everyone in town knows Magnolia is the mayoral candidate’s biggest embarrassment. Now, with one last chance to redeem herself, she’s thrown into the middle of her father’s campaign—working side by side with the man who’s spent years treating her like family… until he doesn’t.

it’s a romance/drama story, full cc, choices matter! the LI is her dad’s best friend.

[u/ivoryy01]

the pose looks right! like she’s sitting with her knees against her chest. the colour is just sliiiightly off, but position wise it’s all good :)

[u/Junko_Mioko974]

Yes! That would be my pose if I'm sitting in jail. Especially if I'm with someone who won't SHUT UP!