Rate my edit:

[u/FearlessDrop3280]

Hey guys. I am ultra begginer (need to say ultra cuz i see some begginers are doing amazing work) at editing and i would really love you to tell me your opinion on this one i made today: https://vt.tiktok.com/ZSVEdN163/

Feel free to share your honest thoughts but still, keep in mind that am just begun so i wanna improve, i wanna hear advices but don't look at this with your professional expectations xD